shed a tear

acrossssSsssshittt
acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
edited December 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
take my hand pretty girl
and we’ll run away
we’ll catch that train
we may trip and fall on the way
but we'll run away
into another day

just like we used to

...just like we did

I ain’t askin you to trust me
cuz that train may have left already
but if you stay with me
we could have some fun
maybe pick up my car
cuz I got those songs that you love to sing
I got em in my car
we’ll drive high and we’ll break the limits
we’ll drive so high
I promise you together we’ll fly

just hold my hand pretty girl
and I’ll get you outta here
you look prettier when you shed a tear
I ain’t askin you to fall in love with me
cuz if we fall we’ll fall together
and I’m just sayin
look around you
we’ll run
far away
from here
we’ll drive fast
through deserted days
and through lonely nights
with our hands out
and our hair messed
listening to the songs
we love to sing
you don’t gotta love me
you only gotta wanna fly
away

but if you wanna stay
that’s ok
I won’t ask again
only I’m sorry I can’t stay
not here
so goodbye pretty girl
there's nothing to fear
remember those songs forever
and if you ever feel sad
just shed a tear
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  • rollings
    rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
    This sounds like a song
    and fun in spite of its title
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    Half Full wrote:
    This sounds like a song
    and fun in spite of its title
    i hear the song too

    well done mr. acrossOcean
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    it was ..fun... is... will be.. great fun.. with maybe a bit of fast car playin as we head into the sun : ) ...

    u guys in.. cuz that pretty girl.. she aint comin
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    acrossOceans wrote:
    it was ..fun... is... will be.. great fun.. with maybe a bit of fast car playin as we head into the sun : ) ...

    u guys in.. cuz that pretty girl.. she aint comin
    some girls miss out on all the fun
    some girls don't

    some girls like playin as they're heading head on into the sun
    some girls don't

    some girls like going fast
    some girls don't

    some girls do
    some girls do not
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    some girls... well.. you know
    they just wanna have fun

    some girls
    forgetaboutit
    they're even hotter than the sun

    and as they head fast into the heart of the sun
    even God's thinkin
    "ooh this could be fun"
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    acrossOceans wrote:
    some girls... well.. you know
    they just wanna have fun

    some girls
    forgetaboutit
    they're even hotter than the sun

    and as they head fast into the heart of the sun
    even God's thinkin
    "ooh this could be fun"
    and then some girls
    all they do is complain
    i am personally better off without those girls
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    you're tellin me
    ...
    where do i start where do i end
    i'm in the middle of nowhere
    and i aint got a clue as to how i got here
    but it's where you end up
    when you're ridin around havin too much fun
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    acrossOceans wrote:
    you're tellin me
    ...
    where do i start where do i end
    i'm in the middle of nowhere
    and i aint got a clue as to how i got here
    but it's where you end up
    when you're ridin around havin too much fun

    oh man...
    this pretty much sums up my life
    i am grateful i woke up before it ended on me

    just yesterday i was 12 years old
    the next day today 26 years later
    both eyes blink... a snap, a ride

    just the other day i did not hurt like i do today
    it was just yesterday

    where has my body gone?
    my mind, where did i misplace it?
    left it behind
    long ago
    where did it go?
    where have i gone?
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    chadwick wrote:

    oh man...
    this pretty much sums up my life
    i am grateful i woke up before it ended on me

    just yesterday i was 12 years old
    the next day today 26 years later
    both eyes blink... a snap, a ride

    just the other day i did not hurt like i do today
    it was just yesterday

    where has my body gone?
    my mind, where did i misplace it?
    left it behind
    long ago
    where did it go?
    where have i gone?


    fuckers like us
    we'll never know where we've gone
    and it's only years later that we realize we're nowhere to be found
    and you think of yesterdays cuz it's all you can do... all you wanna do
    we've most likely run away... from here
    fuck it.... we're better off there than here
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    acrossOceans wrote:
    chadwick wrote:

    oh man...
    this pretty much sums up my life
    i am grateful i woke up before it ended on me

    just yesterday i was 12 years old
    the next day today 26 years later
    both eyes blink... a snap, a ride

    just the other day i did not hurt like i do today
    it was just yesterday

    where has my body gone?
    my mind, where did i misplace it?
    left it behind
    long ago
    where did it go?
    where have i gone?


    fuckers like us
    we'll never know where we've gone
    and it's only years later that we realize we're nowhere to be found
    and you think of yesterdays cuz it's all you can do... all you wanna do
    we've most likely run away... from here
    fuck it.... we're better off there than here

    and you know what
    i just wanna swim
    just wanna live a bit
    write my poetry and be

    help someone here and there
    that's about it

    at this point it doesn't even matter
    im already gone
    yet im still fighting to win
    i am still fighting to lose

    so i am torn
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    you just wanna swim
    live a lil
    help someone here n there...

    I also do
    but you're better than me chad
    cuz i want that pretty girl too
  • The Porch is full of overweight jobless geeks
    The Porch is full of overweight jobless geeks Posts: 64
    i didn't know Bryan Adams posted on here? :D
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    We Are All One wrote:
    i didn't know Bryan Adams posted on here? :D


    Bryan's old school and so am I


    ...fuckin wise guy.... happy anniversary by the way :mrgreen:
  • tremors
    tremors Posts: 8,051
    Liking this thread. Need to spend more time in the poetry section. sooooooon!
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

    lettherecordsplay1x.gif?t=1377796878
  • mysticweed
    mysticweed Posts: 3,710
    acrossOceans wrote:
    it was ..fun... is... will be.. great fun.. with maybe a bit of fast car playin as we head into the sun : ) ...

    u guys in.. cuz that pretty girl.. she aint comin

    I'M IN!!
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • mysticweed
    mysticweed Posts: 3,710
    tremors wrote:
    Liking this thread. Need to spend more time in the poetry section. sooooooon!

    This is a great place to be
    i still catch the train now and then but agree or disagree, i don't post. some folks can get downright mean on that train

    NORMALLY, in the PPM&A, comments are either positive or withheld.
    very RARELY some jock rash will post a nasty comment which only goes to prove their ignorance
    :eh: ?
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    lettinggo wrote:
    tremors wrote:
    Liking this thread. Need to spend more time in the poetry section. sooooooon!

    This is a great place to be
    i still catch the train now and then but agree or disagree, i don't post. some folks can get downright mean on that train

    NORMALLY, in the PPM&A, comments are either positive or withheld.
    very RARELY some jock rash will post a nasty comment which only goes to prove their ignorance
    :eh: ?

    and that is why we aint catchin no lousy train... fuck that ... we're doin fast car ... tracy chapman style... or is it bryan adams style... not my choice but so i've been told ... whattayougonnado eh... we got a wise guy ere
  • the wolf
    the wolf Posts: 7,027
    acrossOceans wrote:
    you look prettier when you shed a tear


    I love this line my friend. Reminds me of someone I used to know,... when she cried she somehow became the most beautiful creature on this planet. I hated to see her cry,.. but she was pretty when doing so.

    Thanks.
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    lettinggo wrote:
    acrossOceans wrote:
    it was ..fun... is... will be.. great fun.. with maybe a bit of fast car playin as we head into the sun : ) ...

    u guys in.. cuz that pretty girl.. she aint comin

    I'M IN!!


    well it looks like i got 2 prettier girls in this fast car... let's rollllll....

    pakistan style... as in no seat belts required :D
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    the wolf wrote:
    acrossOceans wrote:
    you look prettier when you shed a tear


    I love this line my friend. Reminds me of someone I used to know,... when she cried she somehow became the most beautiful creature on this planet. I hated to see her cry,.. but she was pretty when doing so.

    Thanks.

    damn... we got a badass wolf in ere too... this shit keeps gettin better !

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