She's There

keyser_soze
keyser_soze London, England Posts: 205
edited April 2011 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
She told me while we were driving,
She wanted to take a break,
I thought we were trying to fix it,
She said she couldn't pretend.

I never pretended with her,
And its my fault,
She had to pretend with me.

I drove her home and went out drinking,
I think I was in shock,
I didn't feel it yet.
Yet.

She says she still loves me,
And will try to forgive,
But the pain increases,
With my realisation.

She is my home,
And I threw away the key.
I wait and hope,
that she'll give me a new one.

Each day crawls by and I think of her.
Constantly.

I close my eyes. she's there.
I open them. she's there.
I drink too much. She's there.
I curse my idiocy, foolishness and selfishness.

She's There.
www.facebook.com/PandoraApparel
Post edited by Unknown User on

Comments

  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    yeah I'd curse myself... I think... she's no longer there
  • zarocat
    zarocat Posts: 1,901
    keyser_soze, ever heard this song by Elliott Smith ?
    This piece you wrote reminded me of it ... :|
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GZ0Pvslqb_Y
    1996: Toronto
    1998: Barrie
    2000: Montreal, Toronto, Auburn Hills
    2003: Cleveland, Buffalo, Toronto, Montreal
    2004: Boston X2, Grand Rapids
    2005: Kitchener, London, Hamilton, Montreal, Ottawa, Toronto
    2006: Toronto X2
    2009: Toronto
    2011: PJ20, Montreal, Toronto X2, Hamilton
    2012: Manchester X2, Amsterdam X2, Prague, Berlin X2, Philadelphia, Missoula
    2013: Pittsburg, Buffalo
    2014: Milan, Trieste, Vienna, Berlin, Stockholm, Oslo, Detroit
    2016: Ottawa, Toronto X2
    2018: Padova, Rome, Prague, Krakow, Berlin, Barcelona
    2022: Ottawa, Hamilton, Toronto
    2023: Chicago X2
    2024: New York X2
  • pandora
    pandora Posts: 21,855
    keyser_soze wrote:
    She told me while we were driving,
    She wanted to take a break,
    I thought we were trying to fix it,
    She said she couldn't pretend.

    I never pretended with her,
    And its my fault,
    She had to pretend with me.

    I drove her home and went out drinking,
    I think I was in shock,
    I didn't feel it yet.
    Yet.

    She says she still loves me,
    And will try to forgive,
    But the pain increases,
    With my realisation.

    She is my home,
    And I threw away the key.
    I wait and hope,
    that she'll give me a new one.

    Each day crawls by and I think of her.
    Constantly.

    I close my eyes. she's there.
    I open them. she's there.
    I drink too much. She's there.
    I curse my idiocy, foolishness and selfishness.

    She's There.

    I'm sorry... :(
    I hope she has a brand new key for you

    Forgiveness, then time to trust again....
    Love is worth both
  • keyser_soze
    keyser_soze London, England Posts: 205
    zarocat wrote:
    keyser_soze, ever heard this song by Elliott Smith ?
    This piece you wrote reminded me of it ... :|
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GZ0Pvslqb_Y

    never heard this. I'll give it a listen. thanks for the heads up/
    www.facebook.com/PandoraApparel

Categories