do not enter

chadwick
chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
edited March 2011 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
left alone unless invited goes up
wrought iron goes up down the stakes in and around area and aerial

you can't come in and you are not welcome
ring the beeper
there is nothing sounding

on the edge of the world
my next fall will fade blank
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    I'd like to come in and throw myself off the edge of the world...the view's gotta be nice.. maybe not
  • PilateOfTheStorm
    PilateOfTheStorm Posts: 4,319
    acrosssSssshit wrote:
    I'd like to come in and throw myself off the edge of the world...the view's gotta be nice.. maybe not

    sometimes I wonder what that would feel like, just to jump off the edge of the world. Spin into the vast oblivion, with nothing holding me back.

    Maybe it feels like when you are half-asleep and your whole body kind of jerks and you can feel it but have no power over the movement of your limbs

    Or maybe not

    Love this one Chadwick
    great stuff :)
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    found my way
    one skelton key opens all the doors
    i do not know if a lifetime is long enough to pass through all doorways before me

    i will try
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • Chip McFlennigan
    Chip McFlennigan Posts: 1,162
    Chadimir the Mighty has returned!

    *Bows*
    I knew it all along, see?
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    i don't know about that mr. america
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • tremors
    tremors Posts: 8,051
    Good words Chad, as always. Good to see you!

    electricxlovex wrote:

    sometimes I wonder what that would feel like
    just to jump off the edge of the world
    Spin into the vast oblivion
    with nothing holding me back


    Sounds like the beginning of a great poem electricx! ;)
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