Brilliance

DangDang
DangDang Posts: 1,551
edited September 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
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Inside words
they appear
before you

Feelings explained
yet unheard
sparkle brilliance
of magnitude

Softly kept tender
In strong solitude

What you thought you heard

Understanding needs to
understand needs
Fences so small, they’re unseen,
most dream

Dark sky
daylit
When observing us whole
divisions laugh, “impossible!”

Strands
outside, inside
they join what is
the common thread.
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  • mysticweed
    mysticweed Posts: 3,710
    dd this is brilliant
    it blew me away
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • tremors
    tremors Posts: 8,051
    beautiful (& deep)
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  • DangDang
    DangDang Posts: 1,551
    Thanks you guys.
  • tremors
    tremors Posts: 8,051
    great great poetry dangdang - one of the best things I've read
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