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  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    a shit friend wrote:
    Nice stuff Burn. 8-)

    The darkness comes in heated waves
    Like soldiers dancing on the graves
    of sinners lost and Jesus Saves
    anywhere but here.

    The blowing sands, the streets of fire
    You tread along the tripping wire
    One wrong move, and you expire
    anywhere but there.

    Home is where you hang yourself
    A Santo sitting on the shelf
    Cure the sick, can't cure yourself
    everywhere but here

    Time's not something you control
    This world was born without a soul
    Down the road you'll pay the toll
    everywhere but....

    but...

    I like the three lines/one line grouping because it makes it move faster as I read it. :)
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  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    shit friend, I have to ask:

    Is that avatar half blue bird, half squirrel? :shock:
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  • a shit friend
    a shit friend Posts: 64
    justam wrote:
    shit friend, I have to ask:

    Is that avatar half blue bird, half squirrel? :shock:

    :mrgreen:

    and they taste almost as good as they look. ;)
    This is your drug. This is your drug on brains.
  • a shit friend
    a shit friend Posts: 64
    Daddy smelled of whiskey
    Momma smelled of wine
    And even in my darkest days
    They never ceased to shine
    Like light reflecting off a blade
    Or the buckle of a belt
    They’ll always be there in my mind
    No matter how they smelt

    Daddy had the cancer
    Momma had the flu
    And it never seemed to matter
    What you did or didn’t do
    You were always doing something
    Be it wrong or be it right
    I see ‘em when I close my eyes
    Especially at night

    Dad’s no longer with us
    And mom’s not quite the same
    I’m grown up now and still confused
    As to where to place the blame
    Some nights I smell of whiskey
    My wife, she smells of wine
    If you ask me how we’re doing
    I’ll lie and say we’re fine.
    This is your drug. This is your drug on brains.
  • CHANGEinWAVES
    CHANGEinWAVES Posts: 10,169
    one week left till I cross the border
    "I'm not present, I'm a drug that makes you dream"
  • prism
    prism Posts: 2,440
    it's been so long since i've had a decent nights sleep...i may have forgotten how :?
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    angels share laughter
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  • dimitrispearljam
    dimitrispearljam Posts: 139,725
    HAPPY NEW YEAR
    "...Dimitri...He talks to me...'.."The Ghost of Greece..".
    "..That's One Happy Fuckin Ghost.."
    “..That came up on the Pillow Case...This is for the Greek, With Our Apologies.....”
  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    a shit friend wrote:
    Daddy smelled of whiskey
    Momma smelled of wine
    And even in my darkest days
    They never ceased to shine
    Like light reflecting off a blade
    Or the buckle of a belt
    They’ll always be there in my mind
    No matter how they smelt

    Daddy had the cancer
    Momma had the flu
    And it never seemed to matter
    What you did or didn’t do
    You were always doing something
    Be it wrong or be it right
    I see ‘em when I close my eyes
    Especially at night

    Dad’s no longer with us
    And mom’s not quite the same
    I’m grown up now and still confused
    As to where to place the blame
    Some nights I smell of whiskey
    My wife, she smells of wine
    If you ask me how we’re doing
    I’ll lie and say we’re fine.

    that sounds like a David Allen Coe song.... I think it's great !

    "the old man was covered with tatoo's and scar's
    he got some in prison and other's in bar's

    cole burnin stove no natural gas
    if that ain't country I'll kiss yer ass."
    DAC

    Godfather.
  • the wolf
    the wolf Posts: 7,027
    I love you so much, and I feel like I'm losing you.
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • a shit friend
    a shit friend Posts: 64
    Godfather. wrote:

    that sounds like a David Allen Coe song.... I think it's great !

    "the old man was covered with tatoo's and scar's
    he got some in prison and other's in bar's

    .. the rest he got workin' on old junk cars.... in the daytime.....

    ....He drank Pearl in a can and Jack Daniels Black
    chewed tabacca from a mail pouch sack...
    had an old dawg that was trained to attack
    sometimes.

    :lol::lol::lol:

    Thanks man... I'll take that as a compliment.

    I know, I know... it ain't "Dear Penis", but I'm working up to that. :lol::lol:
    This is your drug. This is your drug on brains.
  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    a shit friend wrote:
    Godfather. wrote:

    that sounds like a David Allen Coe song.... I think it's great !

    "the old man was covered with tatoo's and scar's
    he got some in prison and other's in bar's

    .. the rest he got workin' on old junk cars.... in the daytime.....

    ....He drank Pearl in a can and Jack Daniels Black
    chewed tabacca from a mail pouch sack...
    had an old dawg that was trained to attack
    sometimes.

    DAC is one of my all time fave's...yes it was a complament for sure.
    I read your other stuff on here...you got tallent Bro.
    hope to read more.

    Godfather.

    :lol::lol::lol:

    Thanks man... I'll take that as a compliment.

    I know, I know... it ain't "Dear Penis", but I'm working up to that. :lol::lol:
  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    oop's screw'd that up,you'll have to read it over again. :D

    Godfather.
  • supersonicyears
    supersonicyears Posts: 2,619
    edited July 2010
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    Post edited by supersonicyears on
    "In the age of darkness
    want to be enlightened"
  • dimitrispearljam
    dimitrispearljam Posts: 139,725
    happy new year!!!!!!
    "...Dimitri...He talks to me...'.."The Ghost of Greece..".
    "..That's One Happy Fuckin Ghost.."
    “..That came up on the Pillow Case...This is for the Greek, With Our Apologies.....”
  • CHANGEinWAVES
    CHANGEinWAVES Posts: 10,169
    hmmm what can I screw up this year?! :lol:
    "I'm not present, I'm a drug that makes you dream"
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    I've been struggling this week
    worrying about what didn't go right this year
    I tried hard, but it wasn't enough!
    and I'm wondering how I'll fix myself up in 2010 (?)
    I know life is so much what we do with it!
    I know life is so much what we think about it!
    but like everyone else, I fall down sometimes and get discouraged :|
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  • CHANGEinWAVES
    CHANGEinWAVES Posts: 10,169
    Ben plays to my soul and sings to my heart...
    "I'm not present, I'm a drug that makes you dream"
  • CHANGEinWAVES
    CHANGEinWAVES Posts: 10,169
    My Brain weighs heavy with the decisions of the new year.... I think there will be a lot of changes coming my way :D
    "I'm not present, I'm a drug that makes you dream"
  • dimitrispearljam
    dimitrispearljam Posts: 139,725
    less days for tour..ihihhihihihihihih
    "...Dimitri...He talks to me...'.."The Ghost of Greece..".
    "..That's One Happy Fuckin Ghost.."
    “..That came up on the Pillow Case...This is for the Greek, With Our Apologies.....”
  • prism
    prism Posts: 2,440
    there's graciousness in honesty that those that lie (to themselves included) will never know or have
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    angels share laughter
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
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