Black

Buru
Buru Posts: 8,473
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Such vicious thoughts
Pollute my mind at times,
I fear they will kill me
With their slow poison,
Drowning all that is good
In blackness so black
My soul will forever feel
A hostage heart
Beating under the blindfold,
A small rock posed in inertia,
Cold and lifeless
Like a nature still,
Like a thing to admire
But never love.

I've hidden the darkness for so long
It is now stronger
Than it ever was before...
I've hidden in the dark
Since times so old
It is now into what I've grown,
A smothering black light
In a wilderness of stars,
An empty gaping hole
Sucking up life,
A small being spent,
Consumed by doubt and strife
The smiling girl,
Most definetely a lie.

Buru.

A companion piece to "The smiling girl is a lie"... a poem blurted out in dangerous times... or maybe some words to express the dark... I do not know, but here it is, unedited and untouched.

It's been a while, so hello to any old-timers that might remember me.
:)
y la banda de Guille... cuando toca?
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  • olderman
    olderman Posts: 1,765
    welcome back Buru :)
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • Buru
    Buru Posts: 8,473
    olderman wrote:
    welcome back Buru :)

    hello olderman
    :)
    y la banda de Guille... cuando toca?
  • Nast
    Nast Posts: 127
    Most definetely a lie.

    Just wondering the intention of the spelling...

    "definetely" (definitely)

    but would find even more appropriate "definedly"...

    definedly fine...

    -Nast
    The king of run on sentences...
  • Buru
    Buru Posts: 8,473
    Nast wrote:
    Just wondering the intention of the spelling...

    "definetely" (definitely)

    but would find even more appropriate "definedly"...

    definedly fine...

    -Nast

    just bad spelling... :p

    but it could work!
    y la banda de Guille... cuando toca?
  • V V
    V V Posts: 5,191
    aha Buru, u speak of the black hole i was looking for !
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  • Buru
    Buru Posts: 8,473
    V V wrote:
    aha Buru, u speak of the black hole i was looking for !

    I am that black hole
    and I am poisoned in this skin.
    y la banda de Guille... cuando toca?
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,390
    Buru wrote:
    I've hidden the darkness for so long
    It is now stronger
    Than it ever was before...
    I've hidden in the dark
    Since times so old
    It is now into what I've grown,
    Poison was a feeling
    until she learned her A B Cs.
    What was just a feeling
    became a symbolic gesture
    applied time to feeling.
    The darkness in this word made her scared
    of more than what the darkness could be.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Federico
    Federico Posts: 7,916
    buru...this is too sweet and charming for someone who had the pleasure of meeting you...destiny is so tricky, sometimes, i cant believe I found this thread today....anyway, its my fault, i was wandering in this section and i culdnt resist the temptation of reading this...
    its good to know, by reading this, that i havent been wrong in all that i said anytime about you and your soul....hope there are lots of hot coke to come!!!

    kiss and hug
    fede

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