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rollings
rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
edited June 2011 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Nothing~~

alarmed I am without
if I have not
I would want not
but so much more
than I could ever live
with
out

seekng just this
much
one space of this time
all that's behind will never be again
alll that's ahead always shall

For now it all just is
for now you and I are
alone
forever working out the end
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  • PilateOfTheStorm
    PilateOfTheStorm Posts: 4,319
    :clap:
    this is great
    unusual structure and metre, irregular but it's great

    the first verse, really striking
  • PearlOfAGirl
    PearlOfAGirl Posts: 15,993
    Love these two lines...
    all that's behind will never be again
    alll that's ahead always shall

    Wish you were here...
    ♥~RIP Dad
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    Half Full wrote:
    Nothing~~

    alarmed I am without

    everything

    alarmed are you with ?
  • tremors
    tremors Posts: 8,051
    PilateOfTheStorm wrote:
    :clap:
    this is great
    unusual structure and metre, irregular but it's great

    the first verse, really striking

    Yes, I agree

    brilliant, again Half Full
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • zarocat
    zarocat Posts: 1,901
    Amazing! My thoughts exactly as I am experiencing myself experiencing.
    1996: Toronto
    1998: Barrie
    2000: Montreal, Toronto, Auburn Hills
    2003: Cleveland, Buffalo, Toronto, Montreal
    2004: Boston X2, Grand Rapids
    2005: Kitchener, London, Hamilton, Montreal, Ottawa, Toronto
    2006: Toronto X2
    2009: Toronto
    2011: PJ20, Montreal, Toronto X2, Hamilton
    2012: Manchester X2, Amsterdam X2, Prague, Berlin X2, Philadelphia, Missoula
    2013: Pittsburg, Buffalo
    2014: Milan, Trieste, Vienna, Berlin, Stockholm, Oslo, Detroit
    2016: Ottawa, Toronto X2
    2018: Padova, Rome, Prague, Krakow, Berlin, Barcelona
    2022: Ottawa, Hamilton, Toronto
    2023: Chicago X2
    2024: New York X2
  • mysticweed
    mysticweed Posts: 3,710
    Half Full wrote:
    Nothing~~

    alarmed I am without
    if I have not
    I would want not
    but so much more
    than I could ever live
    with
    out

    seekng just this
    much
    one space of this time
    all that's behind will never be again
    alll that's ahead always shall

    For now it all just is
    for now you and I are
    alone
    forever working out the end

    oh
    my sister in ed-jam . . .

    this is fucking righteous
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • rollings
    rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
    Thank you is an understatement,
    but I do mean, wow, thank you.
  • rollings
    rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
    acrosssSssshit wrote:
    Half Full wrote:
    Nothing~~

    alarmed I am without

    everything

    alarmed are you with ?

    Yes. Sometimes I am
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    Half Full wrote:

    if I have not
    I would want not
    but so much more

    have you not

    that much more?
  • rollings
    rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
    acrosssSssshit wrote:
    Half Full wrote:

    if I have not
    I would want not
    but so much more

    have you not

    that much more?

    have not yet, I don't think
    although think more I do
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    Half Full wrote:
    acrosssSssshit wrote:
    Half Full wrote:

    if I have not
    I would want not
    but so much more

    have you not

    that much more?

    have not yet, I don't think
    although think more I do

    have you not if you don't think

    but yes.. if you think you have therefore not
  • rollings
    rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
    acrosssSssshit wrote:
    Half Full wrote:
    acrosssSssshit wrote:
    have you not

    that much more?

    have not yet, I don't think
    although think more I do

    have you not if you don't think

    but yes.. if you think you have therefore not

    you can't know with
    unless you know without
    the negation of which
    brings realization, manifestation
    the throwing out of which
    brings what is
    brings
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    Half Full wrote:
    acrosssSssshit wrote:
    Half Full wrote:
    have not yet, I don't think
    although think more I do

    have you not if you don't think

    but yes.. if you think you have therefore not

    you can't know with
    unless you know without
    the negation of which
    brings realization, manifestation
    the throwing out of which
    brings what is
    brings

    fuck me I

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