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justamjustam Posts: 21,412
edited July 2016 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
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  • westsidepiewestsidepie Posts: 627
    justam wrote:
    Do you think it's over-population?
    Wouldn't a smaller community pay more attention to individuals?
    "It's just business"
    an excuse for mistreatment of everyone
    people and feelings
    they're ignored
    unappreciated
    taken for granted
    removable, replaceable
    disposable!
    not an old-fashioned razor to keep and love
    but a quick and basic tool: use it, scrape it, toss it
    maybe that's the ugly side of too many people?
    too many applicants knockin' at the door?
    young ones coming to accept less pay than the guy who's been doing the job
    billions of people over-running the planet!
    eating the food, sapping the land, salting the earth
    too many houses, strip malls, car lots built on soil
    where does the food grow?
    at what point will there be a plague to wipe out the excess?
    kill 'em all!!
    well, maybe not all...
    but, we can hope for the excitment
    what a mess!
    blood, bodies, stink
    the massacre
    the body piles
    oh, employers that so casually toss people
    what if you suddenly can't find anyone left to take the inhumane treatment?
    willing to give their time for pennies?
    what if your warehouse burns to the ground?
    what if there's lovely bankruptsy, rebellion, destruction, pillage?
    won't it be a grand 'ol time?
    rubble, it can be so artistic!
    all mixed up and full of scraps
    garden sculpture?
    no
    it'll be survival time

    Wow, I love this poem!. It really touched me. I am ready to yell your battle cry "Kill 'em All" (nice Metallica reference), and join in on the "grand 'ol time"--survival time is here. The flow is very effective, and so is the imagery. Maybe I will set it to music for you ;)
    To pie I will reply
    But mr. justam
    is who I am

    "That's a repulsive combination of horrible information and bad breath."-Pickles

    "Remember, death is a natural part of the workplace. So, when you see a dead body at work, don't freak out, just ring your death bell." "ting"-Toki Wartooth
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    westsidepie wrote:
    Wow, I love this poem!. It really touched me. I am ready to yell your battle cry "Kill 'em All" (nice Metallica reference), and join in on the "grand 'ol time"--survival time is here. The flow is very effective, and so is the imagery. Maybe I will set it to music for you ;)

    Thanks sweetie-pie. :)
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