a poem

Dreams of Red · July 2005

the white walls rule
the in-formed skull
the erupting core
the pentagon at war

the diamond's glow
the ruby show
the emerald's bath
the golden path

the midnight song
the road is long
the burning-embers chance
the eternal dance

the kingship fight
the populous right
the maiden's night
the artist's plight

eden · July 2005

Dreams of Red wrote:

the white walls rule
the in-formed skull
the erupting core
the pentagon at war

the diamond's glow
the ruby show
the emerald's bath
the golden path

the midnight song
the road is long
the burning-embers chance
the eternal dance

the kingship fight
the populous right
the maiden's night
the artist's plight

Lovely words, now please explain the meaning

Dreams of Red · July 2005

ha..

the goddess of laughter?

eden · July 2005

Dreams of Red wrote:

ha..

the goddess of laughter?

Huh?
Come again please...?

Dreams of Red · July 2005

ok i guess you missed my reply to your 'objectification of men' post...

and no, i dont think anyone in pearl jam would take to explaining their poetic meanings... nor would i want them to

velvet I site · August 2005

Dreams of Red wrote:

the white walls rule
the in-formed skull
the erupting core
the pentagon at war

the diamond's glow
the ruby show
the emerald's bath
the golden path

the midnight song
the road is long
the burning-embers chance
the eternal dance

the kingship fight
the populous right
the maiden's night
the artist's plight

this poem is different. i think i would have made it "the maiden's knight", but then i'm a sucker for epic-tales.

you working on some etudes there Dreams or what?

velvet I site · August 2005

hello?.. is there anybody out there?.. Dreams? eden? ah whatever i'm going to the diner for some breakfast--there's nothing like beating all the old people to the early-bird specials and then asking them what took you so long i've been waiting here for over an hour..

peace.

Gallant88 · August 2005

You might get more response in the proper section, poetry.

Dreams of Red · August 2005

yeah but that is my fault not his.

mina · August 2005

Dreams of Red wrote:

the white walls rule
the in-formed skull
the erupting core
the pentagon at war

the diamond's glow
the ruby show
the emerald's bath
the golden path

the midnight song
the road is long
the burning-embers chance
the eternal dance

the kingship fight
the populous right
the maiden's night
the artist's plight

I thought that a flow of a sentence, a form were very beautiful.

The impression of this poetry

The heartless present conditions, The present conditions that contradicted it,
The present in confusion...

I thought that I wanted to change my consciousness.

Such a things and the present conditions do not easily change....

There is time thinking so...

but.....

From consciousness surely personal any kind of change.

Thank you for an opportunity!!

Dreams of Red · August 2005

mina wrote:

I thought that a flow of a sentence, a form were very beautiful.

The impression of this poetry

The heartless present conditions, The present conditions that contradicted it,
The present in confusion...

I thought that I wanted to change my consciousness.

Such a things and the present conditions do not easily change....

There is time thinking so...

but.....

From consciousness surely personal any kind of change.

Thank you for an opportunity!!

thanks again Mina.. change your consciousness? NO WAY! first of all these words are next to nothing, but your consciousness is way too beautiful regardless..

you're too kind really, that's the only change you need. wait, no, ah you know what i mean.

Dreams of Red · August 2005

velvet I site wrote:

this poem is different. i think i would have made it "the maiden's knight", but then i'm a sucker for epic-tales.

you working on some etudes there Dreams or what?

you've said too much asshole.

Dreams of Red · August 2005

i apologize everyone for the language and the flippant stories and rhetorical nonsense.. what can i say.. sometimes i just get myself all worked-up over nothing, it's a vicious cycle really.

anyways i'm seeking help as we speak, so please, don't ever worry about me.. i'll be worrying about you all the same..

:)thanks.

Dreams of Red · August 2005

III

Two five-year old boys before the poster of a nightclub,
On which a buoyant girl adjusts her garter,
Say something to each other or just stare
At the saurian whiteness of the thigh

Daimonian, remembering my childhood fears
On this earth of the adults, I grasped who you are.

In their night of distant shooting, fires on the horizon,
Coarse laughter, grapplings, harsh breathing,
The heart of a child is troubled. And you, a wanderer,
Your pity is so strong that you avert your face.

You are a friend of the innocent and the defenseless
Who long for the Kingdom, as was that young rich man
So pure that he blushed hearing a lewd word,
And really suffered from it, and probably for that reason
After his short life, they raised him on the altars.*

*St. Stanislaus Kostka

i am assuming the * marks dedication of this poem to that man.

MEtHeaD · August 2005

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Dreams of Red · August 2005

MEtHeaD wrote:

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i'm not really sure what to make of that MEtHeaD.. is that morse code? sorry, i wish i did, but i cant speak morse code, yet anyhow.

i like your signature there though.
peace.

MEtHeaD · August 2005

erm......oh yeah.. i meant it was really cool. yeah.

peace

Bluekey Maalox · August 2005

today i sat acros from a guy who went to school with jimi hendrix. kiss the sky doesn't mean anything. he wasn't allowed to kiss anyone. was he sterile from the war. can you imagine kissing the sky? kissing the sky means being scared.

velvet I site · September 2005

Bluekey Maalox wrote:

today i sat acros from a guy who went to school with jimi hendrix. kiss the sky doesn't mean anything. he wasn't allowed to kiss anyone. was he sterile from the war. can you imagine kissing the sky? kissing the sky means being scared.

being scared? i've never had that interpretation, interesting though, thanks.

to me i think of Love when i Look to the skies, and that kind of fits in with kissing, at least generally speaking, so i think that's how i'll continue to see It anyways.

jimi hendrix is f"in sweet.

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