A Poem

Rhinocerous Surprise
Rhinocerous Surprise Posts: 4,423
edited May 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
S
...L
......I
........D
...........E
..............Y
................Poetry
Can be fun.
Smokey Robinson constantly looks like he's trying to act natural after being accused of farting.
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  • Jeanie
    Jeanie Posts: 9,446
    ...............................................................aS
    .............................................................you'lL
    ....................................never confess your sins, I
    ..............................sadly must resort, overwhelmeD
    ......................by your lies, to petty insults and abasE
    .............myself, by responding pathetically and endlesslY
    through twisted, sick and nasty, inciteful, truth-filled PoetrY


    Where's the FUN in that?
    NOPE!!!

    *~You're IT Bert!~*

    Hold on to the thread
    The currents will shift
  • Rhinocerous Surprise
    Rhinocerous Surprise Posts: 4,423
    Jeanie wrote:
    ...............................................................aS
    .............................................................you'lL
    ....................................never confess your sins, I
    ..............................sadly must resort, overwhelmeD
    ......................by your lies, to petty insults and abasE
    .............myself, by responding pathetically and endlesslY
    through twisted, sick and nasty, inciteful, truth-filled PoetrY


    Where's the FUN in that?

    Way to sap the innocence from it. :p:D
    Smokey Robinson constantly looks like he's trying to act natural after being accused of farting.
  • Jeanie
    Jeanie Posts: 9,446
    Rhinocerous Surprise wrote:
    Way to sap the innocence from it. :p:D

    pfft! :p:D That's what you wanted isn't it? What I did? I mean granted you might not like the content and I sure coulda used the bloody edit button to fix poetry but yeah, I did it right? :D
    NOPE!!!

    *~You're IT Bert!~*

    Hold on to the thread
    The currents will shift
  • Rhinocerous Surprise
    Rhinocerous Surprise Posts: 4,423
    Jeanie wrote:
    pfft! :p:D That's what you wanted isn't it? What I did? I mean granted you might not like the content and I sure coulda used the bloody edit button to fix poetry but yeah, I did it right? :D

    Actually, I just liked the idea of writing "slidey" in a sliding way. :p But I love that you took it as an invitation to be creative! :D
    Smokey Robinson constantly looks like he's trying to act natural after being accused of farting.
  • Jeanie
    Jeanie Posts: 9,446
    Rhinocerous Surprise wrote:
    Actually, I just liked the idea of writing "slidey" in a sliding way. :p But I love that you took it as an invitation to be creative! :D

    :D Good oh!!

    Of course I'm still cross about the lack of edit button!! :mad:
    So I could fix it, like this. :)
    Jeanie wrote:
    ...............................................................aS
    .............................................................you'lL
    ....................................never confess your sins, I
    ..............................sadly must resort, overwhelmeD
    ......................by your lies, to petty insults and abasE
    .............myself, by responding pathetically and endlesslY
    through twisted, sick and nasty, inciteful, truth-filled Poetry


    Where's the FUN in that?
    NOPE!!!

    *~You're IT Bert!~*

    Hold on to the thread
    The currents will shift
  • Rhinocerous Surprise
    Rhinocerous Surprise Posts: 4,423
    Jeanie wrote:
    : D Good oh!!

    Of course I'm still cross about the lack of edit button!! :mad:
    So I could fix it, like this. :)

    Despite its gloomy take on my inherently fun and bouncy slidey poetry idea (:D), I really do like your poem, Jeanie. :)

    I just wish we could just leave empty spaces there instead of the dots. STupid vBulletin. :mad:
    Smokey Robinson constantly looks like he's trying to act natural after being accused of farting.
  • Jeanie
    Jeanie Posts: 9,446
    Rhinocerous Surprise wrote:
    Despite its gloomy take on my inherently fun and bouncy slidey poetry idea (: D), I really do like your poem, Jeanie. : )

    I just wish we could just leave empty spaces there instead of the dots. STupid vBulletin. : mad :

    Oh it wasn't meant to be gloomy, just a reflection is all. :)

    But thanks. I guess I'll try to manage bouncy for the next one. :D

    Yeah, don't get me started on the wishlist! Dots aside, do you have any idea how hard it was just to bold the last letter of each line??? :D

    Ok, tis bedtime. Perhaps a bouncy, slidey to add in the morning. G'night my friend. Don't let freud tip you over the edge hey? ;)
    NOPE!!!

    *~You're IT Bert!~*

    Hold on to the thread
    The currents will shift
  • Rhinocerous Surprise
    Rhinocerous Surprise Posts: 4,423
    Jeanie wrote:
    Oh it wasn't meant to be gloomy, just a reflection is all. : )

    But thanks. I guess I'll try to manage bouncy for the next one. :D

    Yeah, don't get me started on the wishlist! Dots aside, do you have any idea how hard it was just to bold the last letter of each line??? :D

    Ok, tis bedtime. Perhaps a bouncy, slidey to add in the morning. G'night my friend. Don't let freud tip you over the edge hey? ;)

    Jeanie, I went over the edge a long time ago. :p G'night. :)
    Smokey Robinson constantly looks like he's trying to act natural after being accused of farting.
  • Jeanie
    Jeanie Posts: 9,446
    Rhinocerous Surprise wrote:
    Jeanie, I went over the edge a long time ago. :p G'night. :)

    Is that why we get along so well? ;):D
    NOPE!!!

    *~You're IT Bert!~*

    Hold on to the thread
    The currents will shift
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    Sliding slowly down the hill
    ..Living dying any way we can
    ….Into darkness it all leads
    …..Damning those who look away
    …….Every time strength is needed
    ………Youth be gone, sagacious age rules
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • Rhinocerous Surprise
    Rhinocerous Surprise Posts: 4,423
    Jeanie wrote:
    Is that why we get along so well? ;):D

    Seems like a safe enough bet. :p Nice to have someone to talk to on that long drop into pure insanity. :D
    Smokey Robinson constantly looks like he's trying to act natural after being accused of farting.
  • sachinc
    sachinc Posts: 117
    ...........Sometimes
    ..........I Look at myself
    .............In the mirror
    ..............anD I
    .................HatE what
    .........................You made me
  • Rhinocerous Surprise
    Rhinocerous Surprise Posts: 4,423
    Smiling faces
    ...Lean in close
    ......Indicating the general
    ........Direction we take into
    ...........Eternity. And the journey started
    ..............Yesterday.

    That was fun. :)
    Smokey Robinson constantly looks like he's trying to act natural after being accused of farting.
  • sachinc
    sachinc Posts: 117
    .Sometimes, the
    ...Laughter
    .....Is not forced
    .......Desperation that
    .........Evacuates
    ...........Your thorax

    Bacause it is FUN
  • Rhinocerous Surprise
    Rhinocerous Surprise Posts: 4,423
    Smart a
    ...Lecs commun
    ......Icate via sni
    ........De comm
    ...........Ents. Wh
    ..............Y?

    Because it can be fun. :D
    Smokey Robinson constantly looks like he's trying to act natural after being accused of farting.
  • sachinc
    sachinc Posts: 117
    Rhinocerous Surprise wrote:
    Smart a
    ...Lecs commun
    ......Icate via sni
    ........De comm
    ...........Ents. Wh
    ..............Y?

    Because it can be fun. :D

    For a worrying moment I thought you were speaking latin...

    Nope, I'm just slow
  • Rhinocerous Surprise
    Rhinocerous Surprise Posts: 4,423
    sachinc wrote:
    For a worrying moment I thought you were speaking latin...

    Nope, I'm just slow

    I like to appear smarter than I really am. :p
    Smokey Robinson constantly looks like he's trying to act natural after being accused of farting.
  • sachinc
    sachinc Posts: 117
    Rhinocerous Surprise wrote:
    I like to appear smarter than I really am. :p

    Well
    I gues
    S that t
    Tat is som
    Ething quite ea
    Sy.

    Fo
    Olish though to
    reply in a similar way

    But not without a cha
    Rm of Its own,
    And it occup
    Ies me for
    Nigh on 7 minute
    S
  • sachinc
    sachinc Posts: 117
    CRAP, should be:
    sachinc wrote:
    Well
    I gues
    S that t
    Hat is som
    Ething quite ea
    Sy.
  • Jeanie
    Jeanie Posts: 9,446
    Rhinocerous Surprise wrote:
    Seems like a safe enough bet. :p Nice to have someone to talk to on that long drop into pure insanity. :D

    :D You know, it might be us that are the enlightened ones? ;):D
    NOPE!!!

    *~You're IT Bert!~*

    Hold on to the thread
    The currents will shift

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