when snow came.....

Righteous Jammer
Righteous Jammer Posts: 509
edited December 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
when snow came and the grass dried out
we laughed at slippery sidewalks and emptying streets
the nights cold blowing at our feet
frozen smiles, no one to meet
warm brandy moving through our veins
feeling no pain......
It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
but memories...they eat me
I've seen it all before,...
bring it on cause I'm no victim.
-Ghost
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  • trappedinmyradio
    trappedinmyradio Posts: 1,189
    a poet wrote:
    when snow came and the grass dried out
    we laughed at slippery sidewalks and emptying streets
    the nights cold blowing at our feet
    frozen smiles, no one to meet
    warm brandy moving through our veins
    feeling no pain......

    yeah, you're in fargo.

    there's more here though...i like it...

    no one wants to meet...hmmmm
    I'll dig a tunnel
    from my window to yours
  • Righteous Jammer
    Righteous Jammer Posts: 509
    where you from???
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    I am in Canada....I win....uyou know not of snow!
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Like a warm mug of cocoa (or a shot of brandy ;) ) on a cold winter's day, that's how your poem felt to me. :) Nothin' to do but enjoy me and you.... :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Righteous Jammer
    Righteous Jammer Posts: 509
    we can drink Brandy anytime~
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • Ali
    Ali Posts: 2,621
    a poet wrote:
    when snow came and the grass dried out
    we laughed at slippery sidewalks and emptying streets
    the nights cold blowing at our feet
    frozen smiles, no one to meet
    warm brandy moving through our veins
    feeling no pain......
    AS usual poet...
    stunning.
    takes my breath away,
    like someone alone on an empty beach...
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    a poet wrote:
    we can drink Brandy anytime~

    :) Well, since we're a bit far from eachother, how's about we promise to toast eachother over the holidays with a nice snifter of brandy? :) I'm game!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Righteous Jammer
    Righteous Jammer Posts: 509
    HO HO HO and a bottle of brandy
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    a poet wrote:
    HO HO HO and a bottle of brandy

    :D Hee Hee Hee! *clink* *hiccup* :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen

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