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  • pandora
    pandora Posts: 21,855
    acrossOceans wrote:
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    I’ve waited so long
    …too long
    To be here

    I’m finally here
    I still hear you sing
    And I hear you sing black
    Amidst the aging trees
    That shelter you
    They shelter me

    Funny, I thought she’d be here with me
    Funny…I’m so much younger than when I first had this dream
    And in the mist that touches me
    I feel her here
    An angel of mist
    I feel her here
    Beside me
    I’m so sorry
    For the hurt within me

    I know she wore wings
    So I know she had to leave
    And I can feel a star above me
    So please understand
    If I now wish only
    To sway to black
    For I’ve grown but small
    And my heart’s grown weak

    But I’m here
    Where I’d always longed to be
    Where a raindrop echoes
    reflecting a star
    far above me
    Where black is the moon
    Where black shelters me

    Where I shall forever be
    Where I shall forever sleep

    To the sound of my song
    Which I didn’t sing
    Here’s everything
    And this time
    I’m not missing

    I'm so glad you're here! Thank you!
    This is very cool, comfort in black and it doesn't feel sad to me like black sometimes does, it feels right.
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    I'm so glad you like this Pandora... as of late I;ve been trying to write as positively as possible else my own words tend to throw me into a hole...and that ain't good for no one: )
  • the wolf
    the wolf Posts: 7,027
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    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • DangDang
    DangDang Posts: 1,551
    the wolf wrote:
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    crimson
    white
    and
    in'd I go
  • pandora
    pandora Posts: 21,855
    acrossOceans wrote:
    I'm so glad you like this Pandora... as of late I;ve been trying to write as positively as possible else my own words tend to throw me into a hole...and that ain't good for no one: )
    Writing from an inspired happy place is much more difficult than from pain and sorrow or anger, maybe because the need to write isn't as great. Contentment, I guess, makes for a lazy writer.
    Writing with a positive feel has a beauty that touches the reader and lifts them, maybe even stays with them longer.
    Its like love, a gift of love in words, that is cherished, sometimes even guides the reader.
    So when we are well there is still a need to share, it can have great meaning for others. I say spread the love!
    And you got a lot of love to share! anyone so in touch with their inner spirit, as you are, has so much to share. :D
  • pandora
    pandora Posts: 21,855
    the wolf wrote:
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    Wow, reminds me of home, thank you Steve, just lovely! :D
  • DangDang
    DangDang Posts: 1,551
    pandora wrote:
    the wolf wrote:
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    Wow, reminds me of home, thank you Steve, just lovely! :D

    Your home looks like THAT?

    Wowza!
  • pandora
    pandora Posts: 21,855
    DangDang wrote:
    pandora wrote:
    the wolf wrote:
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    Wow, reminds me of home, thank you Steve, just lovely! :D

    Your home looks like THAT?

    Wowza!
    Wisconsin, my home state, it reminds me of an early snowfall in autumn, nothing like a first snowfall.
    It is magical no matter how old you are. Doubly beautiful when the trees are still in their change.
    Each flake slowly falling hypnotizes.
    You can choose to take in the whole scene, the mass of white movement or watch one flake on its journey to the ground.
    The colorful leaves peek thru the rising snow cover and on the breeze is the smell, a mixture of old and new. The dead leaves and the fresh cold wet smell of new snow.
    It is so quiet, the breeze tries to move the heavy leaves wet with snow but can not, the rustle of fall leaves is hushed for a time.
    It is a very special moment to take in. A fall snow.
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    the wolf wrote:
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    I drowned in love
    De-surfaced stained…

    I would do this to myself… when still young
    Like to my guitar
    With the words I’ve sung

    “So neat the mess
    Could fall in love”
    Fuck I drowned in love

    Now on the flip side
    I’m just stains
    of love
  • pandora
    pandora Posts: 21,855
    acrossOceans wrote:
    the wolf wrote:
    love1.jpg


    I drowned in love
    De-surfaced stained…

    I would do this to myself… when still young
    Like to my guitar
    With the words I’ve sung

    “So neat the mess
    Could fall in love”
    Fuck I drowned in love

    Now on the flip side
    I’m just stains
    of love
    This is cool, you captured much better than I could have
    just how I felt when looking at the pic.
    I thought of being young again, so in love,
    the love of the young very different than that of the old.
    Abandoned, captivated, enchanted, submerged in the thought of love.
    And young love so messy, undiscovered territory. Doing it all wrong.
    Very nice, thank you :D
  • pandora
    pandora Posts: 21,855
    Cool.jpg
  • tremors
    tremors Posts: 8,051
    acrossOceans wrote:
    the wolf wrote:
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    I drowned in love
    De-surfaced stained…

    I would do this to myself… when still young
    Like to my guitar
    With the words I’ve sung

    “So neat the mess
    Could fall in love”
    Fuck I drowned in love

    Now on the flip side
    I’m just stains
    of love


    could easily be a great song
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • pandora
    pandora Posts: 21,855
    tremors wrote:
    acrossOceans wrote:
    the wolf wrote:
    love1.jpg


    I drowned in love
    De-surfaced stained…

    I would do this to myself… when still young
    Like to my guitar
    With the words I’ve sung

    “So neat the mess
    Could fall in love”
    Fuck I drowned in love

    Now on the flip side
    I’m just stains
    of love


    could easily be a great song
    :wave: :thumbup: :D
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    the wolf wrote:
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    even God bleeds
  • mikalina
    mikalina Posts: 7,206
    the wolf wrote:
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    Simply beautiful. I can go on a long walk and just daydream.... Thank you for sending.
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  • mikalina
    mikalina Posts: 7,206
    acrossOceans wrote:
    the wolf wrote:
    love1.jpg


    I drowned in love
    De-surfaced stained…

    I would do this to myself… when still young
    Like to my guitar
    With the words I’ve sung

    “So neat the mess
    Could fall in love”
    Fuck I drowned in love

    Now on the flip side
    I’m just stains
    of love


    Very nice poem. The word Love written in different languages, we all want love and need it....
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  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    mikalina wrote:
    acrossOceans wrote:
    the wolf wrote:
    love1.jpg


    I drowned in love
    De-surfaced stained…

    I would do this to myself… when still young
    Like to my guitar
    With the words I’ve sung

    “So neat the mess
    Could fall in love”
    Fuck I drowned in love

    Now on the flip side
    I’m just stains
    of love


    Very nice poem. The word Love written in different languages, we all want love and need it....

    yes, Love in different languages ... so nice... I dont see it in Urdu though... that would be "Pyar"... no facility to write it in my script : (
  • pandora
    pandora Posts: 21,855
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  • pandora
    pandora Posts: 21,855
    mikalina wrote:
    the wolf wrote:
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    Simply beautiful. I can go on a long walk and just daydream.... Thank you for sending.
    :D your thought is lovely
  • StillHere
    StillHere Posts: 7,795
    the wolf wrote:
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    gorgeous
    stunning
    at first sight
    but what
    lies underneath
    this crimson
    masterpiece
    blood of
    the innocent
    comfort or
    self-destruction
    tall trees
    wise and
    proud
    they know
    it all
    know too
    much
    to ever tell
    their ancient
    branches
    drip with
    red red tears
    for all that's
    lost
    and all
    that's
    dear
    peace,
    jo

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