My Daughter

PJGirl2004
PJGirl2004 Posts: 58
edited January 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
The weight of her on my chest
upon arrival,
surprising.
The warmth of her skin against
mine,
devine.
The immediate attachment
and the unbreakable bond,
undying.
The promise of her smile,
like flying.
Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow?
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  • PJGirl2004
    PJGirl2004 Posts: 58
    what a dork! i spelled divine...devine! when i used to post poems back in the day, you could edit them. now i feel illiterate. oh well, that was just a quickie i typed at work while waiting on a fax. what can you do, right???
    Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow?
  • Righteous Jammer
    Righteous Jammer Posts: 509
    I really liked the ending of your poem...
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost

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