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chadwick
chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
edited September 2011 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
pleased very much with writing. thank you.
roses do not hold her attention as well
but her neck smells of them.
she says she's writing a song for me
gots her piano fired up somewhere else

out in the field a cow gave birth
looking at legs standing for the first time
through the window pretty amazing

why would they keep a dead calf under the dining room table?
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • tremors
    tremors Posts: 8,051
    This is pure genius. You have the gift of making me grin from ear to ear Chadwick
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  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    tremors wrote:
    This is pure genius. You have the gift of making me grin from ear to ear Chadwick
    thank you, Sir
    genius? probably not

    it's a sample of sorts to a quite lengthy little number i just wrote that made me grin and do a somersault here in my chair. quite nice i think. :wtf: odd and dark as shit with hints of beauty here and there
    pretty much all true events as well, which makes things really fucked up
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • mysticweed
    mysticweed Posts: 3,710
    chadwick wrote:
    tremors wrote:
    This is pure genius. You have the gift of making me grin from ear to ear Chadwick
    thank you, Sir
    genius? probably not

    it's a sample of sorts to a quite lengthy little number i just wrote that made me grin and do a somersault here in my chair. quite nice i think. :wtf: odd and dark as shit with hints of beauty here and there
    pretty much all true events as well, which makes things really fucked up

    damn fine writing there wickweed
    "odd and dark as shit with hints of beauty here and there"
    damn fine writing
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • tremors
    tremors Posts: 8,051
    chadwick wrote:
    tremors wrote:
    This is pure genius. You have the gift of making me grin from ear to ear Chadwick
    thank you, Sir
    genius? probably not

    it's a sample of sorts to a quite lengthy little number i just wrote that made me grin and do a somersault here in my chair. quite nice i think. :wtf: odd and dark as shit with hints of beauty here and there
    pretty much all true events as well, which makes things really fucked up


    That sounds really good. I know you can't always share stuff with us here - for publication reasons etc - but anything you do share - I will lap it up!

    I've realised that when I read things on the board, especially the poetry, I naturally give them in my head my own accent (English), not an American accent - and that sometimes changes things - I think if you were to read me one of your poems, it would probably be a completely different thing from what I read in them! That is the beauty of the written word I guess. You are naturally funny though - eloquent and funny - a good combination!
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  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    tremors you amaze me
    you're all over it
    thank you for you, buddy
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • BinauralJam
    BinauralJam Posts: 14,158
    odd and dark as shit with hints of beauty here and there
    pretty much all true events as well

    u r a emotional genuis
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    I would like to crawl inside a hole in the wall and write on the pipes
    I would like to tell the story
    I would like to rip apart the madnesss from where it started, flowed, and ended
    I would like for blackness
    from now on I would like for no light
    from now on
    a minute peephole
    opening to the world out
    mine on the reverse, the underside of the cabinet
    if it were grass or roots
    or the forest floor
    pointing in the direction of up or north, which have you
    the nails in the fence post rubbed raw against my thighs
    the barb wired
    housing a corralled number of beasts
    I would look out as a witness to season
    chaotic twists
    the sun and moon drunk on wine or rye
    high on grass
    the winter and then summer
    winter and then winter again
    spring then fall
    summer would be happliy dosing under an apple tree
    reading Shakespeare, holding a glass of tea
    wildflowers bursting at her supple breasts
    the seasons the four women cold and hot
    sundown
    me inside my wall
    climbing between support beams like a spider
    excited to the fly thrilled to the blood suck
    all their breasts would sweat
    their perfume riddled my modest home
    all i could do was be erect
    in my peephole shriveled
    tried to disappear run away
    I followed them each step
    until the doorbell rang
    and the parcel delivery service department associate
    dropped off a box full of psychadelic drugs, pills
    and several varieties of dildos and vibrators
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • tremors
    tremors Posts: 8,051
    he's on fire
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