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  • Posts: 2,513
    snickerdoodle for president


    :D:D:D:D
  • Posts: 138
    Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    I changed the poem a bit but, true to the notion of Bakhtinian dialogics I thought I'd leave the early version intact and post here the revised version, so the two versions can, er, chat. :D


    Imagine an utterance
    dialogic

    eternally internally
    clustering but uncluttering sense

    making

    magic

    in space

    endlessly polyglottal
    zooming both slow
    and at good full-throttle

    Playing a dance
    of each nuance
    or trace
    of a place
    That a word has made
    its skipping-glade

    Buckleaping laughingly
    and weepingly willowwailingly
    and trippingly in thriving contradiction
    of plural diction
    on the multitongued-tongue

    Dazzling sense
    like
    atoms
    neurons
    wobbling molecules
    whizzing in infinite combinations
    of pulse
    and speed
    fusing refusing confusing
    expectation and genre

    and that thing called commonsense
    In wordweaves both comic and tragic
    historico-romantico-prefabico
    (Polonius a-gogo),
    and
    wordtotem monoliths of great stable totality

    EXPLODE

    in

    endless in- ter -text

    and they are

    beautiful


    s
    u
    p
    e
    r
    n
    o
    v
    a
    e

    loaded

    And in the internally, eternally, magic of your endless beauty

    The infusions of mind, spirit, and soul

    We do, indeed, shine brighter
    '..... Ah! A perfect illustration of the poststructuralist paradox. Does the signifier "Merlot" correspond with the 'truth' of the bottle I polished off last night, or do we hold in our thoughts a different "signified" of bottle-of-Merlot-ness? Perhaps we're dreaming of the same bottle!" -FinsburyParkCarrots

  • Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    I put this up in January, originally. Now "Troy" is out I thought I'd put it up again.

    Hissarlik

    Puzzled rubble stipples out the plain:
    mute, brute jaw grey. Moss tassles overgrown:
    insignia of Schliemann's lust in vain
    for Priam's city. Signature in stone:
    The recklessness of wonder. Disinterred
    By one man's smash through Hissarlik: the fangs
    of broken sherds and bones bite through the sword
    of Progress. Never could we prove the songs
    of Homer now. West Speculator Bold
    has carved his nothingness into a mound,
    the riches of which shadowed "Priam's Gold".
    No trace of Agamemnon. Dream at end.
    Schliemann's folly should serve now to warn:
    Troy's lost. Today, we squander Babylon.
  • Posts: 1,700
    permit me to say that's obviously very good.....
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Originally posted by ISN
    permit me to say that's obviously very good.....

    Is anything obvious? Poetry taps at the towering epistemological wall of truth-in-prose, inside the great hall of forced realities. It listens at this squarefaced wall of ideology, not for the echo of rhetoric resounding about vague space as "truth", but rather for sounds within the wall itself, for the electric fluid buzzes of the wall's deeper being, merging, constantly inconstant, in strange dialogue with multiplicitous beyonds of space and time and dimensions we don't yet know about except with our crazy hearts. When poetry begins to listen to the fizz of conflict in the solidity of structure, it copies the sounds of indeterminacy, of vital flow, and challenges all that is presumed obvious and immovable. Poetry moves, then, - yes it does - toward evoking in everchanging sound, an inexhausible, wall-lessly open universe of being and experience.
  • Posts: 1,700
    well, then, I don't have permission....I only asked....things are obvious....

    pearl jam is obviously a great band.....you are obviously very clever....I am obviously a tard....hehehehehehheheh

    :D
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Flattery will get you somewhere. Where, I haven't a clue.
  • Posts: 1,700
    it's not flattery if it's true....stupid....I never flatter people....I'd rather flatten someone than flatter them....

    I know my spades....
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • Posts: 330
    carrot juice is healthy
  • Posts: 1,700
    apparently....

    good for the eyes....

    they used to say leeches were healthy.....
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    One flatters with a spadeful of praise too. Look at the etymology:

    DEFINITION: To spread. Also plet- (oldest form *plet2-). Extension of pel-2.
    Derivatives include flatter1, plant, plateau, platitude, and plaza.
    1. Variant form *plad-. a. flat1, from Old Norse flatr, flat; b. flatter1, from Old French flater, to flatter. Both a and b from Germanic *flataz, flat. 2. Suffixed variant form *plad-yo-. flat2, from Old English flet(t), floor, dwelling, from Germanic *flatjam. 3. Basic form *plat-. flan, from Late Latin flad, flat cake, pancake, from Germanic *flath(n), flat cake. 4. flounder2, from Anglo-Norman floundre, flounder, from a Scandinavian source probably akin to Old Swedish flundra, flatfish, flounder, from Germanic suffixed nasalized form *flu-n-th-r-j-. 5. Nasalized form *pla-n-t-. clan, plan, plant, plantain1, plantar; plantigrade, supplant, transplant, from Latin planta, sole of the foot, and denominative plantre, to drive in with the sole of the foot, plant, whence planta, a plant. 6. Suffixed zero-grade form *pt()-u-. piazza, place, plaice, plane4, plane tree, plate, plateau, Plateresque, platina, platinum, platitude, platy2, platy-, plaza, from Greek platus, flat, broad. (Pokorny plt- 833.)

    http://www.bartleby.com/61/roots/IE413.html

    :D
  • Posts: 330
    the placebo effect...ooh is that obscure enough?
  • Posts: 1,700
    see you're clever stupid....virry cleaver.....
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • Posts: 1,700
    I cain't keep up with you two....I'm leaving....

    I talk out of my arse....

    obviously I flatter at random....that's what makes me such a bad critic.....

    I feel virry small now.....skgnnknkskdkknmkgkdngnked

    :D
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • Posts: 330
    i was just joking, no harm meant xoxooxoxox
  • Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Write a poem each and you're forgiven.
  • Posts: 1,700
    oh...is that all it takes...I'll try....

    ain't promisin nutthin....
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • Posts: 330
    yes sir carrot boy
  • Posts: 1,700
    carrot boy....ddddchchchchchchch?.....who the fuck are you?

    yes, sir, carrot boy.....

    that's made my day.....actually.....not really.....
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Thank you both for your contributions.

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