if i read your poems

lovin kind
lovin kind Posts: 268
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
so far no matter how close
thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
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  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,390
    Since when do you write like this? The posts I've read of yours have a completely different tone and purpose. Is your Friday feeling like Monday? (Not to be stupid, but it's the only thing I could think of besides a bad breakup or something.)
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  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Is Mr Fake less real than Mr Real is fake?
  • lovin kind
    lovin kind Posts: 268
    i guess i want this to go to the top again to show why therye leavin here

    its so sad sometimes especially with this post that i could be so wrong about life ,about the world , confusion just reigns supreme for a sec and it lasts for a lifetime
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,390
    FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:
    Is Mr Fake less real than Mr Real is fake?
    Yes! NO! I don't know, good point. For instance, I can always tell your poems just by the title, Fins. I don't think people need to stay in a rut, but when they travel outside the box usually it's for a good reason. I guess I asked, just the wrong way, if something influenced the writing so that it was so different.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    I was just musing on the topic of the original poem in a general sort of way. Thinking of Mr Reals, Mr Fakes, Mr Browns and Blondes, and Dylan's Mr Jones.

    :cool:
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,390
    FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:
    I was just musing on the topic of the original poem in a general sort of way. Thinking of Mr Reals, Mr Fakes, Mr Browns and Blondes, and Dylan's Mr Jones.

    :cool:
    So, that's British, right? Or, have you read "The Phantom Tollbooth?" I read it in 5th grade. In one section the main character meets the skinniest fat person, the fattest skinniest person, the tallest short person, and the shortest tall person. It was so creative it's the part of the book I remember 27 years later. I also remember, "The Pushcart Wars" which is a story of Ny pushcart owners getting fed up with trucks that parked in front of their carts. They started to spit nails into the truck tires.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    That's the Mr Men you're thinking of.

    http://www.mrsneeze.com/mrmen/meetmrmen.html

    :)




    I was thinking of a couple of baddies from Reservoir Dogs and a character in a Bob Dylan song. ;)
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,390
    I've seen those books - the Mr. Books. How cute.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird

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