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tremors wrote:My family with a bitterness seeping to the core
How do you love someone that can barely stand
the sight of you?
Trials, trials and tribulations, love
Yet so many pieces to the jigsaw
So many stories
She can't let it go
Bitterness infecting me
We're just circling the inevitable breakdown
Words never said, just stored up for when?
Stored up for never
Thoughts flash between us
Too hurtful to be said
Yet crackle in the air
And me when I'm psychic catch every one
An irreconcilable distance, becoming revulsion, resentment, regret?
Something's brewing
And we can never quite bail out
So I seek my fresh air alone
I retreat and make myself scarce
And be glad I don't need to see you
Until next time
Beautifully written
I can feel this... you know
but my instant thought...
I hope there is a next time,
someday... there won't be a next time.
I wish there was a fix to let the love in and heal
maybe next time?
maybe someday.0 -
tremors wrote:My family with a bitterness seeping to the core
How do you love someone that can barely stand
the sight of you?
Trials, trials and tribulations, love
Yet so many pieces to the jigsaw
So many stories
She can't let it go
Bitterness infecting me
We're just circling the inevitable breakdown
Words never said, just stored up for when?
Stored up for never
Thoughts flash between us
Too hurtful to be said
Yet crackle in the air
And me when I'm psychic catch every one
An irreconcilable distance, becoming revulsion, resentment, regret?
Something's brewing
And we can never quite bail out
So I seek my fresh air alone
I retreat and make myself scarce
And be glad I don't need to see you
Until next time
i totally get this tremors
i read what pandi wrote and i agree
in my case its too late
i've tried to mend wrongs i never even knew i committed
things are always so much different
when seen by other eyes
hope you have a second chance
jump on it if you get it.peace,
jo
http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
"How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
"Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~0 -
pandora wrote:tremors wrote:My family with a bitterness seeping to the core
How do you love someone that can barely stand
the sight of you?
Trials, trials and tribulations, love
Yet so many pieces to the jigsaw
So many stories
She can't let it go
Bitterness infecting me
We're just circling the inevitable breakdown
Words never said, just stored up for when?
Stored up for never
Thoughts flash between us
Too hurtful to be said
Yet crackle in the air
And me when I'm psychic catch every one
An irreconcilable distance, becoming revulsion, resentment, regret?
Something's brewing
And we can never quite bail out
So I seek my fresh air alone
I retreat and make myself scarce
And be glad I don't need to see you
Until next time
Beautifully written
I can feel this... you know
but my instant thought...
I hope there is a next time,
someday... there won't be a next time.
I wish there was a fix to let the love in and heal
maybe next time?
maybe someday.
Yeah it's not always so bad. Just how I was feeling last night! I know it didn't really fit with what had gone before here, but I didn't know where best to post this one. Thanks for your words Pandi. I think I'll be able to find some edifying words in the next few days. Life is alright. As long as you have some money for yourself and live in safety, life is usually alright!!Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
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tremors wrote:pandora wrote:tremors wrote:My family with a bitterness seeping to the core
How do you love someone that can barely stand
the sight of you?
Trials, trials and tribulations, love
Yet so many pieces to the jigsaw
So many stories
She can't let it go
Bitterness infecting me
We're just circling the inevitable breakdown
Words never said, just stored up for when?
Stored up for never
Thoughts flash between us
Too hurtful to be said
Yet crackle in the air
And me when I'm psychic catch every one
An irreconcilable distance, becoming revulsion, resentment, regret?
Something's brewing
And we can never quite bail out
So I seek my fresh air alone
I retreat and make myself scarce
And be glad I don't need to see you
Until next time
Beautifully written
I can feel this... you know
but my instant thought...
I hope there is a next time,
someday... there won't be a next time.
I wish there was a fix to let the love in and heal
maybe next time?
maybe someday.
Yeah it's not always so bad. Just how I was feeling last night! I know it didn't really fit with what had gone before here, but I didn't know where best to post this one. Thanks for your words Pandi. I think I'll be able to find some edifying words in the next few days. Life is alright. As long as you have some money for yourself and live in safety, life is usually alright!!
There is no fitting for words just put them down...please, we need them.
Your words truly tugged at my heart cause I could identify.
I grew up in shame, some things were never resolved and now won't be....
not here.
But I have accepted this as me and it's ok. We were all ok.
Our relationships end but the love stays with us, thankfully.
And thankfully the pain fades.
Money means independence
safety implies overcoming danger, both important in making life alright.
But I hope for a life that is more than alright for you,
I hope for the very best!0 -
pandora wrote:
There is no fitting for words just put them down...please, we need them.
Your words truly tugged at my heart cause I could identify.
I grew up in shame, some things were never resolved and now won't be....
not here.
But I have accepted this as me and it's ok. We were all ok.
Our relationships end but the love stays with us, thankfully.
And thankfully the pain fades.
Money means independence
safety implies overcoming danger, both important in making life alright.
But I hope for a life that is more than alright for you,
I hope for the very best!
Thanks! generally my life is great - I enjoy living on my own, I enjoy my work, for me having some money for myself allows me to be the person I want to be, live the life I want to live, and fuck the rest of them. I like how I can write from just about anywhere and earn my money to run my house, buy my records and write me poems!! The past is more difficult, and relationships - things are kind of simple looking after number one. I am troubled by my past and the past of others I have known, but now that all is cool for me, I am troubled by the thought of people living in the circumstances that I have had to survive, and people I have loved have had to survive. This sometimes keeps me awake at night, but fortunately my work allows me to do a little bit to 'make a difference' too. So life is alright for me, in fact it is 'good' - I feel for other people who cannot sleep safely tonight though. I have been there, many people have been there.Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
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Bravo to you for helping others, for getting through the difficult times and sharing your experience and feelings through your lovely poetry. Your words and thoughts help more than you know, you are an example of hope.tremors wrote:pandora wrote:
There is no fitting for words just put them down...please, we need them.
Your words truly tugged at my heart cause I could identify.
I grew up in shame, some things were never resolved and now won't be....
not here.
But I have accepted this as me and it's ok. We were all ok.
Our relationships end but the love stays with us, thankfully.
And thankfully the pain fades.
Money means independence
safety implies overcoming danger, both important in making life alright.
But I hope for a life that is more than alright for you,
I hope for the very best!
Thanks! generally my life is great - I enjoy living on my own, I enjoy my work, for me having some money for myself allows me to be the person I want to be, live the life I want to live, and fuck the rest of them. I like how I can write from just about anywhere and earn my money to run my house, buy my records and write me poems!! The past is more difficult, and relationships - things are kind of simple looking after number one. I am troubled by my past and the past of others I have known, but now that all is cool for me, I am troubled by the thought of people living in the circumstances that I have had to survive, and people I have loved have had to survive. This sometimes keeps me awake at night, but fortunately my work allows me to do a little bit to 'make a difference' too. So life is alright for me, in fact it is 'good' - I feel for other people who cannot sleep safely tonight though. I have been there, many people have been there.0 -
pandora wrote:
Bravo to you for helping others, for getting through the difficult times and sharing your experience and feelings through your lovely poetry. Your words and thoughts help more than you know, you are an example of hope.tremors wrote:pandora wrote:
There is no fitting for words just put them down...please, we need them.
Your words truly tugged at my heart cause I could identify.
I grew up in shame, some things were never resolved and now won't be....
not here.
But I have accepted this as me and it's ok. We were all ok.
Our relationships end but the love stays with us, thankfully.
And thankfully the pain fades.
Money means independence
safety implies overcoming danger, both important in making life alright.
But I hope for a life that is more than alright for you,
I hope for the very best!
Thanks! generally my life is great - I enjoy living on my own, I enjoy my work, for me having some money for myself allows me to be the person I want to be, live the life I want to live, and fuck the rest of them. I like how I can write from just about anywhere and earn my money to run my house, buy my records and write me poems!! The past is more difficult, and relationships - things are kind of simple looking after number one. I am troubled by my past and the past of others I have known, but now that all is cool for me, I am troubled by the thought of people living in the circumstances that I have had to survive, and people I have loved have had to survive. This sometimes keeps me awake at night, but fortunately my work allows me to do a little bit to 'make a difference' too. So life is alright for me, in fact it is 'good' - I feel for other people who cannot sleep safely tonight though. I have been there, many people have been there.
Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
Send my credentials to the house of detention0 -
tremors wrote:My family with a bitterness seeping to the core
How do you love someone that can barely stand
the sight of you?
Trials, trials and tribulations, love
Yet so many pieces to the jigsaw
So many stories
She can't let it go
Bitterness infecting me
We're just circling the inevitable breakdown
Words never said, just stored up for when?
Stored up for never
Thoughts flash between us
Too hurtful to be said
Yet crackle in the air
And me when I'm psychic catch every one
An irreconcilable distance, becoming revulsion, resentment, regret?
Something's brewing
And we can never quite bail out
So I seek my fresh air alone
I retreat and make myself scarce
And be glad I don't need to see you
Until next time
loved this, especially those parts in bold
can relatepandora wrote:But I have accepted this as me and it's ok. We were all ok.
Our relationships end but the love stays with us, thankfully.
And thankfully the pain fades.
more insightful and intelligent words that i agree with
glad that things are good with you Pandora, situations like that in my family too. Acceptance is the key, as is love.Pandora wrote:
Bravo to you for helping others, for getting through the difficult times and sharing your experience and feelings through your lovely poetry. Your words and thoughts help more than you know, you are an example of hope.
couldn't have said it better
i'm glad that you're happy and content with life tremors
it's nice to see someone be thankful and enjoy what they have
thanks for sharing
really, it means a lot0 -
Weather on its way
might bring some icicles
for you and me.
Icicles to challenge us all.
Six foot icicles.
Fatter than 2 small,
mitten covered hands
can reach around.
Go on....
Give it a try!
Smooth and bumpy,
see through,
that they magically,
can,
distort the world.
Believe it...
Take a look and see!
A cold phenomenon,
hanging water.
Drip, drip, drip.
Stop....
Listen to nature's beat,
we'll do the icicle dance!
A twisted treat
for the young
at heart,
slips through the lips.
Take one....
It's yours,
A guaranteed smile!
And as they melt
in the cold winter sun
a fresh smell
beckons Springtime
Is
just around the corner. 0 -
pandora wrote:
Weather on its way
might bring some icicles
for you and me.
Icicles to challenge us all.
Six foot icicles.
Fatter than 2 small,
mitten covered hands
can reach around.
Go on....
Give it a try!
Smooth and bumpy,
see through,
that they magically,
can,
distort the world.
Believe it...
Take a look and see!
A cold phenomenon,
hanging water.
Drip, drip, drip.
Stop....
Listen to nature's beat,
we'll do the icicle dance!
A twisted treat
for the young
at heart,
slips through the lips.
Take one....
It's yours,
A guaranteed smile!
And as they melt
in the cold winter sun
a fresh smell
beckons Springtime
Is
just around the corner.
Nice!Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
Send my credentials to the house of detention0 -
pandora wrote:
Weather on its way
might bring some icicles
for you and me.
Icicles to challenge us all.
Six foot icicles.
Fatter than 2 small,
mitten covered hands
can reach around.
Go on....
Give it a try!
Smooth and bumpy,
see through,
that they magically,
can,
distort the world.
Believe it...
Take a look and see!
A cold phenomenon,
hanging water.
Drip, drip, drip.
Stop....
Listen to nature's beat,
we'll do the icicle dance!
A twisted treat
for the young
at heart,
slips through the lips.
Take one....
It's yours,
A guaranteed smile!
And as they melt
in the cold winter sun
a fresh smell
beckons Springtime
Is
just around the corner.
pandi, i don't know why
but reading this
i felt a huge lump in my throat
and a stinging of tears in my eyes
maybe its childhood memories
maybe its you
or maybe i need some prozac
beautiful way you wind your words into pictures peace,
jo
http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
"How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
"Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~0 -
thanks friendtremors wrote:pandora wrote:
Weather on its way
might bring some icicles
for you and me.
Icicles to challenge us all.
Six foot icicles.
Fatter than 2 small,
mitten covered hands
can reach around.
Go on....
Give it a try!
Smooth and bumpy,
see through,
that they magically,
can,
distort the world.
Believe it...
Take a look and see!
A cold phenomenon,
hanging water.
Drip, drip, drip.
Stop....
Listen to nature's beat,
we'll do the icicle dance!
A twisted treat
for the young
at heart,
slips through the lips.
Take one....
It's yours,
A guaranteed smile!
And as they melt
in the cold winter sun
a fresh smell
beckons Springtime
Is
just around the corner.
Nice! 0 -
StillHere wrote:pandora wrote:
Weather on its way
might bring some icicles
for you and me.
Icicles to challenge us all.
Six foot icicles.
Fatter than 2 small,
mitten covered hands
can reach around.
Go on....
Give it a try!
Smooth and bumpy,
see through,
that they magically,
can,
distort the world.
Believe it...
Take a look and see!
A cold phenomenon,
hanging water.
Drip, drip, drip.
Stop....
Listen to nature's beat,
we'll do the icicle dance!
A twisted treat
for the young
at heart,
slips through the lips.
Take one....
It's yours,
A guaranteed smile!
And as they melt
in the cold winter sun
a fresh smell
beckons Springtime
Is
just around the corner.
pandi, i don't know why
but reading this
i felt a huge lump in my throat
and a stinging of tears in my eyes
maybe its childhood memories
maybe its you
or maybe i need some prozac
beautiful way you wind your words into pictures
you make and .....thanks kind lady 0 -
and OH pandi
i was just listening to the cd of sons of sylvia that your son sent
thank him so much
i'm enjoying it!peace,
jo
http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
"How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
"Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~0 -
pandora wrote:StillHere wrote:and OH pandi
i was just listening to the cd of sons of sylvia that your son sent
thank him so much
i'm enjoying it!
Cool... I'll tell JB (thats hubby) he slipped the cd in your package when I wasn't lookin
I enjoy it too!
hahahaaa...ok peace,
jo
http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
"How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
"Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~0 -
8-) 0 -
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life threatening is the chill.
Cold hearts with ice daggers,
performing at their will.
Here safely in your arms,
that melt the world away.
Warm and soft in comfort,
promising, we will stay.0
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