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dreamncolor
dreamncolor Posts: 380
edited June 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i shall not find answers
anywhere outside myself
the truth lies within
hidden deeply
but there
waiting to be unearthed

i will not have the life
i so desire
until i deal with the one
i am enmeshed in now
we have but one
so i must decide

i cannot move passed
what i have yet to face
i must look at myself head on
not my reflection
not through others
but in me

life will not wait
time will not stop
love will not cease
so i must go out
and find me
in everything
and rediscover
myself
i'll ride the wave where it takes me
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  • dreamncolor
    dreamncolor Posts: 380
    grrrrrrrrrrr.....damn no edit buttton. typo....*past*, not passed. :rolleyes:
    i'll ride the wave where it takes me
  • violet ray
    violet ray Posts: 502
    and this is from the girl that said she didn't "do poetry"...right?

    good job.
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • Righteous Jammer
    Righteous Jammer Posts: 509
    good writing
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • dreamncolor
    dreamncolor Posts: 380
    violet ray wrote:
    and this is from the girl that said she didn't "do poetry"...right?

    good job.

    hahaha. :rolleyes: yes well...i have written all sorts of shite in my time...still do. this just kind of spewed out of me spur of the moment......came out right here. sometimes you just have to let it out....and it seems my *wistfulness* is getting to be too much over on AET. :p so i let it flow here instead for a change. :o don't worry...i shall not make a habit of it.
    i'll ride the wave where it takes me
  • Cree Nations
    Cree Nations Posts: 2,247
    nice :).......
    >>>>
    >
    ...a lover and a fighter.
    "I'm at least half a bum" Rocky Balboa

    http://www.videosift.com/video/Obamas-Message-To-American-Indians

    Edmonton, AB. September 5th, 2005
    Vancouver, BC. April 3rd, 2008
    Calgary,AB. August 8th, 2009
  • grooveamatic
    grooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    poetry to live a better life by...sweet...
    .........................................................................
  • dreamncolor
    dreamncolor Posts: 380
    grooveamatic wrote:
    poetry to live a better life by...sweet...

    thanks. tis always the goal. :)
    art, literature, music.......ALWAYS make life better.
    i'll ride the wave where it takes me
  • decides2dream
    decides2dream Posts: 14,977
    ha, what a hack. :p;):D but i still feel it.
    Stay with me...
    Let's just breathe...


    I am myself like you somehow


  • PJfaninmaine
    PJfaninmaine Posts: 216
    dreamncolor wrote:
    i shall not find answers
    anywhere outside myself
    the truth lies within
    hidden deeply
    but there
    waiting to be unearthed

    i will not have the life
    i so desire
    until i deal with the one
    i am enmeshed in now
    we have but one
    so i must decide

    i cannot move passed
    what i have yet to face
    i must look at myself head on
    not my reflection
    not through others
    but in me

    life will not wait
    time will not stop
    love will not cease
    so i must go out
    and find me
    in everything
    and rediscover
    myself


    I love this. People sometimes forget to take care of themselves when theres times of trouble and despair,, I love the last lines,,,,rediscovery is a good thing in order to love someone else you must first learn to love yourself.
    Very well written dreamcolor and I sure hope you write some more.
    If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
    (Angelina Jolie)
  • olderman
    olderman Posts: 1,765
    here's a toast to Dreamn's open hearted poem.. i like it :)
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • decides2dream
    decides2dream Posts: 14,977
    olderman wrote:
    here's a toast to Dreamn's open hearted poem.. i like it :)


    :o thanks. a rare, open-hearted moment. :p
    Stay with me...
    Let's just breathe...


    I am myself like you somehow


  • decides2dream
    decides2dream Posts: 14,977
    ha...how sad, bumping my own words......:o....but i am really thinking/feeling it once more. :)


    really on the precipice of *rediscovering myself*....scary, but also exciting...i can't wait. :p
    Stay with me...
    Let's just breathe...


    I am myself like you somehow


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