Clotheslined

rollings
rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
edited January 2011 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
very good!
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  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    Half Full wrote:
    I went for a walk today
    through my childhood and yours

    ...

    I thought I'd never see you again
    porched rhymes of whisper
    freezing alleys of winter
    back-grounded memories of...
    grapevines, trees you can't climb,
    windows looked through... from the other side

    As far as I remember--
    ...

    I believe I cried
    with so much sliding by...

    painfully,
    every day
    throws so much away

    Though less is more
    there's still is always
    so much...stuff out back.

    you've made me feel like i could cry... Half Full your poetry ... hard to say
  • mysticweed
    mysticweed Posts: 3,710
    i read this behind ja's post
    still good
    melancholy
    and good
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    awesome ..yesterday and today.

    Godfather.
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    yep... dig it!

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