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rollings
rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
edited May 2014 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
there were hummingbirds visiting flowers
inserting slowly long and black
showcased in oval humming red, they
carried woven baskets in their feet

who do you think should know
I never had to think
calling your name I ran and fell

I called your name running
and fell
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  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    ah.. ah..ahshit
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    that is funny.
    holy shit
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • mikalina
    mikalina Posts: 7,206
    edited March 2012
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    Post edited by mikalina_old on
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  • tremors
    tremors Posts: 8,051
    I never could stand the smell of that drink, after that
    Every time it catches me I shudder
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

    lettherecordsplay1x.gif?t=1377796878
  • rollings
    rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
    I

    took a drive today
  • rollings
    rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
    acrossssSsssshittt wrote:
    ah.. ah..ahshit

    God bless you
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    Rollings wrote:
    acrossssSsssshittt wrote:
    ah.. ah..ahshit

    God bless you

    and I bless Him
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    step back and leave me the fuck alone
    theres nothing that youre saying
    that moves you beyond the circle
    youre digging a hole with
    empty in the middle
    deep as your previous silence
    so unless you want to be buried
    you best step back
    and leave me the fuck alone
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    catefrances wrote:
    step back and leave me the fuck alone
    theres nothing that youre saying
    that moves you beyond the circle
    youre digging a hole with
    empty in the middle
    deep as your previous silence
    so unless you want to be buried
    you best step back
    and leave me the fuck alone
    nicely done, catefrances

    i enjoy your writings even moreso when you are on @ whomever or whatever and what have you.

    badass :thumbup:
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • rollings
    rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
    I'm no more now
    than what it ever was
    to you does this flow?
    stopping
    I, for one, can
    with our being there
    hope
    we and this should be there

    together for the first time

    when the opening band comes on
    and the bell to our right
    shines with us on
  • brianlux
    brianlux Moving through All Kinds of Terrain. Posts: 43,664
    Rollings wrote:
    I'm no more now
    than what it ever was
    to you does this flow?
    stopping
    I, for one, can
    with our being there
    hope
    we and this should be there

    together for the first time

    when the opening band comes on
    and the bell to our right
    shines with us on

    Nice, your on a roll
    Rollings,
    There, where we've all been
    Or not, but still I
    Get the feeling that,
    Yeah, well
    I think so!
    "It's a sad and beautiful world"
    -Roberto Benigni

  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    poem: do

    do you have
    and for nothing found
    you have probably not ever been
    nowhere

    have you ever and walls went away?
    have your floors
    all the same
    all your steps the same
    all the tiles across the way are twins
    this glass dome shares with you

    i hand you apples and pears
    and you will rain
    and you will build for me
    in return for worms
    one and two and three and four

    this will help with memory
    and reminding you
    of your mother's favorite songs
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • tremors
    tremors Posts: 8,051
    chadwick wrote:
    poem: do

    do you have
    and for nothing found
    you have probably not ever been
    nowhere

    have you ever and walls went away?
    have your floors
    all the same
    all your steps the same
    all the tiles across the way are twins
    this glass dome shares with you

    i hand you apples and pears
    and you will rain
    and you will build for me
    in return for worms
    one and two and three and four

    this will help with memory
    and reminding you
    of your mother's favorite songs


    Awesome Chadwick, awesome
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

    lettherecordsplay1x.gif?t=1377796878
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    there is no beginning approaching
    there is memory of ending faded
    barely a spirit in time
    the keeper awaits with dustings
    and the happenings

    in this kingdom within
    blood is stalled
    nailed to the wall
    no flow goes racing through
    tight veins in attendance
    arteries tell tales of never concluding war drums on the beat

    chest bone wraps eternity in spilled breath
    the over indulgence of living by words of prophets
    where anciet glory fills goblets of rust and holes
    with writings and sand as one's soul-print
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • rollings
    rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
    chadwick wrote:
    there is no beginning approaching
    there is memory of ending faded
    barely a spirit in time
    the keeper awaits with dustings
    and the happenings

    in this kingdom within
    blood is stalled
    nailed to the wall
    no flow goes racing through
    tight veins in attendance
    arteries tell tales of never concluding war drums on the beat

    chest bone wraps eternity in spilled breath
    the over indulgence of living by words of prophets
    where anciet glory fills goblets of rust and holes
    with writings and sand as one's soul-print

    that's
  • mysticweed
    mysticweed Posts: 3,710
    so
    will it be
    the aneous
    that keeps us a
    round
    and left
    a
    lone?

    the lilting, luring
    a
    neous?
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • Chip McFlennigan
    Chip McFlennigan Posts: 1,162
    edited May 2012
    .........
    Post edited by Chip McFlennigan on
    I knew it all along, see?
  • supersonicyears
    supersonicyears Posts: 2,619
    Buy the one that fits knowing it only fits because you can buy it.
    "In the age of darkness
    want to be enlightened"
  • Chip McFlennigan
    Chip McFlennigan Posts: 1,162
    edited May 2012
    .........
    Post edited by Chip McFlennigan on
    I knew it all along, see?
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    johnny america wrote:
    if a flock of bluebirds goes gray with age
    and their wings have decayed to the point
    they can no longer migrate away

    if the songs i love go forgotten

    if the desert under the unforgiving sun finally melts into a solid glass ground and i can clearly see hell
    and the demons and devils calling me down

    if the scar tissue is all we have to wipe away our tears

    if our basements flood in unison

    if we never make it up

    if america gives way to china
    if china gives way to india
    if india gives way to another world

    if my arms are too weak to keep working

    if my heart wants to walk but my legs are too old

    if my answering machine is the last time i ever hear your voice

    if, if, if . . .
    when?

    i will always miss you

    I like this ^^^ one.
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