Manifest

rollings
rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
edited May 2011 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Filling in forever
What's in between
and what is beautiful

Can I sleep here
Can I entwine myself into
So delicate enough, I don't know, can we hold it

Because if I knew
Is what I think I'd say to you
I'd hold it close and far enough for you to
hold me too



I'm waiting for the time and place where
above our arms escapes
the look-out below
A nightfall of flowers stretch around the curve where we can't see
but arrive

In my hair is weeping
The willow seeds you've planted
stay with me today

Stay

Stay long into those nightfalls
My God, we do, ya know it?
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  • TK15685
    TK15685 Posts: 39
    Beautiful.
  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    beautiful and well written Half Full.

    Godfather.
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    Half Full wrote:
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Because if I knew
    Is what I think I'd say to you
    I'd hold it close and far enough for you to
    hold me too


    so.. pretty
  • rollings
    rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
    Thank ya'll(s)
  • tremors
    tremors Posts: 8,051
    Have read this a few times now, and it has affected me differently each time. Each time, carries my mind places

    I love this part particularly

    "I'm waiting for the time and place where
    above our arms escapes
    the look-out below
    A nightfall of flowers stretch around the curve where we can't see
    but arrive"
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • rollings
    rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
    tremors wrote:
    Have read this a few times now, and it has affected me differently each time. Each time, carries my mind places

    I love this part particularly

    "I'm waiting for the time and place where
    above our arms escapes
    the look-out below
    A nightfall of flowers stretch around the curve where we can't see
    but arrive"

    Tremors,

    Thank you always for your kind comments, and that you do
  • PilateOfTheStorm
    PilateOfTheStorm Posts: 4,319
    this is stunning
    A nightfall of flowers stretch around the curve where we can't see
    but arrive

    that line in particular, just beautiful
    a nightfall of flowers...epic

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