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  • A HitchHiker Poet
    A HitchHiker Poet Posts: 129
    sad,,but sad is good sometimes
    Don't need a raincoat, I'm already wet..
  • bossman3188
    bossman3188 Posts: 263
    i wanna bring back some of the old poems that have left this part of the message board....its been down so long i figured some should be brought back


    ~~~the classic bump~~~
    there'll be time for laughin'
    there's no time to cry
    soon i will be leavin'
    look me in the eye
    no matter what's in front of me
    it's your face that i'll see
  • pacifier
    pacifier Posts: 1,009
    I wrote this when I thought I would never have the love I needed from the man I needed and now that I have both I want to write something to express how happy I am, but for some reason inspiration never comes when I am happy. oh well, I don't mind :)
  • ISN
    ISN Posts: 1,700
    hey, it's okay....inspiration mostly comes when you're sad.....but when your muse is yoru friend, inspiration comes all the time......and I'm really happy for you.....I 4got all about you.....but now I remember......the long distance love.....and your beautiful poem.....I didn't read the rest of the thread last time.......I'm glad it worked out for you......:)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • pacifier
    pacifier Posts: 1,009
    ISN wrote:
    hey, it's okay....inspiration mostly comes when you're sad.....but when your muse is yoru friend, inspiration comes all the time......and I'm really happy for you.....I 4got all about you.....but now I remember......the long distance love.....and your beautiful poem.....I didn't read the rest of the thread last time.......I'm glad it worked out for you......:)


    No I don't expect anyone to remember me :) I know my poetry is not very good. I only ever wrote as a way to express my feelings and thought. I needed a way to vent or my mind would have probably imploded years ago. I guess that's why most people write. but some of us are artist ( i include you in this category) and some of us just trying not to go insane with bottled up feelings and thoughts so desperately scrible largely non-sensical (is that a word?) stuff on scraps of paper in order just to survive our daily lives (that would be me) :) but now that I'm happy for the most part the urge bearly returns to me. and i guess when it does i'm too lazy to grab a paper and pen, so the lines are just formed and recited in my mind and fade quickly
  • olderman
    olderman Posts: 1,765
    you people are awesome!
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • ISN
    ISN Posts: 1,700
    No I don't expect anyone to remember me I know my poetry is not very good. I only ever wrote as a way to express my feelings and thought. I needed a way to vent or my mind would have probably imploded years ago. I guess that's why most people write. but some of us are artist ( i include you in this category) and some of us just trying not to go insane with bottled up feelings and thoughts so desperately scrible largely non-sensical (is that a word?) stuff on scraps of paper in order just to survive our daily lives (that would be me) but now that I'm happy for the most part the urge bearly returns to me. and i guess when it does i'm too lazy to grab a paper and pen, so the lines are just formed and recited in my mind and fade quickly

    I never expected for you to take offence, and for me to be so misunderstood.....I only meant that I forgot about you in the way that there are so many people on here, and I get them all mixed up unless they post barrels of stuff, and I hadn't got a tag on you yet, because you haven't posted a lot in this forum.....I'm sorry if I hurt your feelings, I was being honest, I didn't know you'd construe it that way.......and again, I'm really glad you're happy.....and although I'm flattered, I don't think I'm an artist....and, yes, non-sensical is a word.....:D......
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • pacifier
    pacifier Posts: 1,009
    ISN wrote:
    I never expected for you to take offence, and for me to be so misunderstood.....I only meant that I forgot about you in the way that there are so many people on here, and I get them all mixed up unless they post barrels of stuff, and I hadn't got a tag on you yet, because you haven't posted a lot in this forum.....I'm sorry if I hurt your feelings, I was being honest, I didn't know you'd construe it that way.......and again, I'm really glad you're happy.....and although I'm flattered, I don't think I'm an artist....and, yes, non-sensical is a word.....:D......


    Hey, no offence taken. i was worried it might be taken that way, that's why i included the smilie face. i was serious, i don't expect to be remembered. sorry for the confusion.
  • sevensins
    sevensins Posts: 887
    i really like this. reminds me of that nick drake song..."one of these things". keep it up:)
    http://www.myspace.com/pleasetryagain

    http://www.myspace.com/alotalotbetweenus
  • ISN
    ISN Posts: 1,700
    hey sevensins.....I mistook you for setaside2......for a whole week.....whyja think I was so interested in yoru posts.......(true.....but.....j/k).....anyway since I had that experience, I find you a lot more interesting than hitherto.....hehehehe.....and, indeed, you are......
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • sevensins
    sevensins Posts: 887
    ISN wrote:
    hey sevensins.....I mistook you for setaside2......for a whole week.....whyja think I was so interested in yoru posts.......(true.....but.....j/k).....anyway since I had that experience, I find you a lot more interesting than hitherto.....hehehehe.....and, indeed, you are......
    lol, if seta wrote it it would be much much better (also longer lol). i miss his poems.
    http://www.myspace.com/pleasetryagain

    http://www.myspace.com/alotalotbetweenus
  • ISN
    ISN Posts: 1,700
    I know.....me too....he's very clever.....(sorry for fukking up your thread Pacifier)......
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • pacifier
    pacifier Posts: 1,009
    ISN wrote:
    I know.....me too....he's very clever.....(sorry for fukking up your thread Pacifier)......

    Go for it. As long as it's all friendly i don't mind :) oh, and I hope you didn't think I was being sarcastic when I said I thought you were an artist. I've gotta admit I don't really read a lot of the poems on here, but from memory I've always liked what you've written. And thanks for answering the non-sensical question for me. I'm so bad at english. It's my 1st and only language, yet I find that even most english as a second language people have a better grasp on it than me.

    While I'm here I wanted to ask you a question. My boyfriend and I are hoping to go overseas for our honey moon after we get married. It's a while away yet, but we're trying to think of where we might go. So anyway, to get to the point, I was wondering if we end up going to Ireland, is there any place you would recommend inparticular?
  • ISN
    ISN Posts: 1,700
    Congratulations!!!!! (I'm so proud that you've chosen Ireland as one of the places you visit).....I have to say that I definitely recommend the coast of Donegal......Killybegs, Kilcar, Fintra Beach......so lost in time......also, Cork, where I was born......is beautiful down in Dingle Bay etc.....plus the Giant's Causeway......Sligo and Galway.....NW........Wexford itself is quite beautiful, and you can get a ferry to Roscommon......although I don't know the North that well, the lakes of Enniskillen (sp) are very beautiful, and also last but not least......beautiful, friendly Dublin.....Grafton Street is still pedestrianised I think.......I grew up in Killiney which is very beautiful......and Dalkey too......(pm Fins, and he'll give you some tips too).....or just in this thread, if he reads it......

    who cares about spelling nonsensical properly......it's jus nonsense......
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • pacifier
    pacifier Posts: 1,009
    hmm, by that it sounds like anywhere we go in Ireland would be good. We are hoping maybe to go to a few countries, it really just depends on our financial situatin at the time. I've never been anywhere but australia, so anywhere overseas will be cool to me.
  • pacifier
    pacifier Posts: 1,009
    sevensins wrote:
    i really like this. reminds me of that nick drake song..."one of these things". keep it up:)

    Is that to me? to the first poem in this thread? It's hard to tell who people are writing to when there are so many different poems by different people. This thread has been a communal effort :)

    I don't know who Nick Drake is. but thanks (if it's to me :))
  • ISN
    ISN Posts: 1,700
    no Ireland's not that small......there's loads more places you could go which aren't as pretty.......look at those places on the map......there's a really good hotel in Rosslare (not Roscommon - I meant Rosslare).....which is called Kelly's but it's a bit pricey.......YAY DISCOVERY MADE IT!!!!!! YIPPPPPPEEEEEEE.......
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • pacifier
    pacifier Posts: 1,009
    ISN wrote:
    no Ireland's not that small......there's loads more places you could go which aren't as pretty.......look at those places on the map......there's a really good hotel in Rosslare (not Roscommon - I meant Rosslare).....which is called Kelly's but it's a bit pricey.......YAY DISCOVERY MADE IT!!!!!! YIPPPPPPEEEEEEE.......

    thanks. I'll keep that in mind.
  • sevensins
    sevensins Posts: 887
    pacifier wrote:
    Is that to me? to the first poem in this thread? It's hard to tell who people are writing to when there are so many different poems by different people. This thread has been a communal effort :)

    I don't know who Nick Drake is. but thanks (if it's to me :))
    it was for you. your welcome

    nick drake is amazzing:)
    http://www.myspace.com/pleasetryagain

    http://www.myspace.com/alotalotbetweenus

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