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Tell me
Which way to go
Tell me which way to look
Away or inside
Show me
Something from the deep
Pull up something that flashes
Makes me crack
A smile, or a heart string
Tell me
Why it's not what I wanted
Why I'm not what you wanted
Why I am what you wanted
Make me
Believe in something
For tonight
Something more solid
Than firefly light
Than candle wax
Than what we had before
From before
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Nice, very nicetremors wrote:Tell me
Which way to go
Tell me which way to look
Away or inside
Show me
Something from the deep
Pull up something that flashes
Makes me crack
A smile, or a heart string
Tell me
Why it's not what I wanted
Why I'm not what you wanted
Why I am what you wanted
Make me
Believe in something
For tonight
Something more solid
Than firefly light
Than candle wax
Than what we had before
From before
We knew better
I remember..... before I knew better
for me
oblivious was kind of comforting
really like this
'Something from the deep
Pull up something that flashes
Makes me crack
A smile, or a heart string'
I live for that...to feel
really great thanks for sharing tremors
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oh pretty....tremors wrote:
I wish for cake
I went to the store and couldn't decide on one, I'm useless.
It was between coconut or german chocolate...now I have neither
My hearts desire, my wish is love and happy times for you and all my friends!
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A cake for Pandora
It's a shame I can't bake
Her numbers are double
And always she cares
A soft heart beating
Too good for this world
She takes the trouble
To reach out and touch
I know her from somewhere
I know her from here
She always gives something
And don't ask for much
Happy Birthday!
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tremors wrote:A cake for Pandora
It's a shame I can't bake
Her numbers are double
And always she cares
A soft heart beating
Too good for this world
She takes the trouble
To reach out and touch
I know her from somewhere
I know her from here
She always gives something
And don't ask for much
Happy Birthday!
Sorry it's not quite Shakespeare - it's early morning!
It's the best! Pretty and sweet
You made my day!
Thank you!
PS....
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pandora wrote:tremors wrote:A cake for Pandora
It's a shame I can't bake
Her numbers are double
And always she cares
A soft heart beating
Too good for this world
She takes the trouble
To reach out and touch
I know her from somewhere
I know her from here
She always gives something
And don't ask for much
Happy Birthday!
Sorry it's not quite Shakespeare - it's early morning!
It's the best! Pretty and sweet
You made my day!
Thank you!
PS....
that's a keeper for me.... for always
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Perseverance furthers at the South West
Every man must take his place
Every man must have his day
Fragile surface tension pops
Too easily
Must vanish then reform
Pay respect to those who go before
Who have come
Who have tried
Who have failed
Who have stayed
Tried to penetrate this blackness
With words too much their own
Only to be shunned, ignored, abused
Ridiculed, reviled
Take heed of those who tried before
Take heed of those who have stayed
Take lessons from those who still write
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i had this idea for pj skool supplies so i started a forum for it called WE NEED PEARL JAM SCHOOL SUPPLIES im trying to get as many people possible to agree so we kan make it happen please help :!: :!:“I told you from the start just how this would end. When I get what I want, I never want it again.” — Courtney Love
“If he doesn’t treat you like a princess, then he doesn’t deserve to be your prince.” — Unknown
“And we’ll move on and go our separate ways. Just know, I’ll miss you everyday, but things just aren’t the same.” — Unknown0 -
pearljamfan-1997 wrote:i had this idea for pj skool supplies so i started a forum for it called WE NEED PEARL JAM SCHOOL SUPPLIES im trying to get as many people possible to agree so we kan make it happen please help :!: :!:
Yeah I saw that thread. I think it's a good idea!
Your poem earlier in this thread has had a big effect on me recently actually - the Evil Man one - totally changed what I was writing about in this section for a while. Think I may come back to other subjects soon though.Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
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thanxtremors wrote:pearljamfan-1997 wrote:i had this idea for pj skool supplies so i started a forum for it called WE NEED PEARL JAM SCHOOL SUPPLIES im trying to get as many people possible to agree so we kan make it happen please help :!: :!:
Yeah I saw that thread. I think it's a good idea!
Your poem earlier in this thread has had a big effect on me recently actually - the Evil Man one - totally changed what I was writing about in this section for a while. Think I may come back to other subjects soon though. i try , and ive read some of the stuff uve posted and i luv it “I told you from the start just how this would end. When I get what I want, I never want it again.” — Courtney Love
“If he doesn’t treat you like a princess, then he doesn’t deserve to be your prince.” — Unknown
“And we’ll move on and go our separate ways. Just know, I’ll miss you everyday, but things just aren’t the same.” — Unknown0 -
pearljamfan-1997 wrote:
thanxtremors wrote:pearljamfan-1997 wrote:i had this idea for pj skool supplies so i started a forum for it called WE NEED PEARL JAM SCHOOL SUPPLIES im trying to get as many people possible to agree so we kan make it happen please help :!: :!:
Yeah I saw that thread. I think it's a good idea!
Your poem earlier in this thread has had a big effect on me recently actually - the Evil Man one - totally changed what I was writing about in this section for a while. Think I may come back to other subjects soon though. i try , and ive read some of the stuff uve posted and i luv it
Thanks. I thought the evil man was very thought provoking and showed a lot of insight. You should keep writing.Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
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Cyber Psychic
fingers lightly stream
pouring warm and cold
words across a black mat sky
no here or there
only time reflects
the vacuum we've created
orbiting
the shields are up
the truth revolves
yet in another lie
empty eyes
hold the soul
that whispers tainted trust
whispers from an empty heart
in blackness
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No one came....tremors wrote:
The tiny head lies wet from tears in his crib in the dark.
New to this hell...his hell.
His stomach gnaws with hunger. His thumb that is all to satisfy.
His wimpers turn to cries.
Cries turn to screams
answered by the evil that he must learn to endure.
Day to day. Month by month. Year after year.
No one came.
The darkness envelopes his mind taking all the light of innocence with it.
He learns the word from the evil he sees.
Loveless gives room to hate.
Hate gives him power, power to be anything but a victim,
though he is now destined to forever be,
just that.
He is a victim of himself, of hate and of evil.
He is a warrior.
You will find him on a lonely road in the dark of night, waiting for an opportunity.
He is the smiling stranger in a crowded subway, as he takes aim to punish the world.
He is the bomber in a faraway land or a professional killer without the heart even for revenge.
But he was once a child
and he never had a chance.
No one came.... and he never knew love.0 -
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"Sitting here thinking....
Does this sweater match my brains?"0
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