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  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Here's my favourite modern sonnet. It takes glorious risks:

    Come Dance with Kitty Stobling


    No, no, no, I know I was not important as I moved
    Through the colourful country, I was but a single
    Item in the picture, the name, not the beloved.
    O tedious man with whom no gods commingle.
    Beauty, who has described beauty? Once upon a time
    I had a myth that was a lie but it served:
    Trees walking across the crest of hills and my rhyme
    Cavorting on mile-high stilts and the unnerved
    Crowds looking up with terror in their rational faces.
    O dance with Kitty Stobling I outrageously
    Cried out-of-sense to them, while their timorous paces
    Stumbled behind Jove's page boy paging me.
    I had a very pleasant journey, thank you sincerely
    For giving me my madness back, or nearly.


    Patrick Kavanagh
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,371
    That is good. Three cheers for poetry in the morning. I need to find more books of sonnets. Anyone have titles of books of sonnets by a single author that they would recommend? Again, I have the Millay, Shakespeare, Neruda, Sor Juana, and Rilke. I had a lot of the older poets (besides Shakespeare) but I threw them out because they took up space, and I didn't read them. Maybe I should go back to them i.e. Wordsworth, Keats or whatever. The poems olderman and Fins posted peak my interest, too. I just need book titles, and an ISBN would be helpful :)
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • olderman
    olderman Posts: 1,765
    "Lift not the painted veil which those who live"
    by P B Shelley

    Lift not the painted veil which those who live
    Call Life: though unreal shapes be pictured there,
    And it but mimic all we would believe
    With colours idly spread,--behind, lurk Fear
    And Hope, twin Destinies; who ever weave
    Their shadows, o'er the chasm, sightless and drear.
    I knew one who had lifted it--he sought,
    For his lost heart was tender, things to love,
    But found them not, alas! nor was there aught
    The world contains, the which he could approve.
    Through the unheeding many he did move,
    A splendour among shadows, a bright blot
    Upon this gloomy scene, a Spirit that strove
    For truth, and like the Preacher found it not.
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    One of my favourites, Jesse. Thanks for posting. :)
  • olderman
    olderman Posts: 1,765
    An Enigma
    by Edgar Allan Poe

    The "dear name" concealed within An Enigma can be found by reading the first letter of the first line, the second letter of the second line, etc. to the end of the sonnet--she was a poet and friend of Poe's.

    "Seldom we find," says Solomon Don Dunce,
    "Half an idea in the profoundest sonnet.
    Through all the flimsy things we see at once
    As easily as through a Naples bonnet--
    Trash of all trash?--how can a lady don it?
    Yet heavier far than your Petrarchan stuff--
    Owl-downy nonsense that the faintest puff
    Twirls into trunk-paper while you con it."
    And, veritable, Sol is right enough.
    The general tuckermanities are arrant
    Bubbles--ephemeral and so transparent--
    But this is, now,--you may depend on it--
    Stable, opaque, immortal--all by dint
    Of the dear names that lie concealed within't.
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Sarah Anna Lewis.
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,371
    Enormous moon, that rise behind these hills
    Heavy and yellow in a sky unstarred
    And pale, your girth by purple fillets barred
    Of drifting cloud, that as the cool sky fills
    With planets and the brighter stars, distills
    To thinnest vapour and floats valley-ward,
    You flood with radiance all this cluttered yard,
    The sagging fence, the chipping window sills.
    Grateful at heart as if for my delight
    You rose, I watch you through a mist of tears,
    Thinking how man, who gags up on despair,
    Salting his hunger with the sweat of fright
    Has fed on cold indifference all these years,
    Calling it kindness, calling it God's care.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,371
    It’s good to feel you are close to me in the night, love,
    invisible in your sleep, intently nocturnal,
    while I untangle my worries
    as if they were twisted nets.

    Withdrawn, your heart sails through dream,
    but your body, relinquished so, breathes
    seeking me without seeing me perfecting my dream
    like a plant that seeds itself in the dark.

    Rising, you will be that other, alive in the dawn,
    but from the frontiers lost in the night,
    from the presence and the absence where we meet ourselves,

    something remains, drawing us into the light of life
    as if the sign of the shadows had sealed
    its secret creatures with flame.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,371
    All that we've gained the machine threatens, as long
    as it dares to exist as Idea, not obedient tool.
    To inure us to the hand's more masterful lingerings,
    for rigid buildings it cuts starker stone.

    Nowhere does it idle, it gives us no chance to flee
    and leave it self-lubricating in silent factories.
    It is life, - believes it does everything best,
    making, arranging, destroying, all the same.

    But for us existence still can enchant; in a hundred
    places it's still Origin. A play of pure forces,
    which no one touches who doesn't kneel in wonder.

    Words still softly give way before the unsayable . . .
    And music, forever new, out of the most tremulous stones
    builds in unusable space her house fit for gods.




    Do you agree with this? How do you make a word italic?
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,371
    My life was tinted purple by so much love,
    and I veered helter-skelter like a blinded bird
    till I reached your window, my friend:
    you heard the murmur of a broken heart.

    There from the shadows I rose to your breast:
    without being or knowing, I flew up the towers of wheat,
    I surged to life in your hands,
    I rose from the sea to your joy.

    No one can reckon what I owe you, Love,
    what I owe you is lucid, it is like a root
    from Arauco, what I owe you, Love.

    Clearly, it is like a star, all that I owe you,
    what I owe you is like a well in a wilderness
    where time watches over the wandering lightning.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,371
    Or I shall live your epitaph to make
    Or you survive when I in earth am rotten.
    From hence your memory death cannot take,
    Although in me each part will be forgotten.
    Your name from hence immortal life shall have,
    Though I, once gone, to all the world must die.
    The earth can yield me but a common grave,
    When you entombed in men's eyes shall lie.
    Your monument shall be my gentle verse,
    Which eyes not yet created shall o'erread;
    And tongues to be your being shall rehearse
    When all the breathers of this world are dead.
    You still shall live-such virtue hath my pen-
    Where breath most breathes, even in the mouths of men.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,371
    Love dragged its tail of pain,
    its train of static thorns behind it,
    and we closed our eyes so that nothing,
    so that no wound could divide us.

    This crying, it's not your eyes' fault;
    your hands didn't plunge that sword;
    your feet didn't seek this path;
    this somber honey found its own way to your heart.

    When love like a huge wave
    carried us, crashed us against the boulder,
    it milled us to a single flour;

    this sorrow fell into another, sweeter, face:
    so in an open season of the light
    this wounded springtime was blessed.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,371
    #6 from Sonnets from an Ungrafted Tree

    Then cautiously she pushed the cellar door
    And stepped into the kitchen-saw the track
    Of muddy rubber boots across the floor,
    The many paper parcels in a stack
    Upon the dresser; with accustomed care
    Removed the twine and put the wrappings by,
    Folded, and the bags flat, that with an air
    Of ease had been whipped open skillfully,
    To the gape of children. Treacherously dear
    And simple was the dull, familiar task.
    And so it was she came at length to as:
    How came the soda there? The sugar here?
    Then the dream broke. Silent, she brought the mop,
    And forced the trade-slip on the nail that held his
    razor strop.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,371
    #14 of Fatal Interview:

    Since of no creature living the last breath
    Is twice required, or twice the ultimate pain,
    Seeing how to quit your arms is very death,
    'Tis likely that I shall not die again;
    And likely 'tis that Time whose gross decree
    Sends now the dawn to clamour at our door,
    Thus having done his evil worst to me,
    Will thrust me by, will harry me no more.
    When you are corn and roses and at rest
    I shall endure, a dense and sanguine ghost,
    To haunt the scene where I was happiest,
    To bend above the thing I loved the most;
    And rise, and wring my hands, and steal away
    As I do now, before the advancing day.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,371
    O, how I faint when I of you do write,
    Knowing a better spirit doth use your name,
    And in the praise thereof spends all his might,
    To make me tongue-tied speaking of your fame.
    But since your worth, wide as the ocean is,
    The humble as the proudest sail doth bear,
    My saucy bark, inferior far to his,
    On your broad main doth willfully appear.
    Your shallowest help wil hold me up afloat
    Whilst he upon your soundless deep doth ride,
    Or, being wracked, I am a worthless boat,
    He of tall building and of goodly pride.
    Then, if he thrive and I be cast away,
    The worst was this: my love was my decay.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,371
    Sonnets to Orpheus #19

    Though the world change swiftly
    as the forms in clouds,
    all perfected things fall back
    to age-old ground.

    Over what changes and passes,
    wider and freer,
    your deep song still hovers,
    O god with the lyre.

    Pain has not been understood,
    love has not been learned,
    and what in death removes us

    remains undisclosed.
    Alone over the land
    song hallows and heals.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,371
    Three birds of the sea, three sunbeams, three scissors
    crossed the cold sky toward Antofagasta:
    that's why the air was left trembling,
    why everything trembled like a wounded flag.

    Loneliness, give me the sign of your ceaseless origins,
    the path-hardly a path-of the cruel birds,
    the palpitation that surely comes
    before honey, music, the sea, a birth.

    (Loneliness sustained by a constant face-
    like a calm slow flower, constantly held out-
    till it reaches the pure swarming throngs of the sky.)

    Cold wings of the sea, of the archipelago, went
    flying toward the sands of northeast Chile.
    The night slid shut its heavenly bolt.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,371
    Those lines that I before have writ do lie,
    Even those that said I could not love you dearer;
    Yet then my judgment knew no reason why
    My most full flame should afterwards burn clearer.
    But reckoning time, whose millioned accidents
    Creep in 'twixt vows and change decrees of kings,
    Tan sacred beauty, blunt the sharp'st intents,
    Divert strong minds to th' course of alt'ring things-
    Alas, why, fearing of time's tyranny,
    Might I not then say "Now I love you best,"
    When I was certain o'er incertainty,
    Crowning the present, doubting of the rest?
    Love is a babe. Then might I not say so,
    To give full growth to that which still doth grow.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,371
    Soneto

    Feliciano me adora y le aborrezco;
    Lisardo me aborrece y yo le adoro;
    por quien no me apetece ingrato, lloro,
    y al que me llora tierno, no apetezco.
    A quien más me desdora, el alma ofrezco;
    a quien me ofrece víctimas, desdoro;
    desprecio al que enriquece mi decoro,
    y al que le hace desprecios, enriquezco.

    Si con mi ofensa al uno reconvengo,
    me reconviene el otro a mí, ofendido;
    y a padecer de todos modos vengo,

    pues ambos atormentan mi sentido:
    aquéste, con pedir lo que no tengo;
    y aquél, con no tener lo que le pido.

    Sonnet

    Philip worships me and I abhor him;
    Leonard hates me; and for him I yearn;
    for him who would desire me not, I'm weeping,
    and him who weeps for me I always spurn.
    To him who'd shame me most, my soul I offer;
    him who'd sacrifice for me, I shame;
    I scorn him who'd exalt my reputation,
    of him who'd scorn it, I exalt the name.

    If I complain that one of them offends me,
    the other censures me for some offense;
    in either case I suffer in my task,

    for each of them wreaks torture on my feelings:
    the latter asking for what I don't have;
    the former by not having what I ask.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird