Angel

Byrnzie
Byrnzie Posts: 21,037
edited April 2012 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
A spark came knocked me off my feet
Out of the blue
Through wires
Images
Sounds and words,
Trudging through a day
A year
And another day
I was cushioned by the spectacle of it all
Surrendered at an altar of nothingness

Shattering the rivers black mirror
I awoke, yielding
Swallowed by a wave of something bigger
With just her face to guide me

Who is this angel with eyes of violet?

I will follow her star through night and day
As it flickers out of reach
A million human dramas distant
And an ocean at my feet

Through glass and wires she came
A spark, an angel, a flame

[2008]
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  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    keep 'em coming.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • rollings
    rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
    This is really nice
  • tremors
    tremors Posts: 8,051
    Good shit Byrnzie - all of them
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • DinghyDog
    DinghyDog Posts: 587
    edited October 2012
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    Post edited by DinghyDog on
  • pandora
    pandora Posts: 21,855
    Byrnzie wrote:
    A spark came knocked me off my feet
    Out of the blue
    Through wires
    Images
    Sounds and words,
    Trudging through a day
    A year
    And another day
    I was cushioned by the spectacle of it all
    Surrendered at an altar of nothingness

    Shattering the rivers black mirror
    I awoke, yielding
    Swallowed by a wave of something bigger
    With just her face to guide me

    Who is this angel with eyes of violet?

    I will follow her star through night and day
    As it flickers out of reach
    A million human dramas distant
    And an ocean at my feet

    Through glass and wires she came
    A spark, an angel, a flame

    [2008]
    lots of beautiful strong visuals and action ... electric!

    beautiful poem

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