I'm Sorry I Slept With Your Sister

HunterandHunted
HunterandHunted Posts: 140
edited November 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I'm not really.
I only said it to make you feel better,
And because I'd feel bad if you started a fight and I had to kick your ass too.

Even that night after I said sorry,
When we all got drunk and you passed out - we did it again.
Twice. Once in the same room.

Perhaps I wouldn't have if you hadn't tried to get involved.
She is after all, a fully consenting adult.
And she called you a stupid cunt, for getting involved.
But you ignited my vindictive streak.

I didn't really want to sleep with her again. But I did.
And it's her I feel bad for.

I can sometimes shock myself with my hypocrisy and rules made for my own private games - but at least I can admit them to myself.
Show me a better example of how to live and perhaps I'll learn.
But there aren't that many around.

'He who only learns from himself has a fool for a master.' Indeed.
And so much for all that.
What do you call 3 sheep tied together in the middle of Wales? - A Leisure Centre.
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  • Jeremy1012
    Jeremy1012 Posts: 7,170
    HunterandHunted wrote:
    Perhaps I wouldn't have if you hadn't tried to get involved.
    She is after all, a fully consenting adult.
    And she called you a stupid cunt, for getting involved.
    But you ignited my vindictive streak.
    this made me laugh in a nervous kind of way... like I'm not sure if its funny or not. This poem is malicious in the extreme. I kind of like it :)
    "I remember one night at Muzdalifa with nothing but the sky overhead, I lay awake amid sleeping Muslim brothers and I learned that pilgrims from every land — every colour, and class, and rank; high officials and the beggar alike — all snored in the same language"
  • moreandmore
    moreandmore Posts: 164
    HunterandHunted wrote:
    I didn't really want to sleep with her again. But I did.
    And it's her I feel bad for.


    was it size or lack of stamina?
  • HunterandHunted
    HunterandHunted Posts: 140
    moreandmore wrote:
    was it size or lack of stamina?

    What a drole, original response friend....
    If indeed either either of the factors you outlined were, in fact, in any way pertinent, do you really think I'd be feeling sorry for her?
    You really haven't thought this through have you....

    Using people to get back at someone else is never a good way of doing things.
    Minor nuances of conscience and regret often coming to the fore....
    What do you call 3 sheep tied together in the middle of Wales? - A Leisure Centre.
  • HunterandHunted
    HunterandHunted Posts: 140
    Jeremy1012 wrote:
    this made me laugh in a nervous kind of way... like I'm not sure if its funny or not. This poem is malicious in the extreme. I kind of like it :)

    Thanks Jeremy....I think all too often people are not willing to ask questions of themselves - the reasons for acting in the ways they do when a darker side of their nature comes to the surface...I'm willing to do that.

    Or what triggers these actions/reactions....

    Yes, its probably a little twisted and malicious - but then there is malice everywhere you look, if you choose to look hard enough - it takes many forms and peace, love and happiness can only do so much to camouflage it...Yet we still try to paper the cracks...
    What do you call 3 sheep tied together in the middle of Wales? - A Leisure Centre.
  • pinktips
    pinktips Posts: 40
    lol! i agree!
    [peple freak when they see someone's darkness.or hear ther black wordz.

    lif isnt fair and peopl suck,that's what i know.

    plus bein naugty can be fun!

    admit it evryo ne! you allllll hav a part thatz brused and somtimes it feez good to press on it........

    have hunted and waz hunted befor.
  • HunterandHunted
    HunterandHunted Posts: 140
    pinktips wrote:
    lol! i agree!
    [peple freak when they see someone's darkness.or hear ther black wordz.

    lif isnt fair and peopl suck,that's what i know.

    plus bein naugty can be fun!

    admit it evryo ne! you allllll hav a part thatz brused and somtimes it feez good to press on it........

    have hunted and waz hunted befor.


    Indeed, an admirable existentialist argument.
    As a good man named Sartre once said: 'Hell is other people'.
    What do you call 3 sheep tied together in the middle of Wales? - A Leisure Centre.
  • pinktips
    pinktips Posts: 40
    HunterandHunted wrote:
    Indeed, an admirable existentialist argument.
    As a good man named Sartre once said: 'Hell is other people'.

    he totaly said that and wordz are loaded pistols.

    didn't you jus say you cant liv your life believn in quotz?

    spin spin spin
  • reeferchief
    reeferchief Posts: 3,569
    Good stuff, one of the best things I've read in a while.
    Can not be arsed with life no more.
  • HunterandHunted
    HunterandHunted Posts: 140
    pinktips wrote:
    he totaly said that and wordz are loaded pistols.

    didn't you jus say you cant liv your life believn in quotz?

    spin spin spin

    As disinclined as I am to enter into dialogue with anyone who bastardises in the English language in such a manner, i'm willing to reply for one reason.

    That is - that quote was to back up YOUR SENTIMENT, I said it was an admirable argument, I never maintained that it was my position...Therefore investiture of faith in that quote - should you choose to - is solely yours....

    Spin, spin, spin, fall over.
    What do you call 3 sheep tied together in the middle of Wales? - A Leisure Centre.
  • HunterandHunted
    HunterandHunted Posts: 140
    NB: Faith and Belief are not the same thing.
    What do you call 3 sheep tied together in the middle of Wales? - A Leisure Centre.
  • pinktips
    pinktips Posts: 40
    bastardises?

    indeed.
  • reeferchief
    reeferchief Posts: 3,569
    Freedom.
    Can not be arsed with life no more.
  • HunterandHunted
    HunterandHunted Posts: 140
    Indeed.
    What do you call 3 sheep tied together in the middle of Wales? - A Leisure Centre.
  • pinktips
    pinktips Posts: 40
    to be is to do

    so

    do be do be do

    ~ frank
  • pinktips
    pinktips Posts: 40
    i don't think there's a 'stupid fuck' amendment, but i could be wrong. if i recall, it's some obscure 20th century lyric referencing a psychiatric professional.

    however, i'm having a really good time, alex.

    what do i win?
  • HunterandHunted
    HunterandHunted Posts: 140
    pinktips wrote:
    to be is to do

    so

    do be do be do

    ~ frank


    Can't argue with Frank's raison d'etre...
    Unless it is, in fact, a quote...:)
    What do you call 3 sheep tied together in the middle of Wales? - A Leisure Centre.
  • HunterandHunted
    HunterandHunted Posts: 140
    pinktips wrote:
    i don't think there's a 'stupid fuck' amendment, but i could be wrong. if i recall, it's some obscure 20th century lyric referencing a psychiatric professional.

    however, i'm having a really good time, alex.

    what do i win?

    Well, at least Mommy agrees, and lets face it - she knows best.

    You win Biscuits. Loads. Sorry - cookies....
    What do you call 3 sheep tied together in the middle of Wales? - A Leisure Centre.
  • brain of c
    brain of c Posts: 5,213
    don't take yourself so seriously.

    we don't.
    d'oh!!!!!!

    http://www.myspace.com/brain_of_c
  • reeferchief
    reeferchief Posts: 3,569
    brain of c wrote:
    don't take yourself so seriously.

    we don't.

    I am a tomato, ripening in a greenhouse
    from green to orange to red I go
    from looking sick to embarrased is how I show
    And then I get picked and ate.
    Can not be arsed with life no more.
  • HunterandHunted
    HunterandHunted Posts: 140
    brain of c wrote:
    don't take yourself so seriously.

    we don't.

    The Royal We? Collective We? Wee in a bucket?
    What do you call 3 sheep tied together in the middle of Wales? - A Leisure Centre.

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