Raining.

chadwick
chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
edited October 2009 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Raining,
grayed out sky hanging low
getting clean
bathing the earth.

A full sky
of windy drops drip
splashing down cleansings
through newness.

Sprinkled in dew
the thread from spiders
bursts open brightly
as if treasure chests hung like silk
from limbs and twigs of the canopy
flinging open the recesses
of lush greenery.

Here,
more than waterfalls
bounce to and from
the moon.

It is as if
only the wet trees
know.
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • prism
    prism Posts: 2,440
    this is quite nice :)
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    angels share laughter
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    prism wrote:
    this is quite nice :)

    i wrote it @ school today while sitting on the toilet.
    do not eat school chili.
    it was horrible, just a terrible time.
    kinda painful actually.

    but i somehow produced a poem of sorts.
    i don't understand it.
    :?
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • prism
    prism Posts: 2,440
    chadwick wrote:
    prism wrote:
    this is quite nice :)

    i wrote it @ school today while sitting on the toilet.
    do not eat school chili.
    it was horrible, just a terrible time.
    kinda painful actually.

    but i somehow produced a poem of sorts.
    i don't understand it.
    :?

    but you're still so full of shit...

    what good did eatin that school chili do? :mrgreen:;):lol:
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    angels share laughter
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
  • PearlOfAGirl
    PearlOfAGirl Posts: 15,993
    chadwick wrote:
    Raining,
    grayed out sky hanging low
    getting clean
    bathing the earth.

    A full sky
    of windy drops drip
    splashing down cleansings
    through newness.

    Sprinkled in dew
    the thread from spiders
    bursts open brightly
    as if treasure chests hung like silk
    from limbs and twigs of the canopy
    flinging open the recesses
    of lush greenery.

    Here,
    more than waterfalls
    bounce to and from
    the moon.

    It is as if
    only the wet trees
    know.
    How'd you know it was raining here??? :lolno: :wtf:

    Wish you were here...
    ♥~RIP Dad
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    chadwick, this is lovely in places...

    didn't need to know about the chili, tho :xx


    prism ~ bizarre picture ;)
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    DopeBeastie wrote:
    chadwick, this is lovely in places...

    didn't need to know about the chili, tho :xx


    prism ~ bizarre picture ;)

    aww man.
    the chili toilet part is a complete bullshit story.
    i was just fuckin around being a smart ass.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    HeartShapedBox wrote:
    chadwick wrote:
    Raining,
    grayed out sky hanging low
    getting clean
    bathing the earth.

    A full sky
    of windy drops drip
    splashing down cleansings
    through newness.

    Sprinkled in dew
    the thread from spiders
    bursts open brightly
    as if treasure chests hung like silk
    from limbs and twigs of the canopy
    flinging open the recesses
    of lush greenery.

    Here,
    more than waterfalls
    bounce to and from
    the moon.

    It is as if
    only the wet trees
    know.
    How'd you know it was raining here??? :lolno: :wtf:


    i guess i know stuff.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • prism
    prism Posts: 2,440
    DopeBeastie wrote:
    chadwick, this is lovely in places...

    didn't need to know about the chili, tho :xx


    prism ~ bizarre picture ;)

    like all kitties do, Bill always smiles for the camera if i ask him to... :P


    so he was smiling...that or he was about to eat my face... :mrgreen:


    what's so bizarre about that? ;) :P
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    angels share laughter
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    "courtyard"

    you in the morning tree
    you were a flying bird
    but you sat for time
    that stood still as the morning air

    you seemed to me
    to be in love with me
    in a mourning tree
    see the leaves mourn for me...
  • pickupyourwill
    pickupyourwill Posts: 3,135
    acrossoceans wrote:
    "courtyard"

    you in the morning tree
    you were a flying bird
    but you sat for time
    that stood still as the morning air

    you seemed to me
    to be in love with me
    in a mourning tree
    see the leaves mourn for me...

    liked the way you used "morning" and "mourning"
  • PearlOfAGirl
    PearlOfAGirl Posts: 15,993
    chadwick wrote:
    HeartShapedBox wrote:
    chadwick wrote:
    Raining,
    grayed out sky hanging low
    getting clean
    bathing the earth.

    A full sky
    of windy drops drip
    splashing down cleansings
    through newness.

    Sprinkled in dew
    the thread from spiders
    bursts open brightly
    as if treasure chests hung like silk
    from limbs and twigs of the canopy
    flinging open the recesses
    of lush greenery.

    Here,
    more than waterfalls
    bounce to and from
    the moon.

    It is as if
    only the wet trees
    know.
    How'd you know it was raining here??? :lolno: :wtf:


    i guess i know stuff.
    I guess you do, it hasn't stopped raining since last night. :roll: Make it stop Chad :mrgreen:

    Wish you were here...
    ♥~RIP Dad
  • acrossssSsssshittt
    acrossssSsssshittt Posts: 1,014
    To pickupyourwill...

    am glad you appreciate it..

    i like your name... inspiring...

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