really good vibes

ISN
ISN Posts: 1,700
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
really good vibes tonight
just what I need.....
when you are starving
you could do with a feed.....
when things get silly
you can't help but laugh
and when you've been
crying a laugh
is worth more than a punch in the face
I like the quick pace
of positive thoughts
that make my head swim
in an ocean of love
and the water is clean
and pure
....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
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  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    "I like the quick pace
    of positive thoughts
    that make my head swim
    in an ocean of love
    and the water is clean
    and pure" - Man, I love the last bit to bits, ISN! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • ISN
    ISN Posts: 1,700
    let me reconstruct the letters of love
    for you in a game.....
    and get them to spell
    your name......

    Being......you're always welcome in my house.......in my heart, in my country, and in my empty circle......:)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    :) ISN, you're a sweetie! Now, if the circle is empty, does that mean we can fill it up with whatever we want to? :D I want to fill it with chocolate smiles, sunshine kisses and "mooshine missus, that's the life for me...". :D:)

    {{{{{ISN}}}}}} :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • ISN
    ISN Posts: 1,700
    you're gonna convince me to give you the best seat in teh house......I'll reserve the whole auditorium for you......and I'll be Hamlet.......and you can be ........em..........you can be.......I know.......you can be Shakespeare........you make me feel like dancing......:D
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • Nothingbetter
    Nothingbetter Wichita, KS Posts: 570
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    "I like the quick pace
    of positive thoughts
    that make my head swim
    in an ocean of love
    and the water is clean
    and pure" - Man, I love the last bit to bits, ISN! :)

    I agree. That stanza is beautiful!
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  • ISN
    ISN Posts: 1,700
    thank you......I didn't realise it would be so.......ya know......resonant with you guys......thanks Nothingbetter.......we only hope to change people and effect them in a positive way..........and it's all a positive feedback loop......jus smiles on top of smiles......and good vibes :)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    ISN wrote:
    you're gonna convince me to give you the best seat in teh house......I'll reserve the whole auditorium for you......and I'll be Hamlet.......and you can be ........em..........you can be.......I know.......you can be Shakespeare........you make me feel like dancing......:D

    I'd love for you to be Hamlet but sure as shootin', I am no Shakespeare! :D I'll just sit in the audience and applaud when appropriate. :)

    But dancin'!!! Yeah, there's somethin' I AM good at! :D So, at the Hamlet after party, we can just shake out booties 'til the wee hours of the morning. :D:D And hey, you reminded me of an old poem I posted. I'm going to try to find and resurrect it fer ya! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • ISN
    ISN Posts: 1,700
    okay, Being, but keep in mind it's 3am here......and even though I wanna dance......I'm fairly pooped.......so I'll just dream about ya......and wait for ya to post the poem........I'm so pooped......I might have to cancel baby tomorrow......but it's okay, cos I'll see him on Wednesday.......I get crazy insomnia when I'm ill........but maybe I won't get ill.......probably, I won't get ill......definitely, I won't get ill.......oh fuk I gotta go ta bed.....it's 3am!!!!!!!
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Get a good rest, 'lil lady! And be well! :) Happy dreams of dancing in a big field of flowers with all your friends and loved ones (with PJ playing in the background, of course). :D G'night! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • ISN
    ISN Posts: 1,700
    I will just check out your poem......it's nearly 4am......Good Lord!!!! no baby tomorrow......but I feel calm ya know......sweets.....:)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......

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