Onto you it is written

Godfather.
Godfather. Posts: 12,504
edited June 2011 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Onto you it is written
to fly on the wings of the storm
to bring down the thunder
from the lightining in the sky
onto you it is written
to keep the dreanm alive

Tides of war that steal the night
bring a hammer to the ground
in a land that has no time
in the imagination's of the lost and found
we stand screaming in the night.

Blood shot eye's that look to the sky's
pray beyond the storm
to keep the dream alive
and to ride the on wings of Icarus
if only for awhile.

Onto you it is wriien
to keep the dream alive.

Godfather.
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  • StillHere
    StillHere Posts: 7,795
    :thumbup:
    peace,
    jo

    http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
    "How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
    "Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    StillHere wrote:
    :thumbup:

    ;) thanks jo !
  • mikalina
    mikalina Posts: 7,206
    Mr. GF - you are on a roll .... That first paragraph is beautiful... Thank you for sharing :thumbup:
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  • mikalina
    mikalina Posts: 7,206
    onto you it is written
    to keep the dream alive.... Love it.
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  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    Godfather. wrote:

    Tides of war that steal the night
    bring a hammer to the ground
    in a land that has no time
    in the imagination's of the lost and found
    we stand screaming in the night.

    Blood shot eye's that look to the sky's
    ...
    Godfather.

    strong!

    very strong
  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    wow you guy's thanks ! I wrote this waiting for a military audit at work.....nooooo fun!

    Godfather.
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    Godfather. wrote:
    wow you guy's thanks ! I wrote this waiting for a military audit at work.....nooooo fun!

    Godfather.


    military audit?? that sounds tough! where in Godfather's name do you work?
  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    acrosssSssshit wrote:
    Godfather. wrote:
    wow you guy's thanks ! I wrote this waiting for a military audit at work.....nooooo fun!

    Godfather.


    military audit?? that sounds tough! where in Godfather's name do you work?

    a aerospace company. :shh: ..... :lol:

    Godfather.
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    yeah I think I knew... and that is fuckin cool.. and the military audits probably make a man out of you... I could do with such an audit or two .. ha!
  • rollings
    rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
    Holy Mackerel!
  • PilateOfTheStorm
    PilateOfTheStorm Posts: 4,319
    pray beyond the storm
    to keep the dream alive

    majestic.

    this is one of those poems, that you read.
    and read. and read again.
    the imagery sends shivers down your spine
    and the epic words take you to

    a land that has no time
    in the imagination's of the lost and found

    wow.

    one of my favourites of yours Godfather. :clap:
  • StillHere
    StillHere Posts: 7,795
    just getting better with age Godfather

    like a fine wine

    finally able to breathe
    peace,
    jo

    http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
    "How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
    "Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
  • mysticweed
    mysticweed Posts: 3,710
    yeah, jeff
    what they said

    i'll just add
    DA-DAMN
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • pepper
    pepper Posts: 155
    There is no line or verse that does it for me here... here, it is a poem in it's etirety! Thanks Godfather.
    Pepper- I am faith without religion, without bruised knees and pleas for forgiveness...
  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    man...thank you everybody very much !

    Godfather.

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