Your Court.

CodeRiot
CodeRiot Posts: 115
edited June 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
you said you needed time
to pick up the parts
that complete a whole
to spend time alone
and discover your soul
to make friends and have fun
like you never had before

so drink back the fluids
feel the buzz its coming
vibrating deep inside you
you know it feels good
i can't help but realize
leaving it up to you
was what we were meant to do

you said you felt inspired
to drop your job
and experience wonders
to lose your ego
feel what its like under
to move about from bed to bed
like you had something to catch

to suck back the fluids
swallow down, its coming
echoes of the screams
it's hard to feel release
and i can't help but feel
leaving this up to you
was what I was meant to do

but it doesn't make it easier.
I tried to be a better me
In the end I looked like the rest of them.
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  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    good stuff
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • deadnote
    deadnote Posts: 1,678
    well there is ramnifications for sins i think
    so let it be what it is

    i just wish life was more about innocence

    i wish that my 34 years were spent being perfect
    but im not
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    deadnote wrote:
    well there is ramnifications for sins i think
    so let it be what it is

    i just wish life was more about innocence

    i wish that my 34 years were spent being perfect
    but im not

    Why is experiencing life a sin?

    I think it's important to remember that innocence can also be a way of looking at events without cynical glasses.

    CodeRiot, I'm sorry I didn't notice this earlier, but I was away from a computer for a while. :)
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