"So Much for Eternity"

lobb152
lobb152 Posts: 193
edited May 2019 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Everyday we die
One day we forget to wake
Waving goodbye to this life, or,
Perhaps we remember our fate
With a smile upon my finger
I touch your name
Sitting, laughing, loving
Clouds running in place
As the tears roll down
The breeze takes me away
I wipe them from your face.
I am a nothing dreaming of something unknown.
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  • Coathanger Halos
    Coathanger Halos Posts: 137
    I'm surprised that this one hasn't gotten any replies.

    This hit me really hard. It reminds me of the day a good friend of mine finally got her headstone (her family couldn't afford one so we held a benefit). I sat there for a half hour touching her engraved name. Reality still hasn't completely dawned on me.
    I'll cut you in.
  • Brainofdz
    Brainofdz Posts: 1,617
    Gorgeous, and more importantly universally relatable
    "Stunned by my own reflection, It's looking back, sees me too clearly and I swore I'd never go there again, Not unlike a friend that politely drags you down,down,down"

    When you see me on the street, yell out "FAVO!!!"

    I've been to alot of Pearl Jam shows;So fucking what.
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    pretty!

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