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chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
edited January 2012 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
and the beautiful torn thorn
the split in half
of silver
the sliver for each in two
and a kiss stings
and a kiss rots of honey, smells of alfalfa and dew fresh cut
and the old house still has a day dreaming as still as a day dream
from an ill child
wrought iron would be the gate
and when opened invited in
all in sin
walls bleed
walls cry
the floor well-used
the walking is heard in self and in the mutilation of
this every candle a going in the night
and the blend of this light glow down the hall
old records spin
sometimes more cobwebs
ah, its ok just walk by
and the music still goes
fills the house with a calling
this is a breathing
chairs, seats, sofas, parlor the lounge
the hanging of the old woman
and you can hear screams, uh, its more comfortable outside in the grass
nighttime, not the best
but the owls and they do have answers of their own to the mice
and the sunlight through the fog
they do run together, ya know, the sunlight to the fog
of the sky
you can't bring down wet, you cannot
and in brick, and in stone,
old oak walnut
wood work
{would work}
this the carved heart in which
how can I , if I could, love thee
take it from me'
turns away
recoiling against the moon
shining through and shining through
and all you wanna do
is waiting for you
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."

Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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    Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    this has an "old world" feeling to it, as always brother you nailed it again I like it !

    Godfather.
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    chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    Godfather,
    thank you kindly, Sir. writing amazing me. it takes over lives, a person's ownness becomes in search of something greater than anything else, all feelings struggling to climb higher into one's centered or uncentered self. either way you better hang the fuck on. it is a brutal life in climbing as blind as a cave
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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    Chad,
    I fucking love you brother.
    I knew it all along, see?
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    rollingsrollings unknown Posts: 7,124
    That IS very very good
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    mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    wow
    fucking WOW
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
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    chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    Chad,
    I fucking love you brother.
    thank you for your powerful love and strength, Sir
    Rollings wrote:
    That IS very very good
    thank you

    wow
    fucking WOW
    and thank you
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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    beautiful!
    Into the Wild Things
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    pepperpepper Posts: 155
    So much in this.... every time I read it something else. Brilliant!
    Pepper- I am faith without religion, without bruised knees and pleas for forgiveness...
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    JonnyPistachioJonnyPistachio Florida Posts: 10,217
    Awesome Chadwick.
    Pick up my debut novel here on amazon: Jonny Bails Floatin (in paperback) (also available on Kindle for $2.99)
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