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bright
billowy
low and lazy
balls of cotton
plucking distance
gently drifting
seems quaint
picturesque
but the treeline parts
hanging heavy
truth revealed
not so sure
i want to be
herepeace,
jo
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StillHere wrote:bright
billowy
low and lazy
balls of cotton
plucking distance
gently drifting
seems quaint
picturesque
but the treeline parts
hanging heavy
truth revealed
not so sure
i want to be
here
She's back! Liked this - got me all dreamy and then brings you up short. Nice.
I will come back and ponder this later and try and write something of my own....Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
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StillHere wrote:bright
billowy
low and lazy
balls of cotton
plucking distance
gently drifting
seems quaint
picturesque
but the treeline parts
hanging heavy
truth revealed
not so sure
i want to be
here
thanks for your return!
lovely poem Jo
your imagery spot on
turns to a twist of concern
leaves me with a question for another day ....0 -
tremors wrote:StillHere wrote:bright
billowy
low and lazy
balls of cotton
plucking distance
gently drifting
seems quaint
picturesque
but the treeline parts
hanging heavy
truth revealed
not so sure
i want to be
here
She's back! Liked this - got me all dreamy and then brings you up short. Nice.
I will come back and ponder this later and try and write something of my own....peace,
jo
http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
"How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
"Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~0 -
StillHere wrote:bright
billowy
low and lazy
balls of cotton
plucking distance
gently drifting
seems quaint
picturesque
but the treeline parts
hanging heavy
truth revealed
not so sure
i want to be
here
Here is a place I know too well
Been lost here before
Got stuck here for days once
Never tread the same path twice they say
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tremors wrote:StillHere wrote:bright
billowy
low and lazy
balls of cotton
plucking distance
gently drifting
seems quaint
picturesque
but the treeline parts
hanging heavy
truth revealed
not so sure
i want to be
here
Here is a place I know too well
Been lost here before
Got stuck here for days once
Never tread the same path twice they say
But somehow, I always seem to end up herepeace,
jo
http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
"How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
"Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~0 -
evil lurks
in the hearts of men
they say
but i wonder
if
they know it's so?
turning beauty
into ashpeace,
jo
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"How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
"Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~0 -
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peace,
jo
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"How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
"Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~0 -
tremors wrote:StillHere wrote:evil lurks
in the hearts of men
they say
but i wonder
if
they know it's so?
turning beauty
into ash
wow
I like!
thanks tre..
think i'll stick around a whilepeace,
jo
http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
"How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
"Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~0 -
StillHere wrote:evil lurks
in the hearts of men
they say
but i wonder
if
they know it's so?
turning beauty
into ash
As a youth I never did believe in evil
Oh how little I knew
How I thought it was a concept
Outmoded and maligned
The human spirit, misunderstood
And now again today I no longer believe in evil
The child's spirit in us all, corrupted
That's all
And yet the years in between
I studied evil nightly
I felt its chill
Scraping down my back
As I found respite
In not one corner
Until I caught the essence of evil
Distilled, and pinned it down under glass
It was something, plus intelligence
I remember that much only
How evil needs intelligence
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tremors wrote:StillHere wrote:evil lurks
in the hearts of men
they say
but i wonder
if
they know it's so?
turning beauty
into ash
As a youth I never did believe in evil
Oh how little I knew
How I thought it was a concept
Outmoded and maligned
The human spirit, misunderstood
And now again today I no longer believe in evil
The child's spirit in us all, corrupted
That's all
And yet the years in between
I studied evil nightly
I felt its chill
Scraping down my back
As I found respite
In not one corner
Until I caught the essence of evil
Distilled, and pinned it down under glass
It was something, plus intelligence
I remember that much only
How evil needs intelligence
To be the force it is
I believe in evil ...
I have seen it in eyes0 -
pandora wrote:tremors wrote:StillHere wrote:evil lurks
in the hearts of men
they say
but i wonder
if
they know it's so?
turning beauty
into ash
As a youth I never did believe in evil
Oh how little I knew
How I thought it was a concept
Outmoded and maligned
The human spirit, misunderstood
And now again today I no longer believe in evil
The child's spirit in us all, corrupted
That's all
And yet the years in between
I studied evil nightly
I felt its chill
Scraping down my back
As I found respite
In not one corner
Until I caught the essence of evil
Distilled, and pinned it down under glass
It was something, plus intelligence
I remember that much only
How evil needs intelligence
To be the force it is
I believe in evil ...
I have seen it in eyes
At certain times I have felt a palpable evil all around me - a dark dark force, horrible beyond imaginings - even without a person to claim it - a force shivering down my spine, running round my brain. To be honest, my encounters with pure evil are probably at the heart of my problems when I've been ill. Not pretty.Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
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tremors wrote:pandora wrote:tremors wrote:
As a youth I never did believe in evil
Oh how little I knew
How I thought it was a concept
Outmoded and maligned
The human spirit, misunderstood
And now again today I no longer believe in evil
The child's spirit in us all, corrupted
That's all
And yet the years in between
I studied evil nightly
I felt its chill
Scraping down my back
As I found respite
In not one corner
Until I caught the essence of evil
Distilled, and pinned it down under glass
It was something, plus intelligence
I remember that much only
How evil needs intelligence
To be the force it is
I believe in evil ...
I have seen it in eyes
At certain times I have felt a palpable evil all around me - a dark dark force, horrible beyond imaginings - even without a person to claim it - a force shivering down my spine, running round my brain. To be honest, my encounters with pure evil are probably at the heart of my problems when I've been ill. Not pretty.
Evil waits for an opportunity ... it lurks, it is extremely powerful and addicting.
We might feel fragile but it can not 'become' us, we must choose to let it in
this a freedom of choice for most but not all ....
unfortunately evil can be learned too, long before the mind is conscious
and can understand or choose. This how it perpetuates .... by taking the innocent.0 -
pandora wrote:Evil waits for an opportunity ... it lurks, it is extremely powerful and addicting.
We might feel fragile but it can not 'become' us, we must choose to let it in
this a freedom of choice for most but not all ....
unfortunately evil can be learned too, long before the mind is conscious
and can understand or choose. This how it perpetuates .... by taking the innocent.
Profound words again Pandora.
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tremors wrote:pandora wrote:Evil waits for an opportunity ... it lurks, it is extremely powerful and addicting.
We might feel fragile but it can not 'become' us, we must choose to let it in
this a freedom of choice for most but not all ....
unfortunately evil can be learned too, long before the mind is conscious
and can understand or choose. This how it perpetuates .... by taking the innocent.
Profound words again Pandora.
Food for thought....
that was really good tremors
and yes ...innocent evil is the scariest kind
i too have felt the presence of true evil...and it scares the living beegeebus out of me
i think you'll both understand when i say that i can "feel" things that can't be seen or felt by other people ... sometimes...and usually those things are quite benign..even comfy. but in the presence of evil ...even though you want to look away..turn it off. ..try to tune it out..you know down in the deepest recesses of self..that you dare not ... even one split second. although i could never tell you what the face of evil looks like..there have been many many times when i wish i didn't know what it feels like....a heaviness pervasive in the air ... and a feeling of absolute terror and dread. i find amazing that most people in this world (at least as far as i know) are able to so blissfully ignore it. can't say i haven't wished to be among them.peace,
jo
http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
"How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
"Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~0 -
tremors wrote:
As a youth I never did believe in evil
Oh how little I knew
How I thought it was a concept
Outmoded and maligned
The human spirit, misunderstood
And now again today I no longer believe in evil
The child's spirit in us all, corrupted
That's all
And yet the years in between
I studied evil nightly
I felt its chill
Scraping down my back
As I found respite
In not one corner
Until I caught the essence of evil
Distilled, and pinned it down under glass
It was something, plus intelligence
I remember that much only
How evil needs intelligence
To be the force it is
that's great tremorsvery powerful, eerie almost
and Pandora - as usual your words are solid. you're spot on about so many things, very wiseI have also felt the power of evil and have seen it in others eyes.
Evil waits for an opportunity ... it lurks, it is extremely powerful and addicting.
We might feel fragile but it can not 'become' us, we must choose to let it in
this a freedom of choice for most but not all ....
unfortunately evil can be learned too, long before the mind is conscious
and can understand or choose. This how it perpetuates .... by taking the innocent.
"we might feel fragile but it can not 'become' us, we must choose to let it in
this is a freedom of choice for most but not all...."
so true0 -
StillHere wrote:tremors wrote:pandora wrote:Evil waits for an opportunity ... it lurks, it is extremely powerful and addicting.
We might feel fragile but it can not 'become' us, we must choose to let it in
this a freedom of choice for most but not all ....
unfortunately evil can be learned too, long before the mind is conscious
and can understand or choose. This how it perpetuates .... by taking the innocent.
Profound words again Pandora.
Food for thought....
that was really good tremors
and yes ...innocent evil is the scariest kind
i too have felt the presence of true evil...and it scares the living beegeebus out of me
i think you'll both understand when i say that i can "feel" things that can't be seen or felt by other people ... sometimes...and usually those things are quite benign..even comfy. but in the presence of evil ...even though you want to look away..turn it off. ..try to tune it out..you know down in the deepest recesses of self..that you dare not ... even one split second. although i could never tell you what the face of evil looks like..there have been many many times when i wish i didn't know what it feels like....a heaviness pervasive in the air ... and a feeling of absolute terror and dread. i find amazing that most people in this world (at least as far as i know) are able to so blissfully ignore it. can't say i haven't wished to be among them.
I have a clear memory of meeting evil in the eyes of another one of the first times when I was in my twenties.
I see it in my mind like it was yesterday.
We, JB and I, were at a mall in Milwaukee.
It was Christmastime. Santa was seeing a line of children.
We got into one of the clear glass elevators to go up ...it was close to Santa.
He helped a small girl, probably not yet 3- I still see her little red velvet dress and white tights,
helped her onto his lap and held her, touched her as he lifted her in a very wrong way.
Our eyes met in that instant .. his mouth curled ... he knew I knew
It was there in his eyes... pure evil... I felt it and it nearly knocked me over ... and then I almost got sick.
I knew then he had let evil in and he enjoyed it. Evil preys on others for its own satisfaction.
Your words Jo very much how I feel.
I must say the flip side is how strongly I feel love in the air.
The goodness and hope.
The feeling I get when looking in another's eyes and that I might not have
otherwise. It is very strong, the goodness.
I'll take the good with the bad because I know love will always overcome evil.
Maybe not here in this world but where I am going.0 -
electricxlovex wrote:tremors wrote:
As a youth I never did believe in evil
Oh how little I knew
How I thought it was a concept
Outmoded and maligned
The human spirit, misunderstood
And now again today I no longer believe in evil
The child's spirit in us all, corrupted
That's all
And yet the years in between
I studied evil nightly
I felt its chill
Scraping down my back
As I found respite
In not one corner
Until I caught the essence of evil
Distilled, and pinned it down under glass
It was something, plus intelligence
I remember that much only
How evil needs intelligence
To be the force it is
that's great tremorsvery powerful, eerie almost
and Pandora - as usual your words are solid. you're spot on about so many things, very wiseI have also felt the power of evil and have seen it in others eyes.
Evil waits for an opportunity ... it lurks, it is extremely powerful and addicting.
We might feel fragile but it can not 'become' us, we must choose to let it in
this a freedom of choice for most but not all ....
unfortunately evil can be learned too, long before the mind is conscious
and can understand or choose. This how it perpetuates .... by taking the innocent.
"we might feel fragile but it can not 'become' us, we must choose to let it in
this is a freedom of choice for most but not all...."
so truethanks!
Hope your Saturday is lovely!0
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