whore

karatekid
karatekid Posts: 11
edited December 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I'm a whore
I give everything I am
all of my emotions eaten
by my unborns father
lay me down for another lie
living on the street
next to the car that hit me
he says he will be back with help
and then takes the cash in my wallet
returning only when he wants some more
nothing left
I don't recognize the world anymore
just him
thats how he wants it
the star
and I'm his whore
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  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    deep. i like it.

    be well.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • karatekid
    karatekid Posts: 11
    :)

    thanks chadwick.

    I am well
    with my glass managerie
    a little whore
    behind a little door
    inside a room
    that grows smaller everyday
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    don't feel bad about it
    it's ok
    i've been called the same



    btw, thank you
    you just reminded me that i am supposed to write a "door" poem
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • marcos
    marcos Posts: 2,112
    karatekid wrote:
    I'm a whore
    I give everything I am
    all of my emotions eaten
    by my unborns father
    lay me down for another lie
    living on the street
    next to the car that hit me
    he says he will be back with help
    and then takes the cash in my wallet
    returning only when he wants some more
    nothing left
    I don't recognize the world anymore
    just him
    thats how he wants it
    the star
    and I'm his whore

    That's very sad....and very good.
    Ever read Sylvia Plath's poem, Lady Lazarus? It's very dark but very empowering at the end, it may help.
  • the wolf
    the wolf Posts: 7,027
    This is fucking good!

    I really dig it a lot. Great job.
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel

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