Your hand in mine the soothing sea.

chadwick
chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
edited May 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
A soothing sea breeze is your hand in mine, with mine with yours.
By way of your hand in mine we grasp this walking shore.
You and surf’s crashing foam choir aloud do hypnotize me.
Inside your smile I see you as if you were all time standing still.
Captivated footprints we lead onward upwards onwards upward.
Giant hearts draw sand I love you initials.
Water waves wash tides out to sea you and me.
Hearts drawn initials into washed whirlpool’s island.
Our hearts drawn sand shore.
With your soothing hand in mine, the walking beach.
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • Jeanie
    Jeanie Posts: 9,446
    :) Aaah chaddles you do my heart such good my dear. Thank you. :)
    NOPE!!!

    *~You're IT Bert!~*

    Hold on to the thread
    The currents will shift
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    Jeanie wrote:
    :) Aaah chaddles you do my heart such good my dear. Thank you. :)

    hugs
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • Sian-of-the-dead
    Sian-of-the-dead Posts: 8,963
    Another beautiful poem Chadwick, thanks :)
    Been to this many PJ shows: Reading 2006 London 2007 Manchester & London 2009 Dublin, Belfast, London, Nijmegen & Berlin 2010 Manchester 1 & Manchester 2 2012...

    ... and I still think Drive-By Truckers are better.
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    Sian-of-the-dead wrote:
    Another beautiful poem Chadwick, thanks :)


    i meant to say thank you to you yesterday on a compliment you gave me on a different poem i wrote. so.....thank you for your kind words.

    :)
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • urbanhippie
    urbanhippie Posts: 3,007
    This is lovely Chad.
    A human being that was given to fly.

    Wembley 18/06/07

    If there was a reason, it was you.

    O2 Arena 18/09/09
  • harmless_little_f***
    harmless_little_f*** Posts: 8,005
    Some lovely sounds in this Chad. :)

    Makes me miss the South coast... :(
    'We're learning songs for baby Jesus' birthday. His mum and dad were Merry and Joseph. He had a bed made of clay and the three kings bought him Gold, Frankenstein and Merv as presents.'

    - the great Sir Leo Harrison

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