Ophelia's Nun
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snickerdoodle for president
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Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
I changed the poem a bit but, true to the notion of Bakhtinian dialogics I thought I'd leave the early version intact and post here the revised version, so the two versions can, er, chat.
Imagine an utterance
dialogic
eternally internally
clustering but uncluttering sense
making
magic
in space
endlessly polyglottal
zooming both slow
and at good full-throttle
Playing a dance
of each nuance
or trace
of a place
That a word has made
its skipping-glade
Buckleaping laughingly
and weepingly willowwailingly
and trippingly in thriving contradiction
of plural diction
on the multitongued-tongue
Dazzling sense
like
atoms
neurons
wobbling molecules
whizzing in infinite combinations
of pulse
and speed
fusing refusing confusing
expectation and genre
and that thing called commonsense
In wordweaves both comic and tragic
historico-romantico-prefabico
(Polonius a-gogo),
and
wordtotem monoliths of great stable totality
EXPLODE
in
endless in- ter -text
and they are
beautiful
s
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p
e
r
n
o
v
a
e
loaded
And in the internally, eternally, magic of your endless beauty
The infusions of mind, spirit, and soul
We do, indeed, shine brighter'..... Ah! A perfect illustration of the poststructuralist paradox. Does the signifier "Merlot" correspond with the 'truth' of the bottle I polished off last night, or do we hold in our thoughts a different "signified" of bottle-of-Merlot-ness? Perhaps we're dreaming of the same bottle!" -FinsburyParkCarrots0 -
I put this up in January, originally. Now "Troy" is out I thought I'd put it up again.
Hissarlik
Puzzled rubble stipples out the plain:
mute, brute jaw grey. Moss tassles overgrown:
insignia of Schliemann's lust in vain
for Priam's city. Signature in stone:
The recklessness of wonder. Disinterred
By one man's smash through Hissarlik: the fangs
of broken sherds and bones bite through the sword
of Progress. Never could we prove the songs
of Homer now. West Speculator Bold
has carved his nothingness into a mound,
the riches of which shadowed "Priam's Gold".
No trace of Agamemnon. Dream at end.
Schliemann's folly should serve now to warn:
Troy's lost. Today, we squander Babylon.0 -
permit me to say that's obviously very good.........they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......0
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Originally posted by ISN
permit me to say that's obviously very good.....
Is anything obvious? Poetry taps at the towering epistemological wall of truth-in-prose, inside the great hall of forced realities. It listens at this squarefaced wall of ideology, not for the echo of rhetoric resounding about vague space as "truth", but rather for sounds within the wall itself, for the electric fluid buzzes of the wall's deeper being, merging, constantly inconstant, in strange dialogue with multiplicitous beyonds of space and time and dimensions we don't yet know about except with our crazy hearts. When poetry begins to listen to the fizz of conflict in the solidity of structure, it copies the sounds of indeterminacy, of vital flow, and challenges all that is presumed obvious and immovable. Poetry moves, then, - yes it does - toward evoking in everchanging sound, an inexhausible, wall-lessly open universe of being and experience.0 -
well, then, I don't have permission....I only asked....things are obvious....
pearl jam is obviously a great band.....you are obviously very clever....I am obviously a tard....hehehehehehheheh....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......0 -
Flattery will get you somewhere. Where, I haven't a clue.0
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it's not flattery if it's true....stupid....I never flatter people....I'd rather flatten someone than flatter them....
I know my spades........they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......0 -
carrot juice is healthy0
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apparently....
good for the eyes....
they used to say leeches were healthy.........they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......0 -
One flatters with a spadeful of praise too. Look at the etymology:
DEFINITION: To spread. Also plet- (oldest form *plet2-). Extension of pel-2.
Derivatives include flatter1, plant, plateau, platitude, and plaza.
1. Variant form *plad-. a. flat1, from Old Norse flatr, flat; b. flatter1, from Old French flater, to flatter. Both a and b from Germanic *flataz, flat. 2. Suffixed variant form *plad-yo-. flat2, from Old English flet(t), floor, dwelling, from Germanic *flatjam. 3. Basic form *plat-. flan, from Late Latin flad, flat cake, pancake, from Germanic *flath(n), flat cake. 4. flounder2, from Anglo-Norman floundre, flounder, from a Scandinavian source probably akin to Old Swedish flundra, flatfish, flounder, from Germanic suffixed nasalized form *flu-n-th-r-j-. 5. Nasalized form *pla-n-t-. clan, plan, plant, plantain1, plantar; plantigrade, supplant, transplant, from Latin planta, sole of the foot, and denominative plantre, to drive in with the sole of the foot, plant, whence planta, a plant. 6. Suffixed zero-grade form *pt()-u-. piazza, place, plaice, plane4, plane tree, plate, plateau, Plateresque, platina, platinum, platitude, platy2, platy-, plaza, from Greek platus, flat, broad. (Pokorny plt- 833.)
http://www.bartleby.com/61/roots/IE413.html0 -
the placebo effect...ooh is that obscure enough?0
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see you're clever stupid....virry cleaver.........they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......0
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I cain't keep up with you two....I'm leaving....
I talk out of my arse....
obviously I flatter at random....that's what makes me such a bad critic.....
I feel virry small now.....skgnnknkskdkknmkgkdngnked....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......0 -
i was just joking, no harm meant xoxooxoxox0
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Write a poem each and you're forgiven.0
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oh...is that all it takes...I'll try....
ain't promisin nutthin........they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......0 -
yes sir carrot boy0
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carrot boy....ddddchchchchchchch?.....who the fuck are you?
yes, sir, carrot boy.....
that's made my day.....actually.....not really.........they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......0 -
Thank you both for your contributions.0
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