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justam
justam Posts: 21,415
edited April 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Sit or stand while
we peel the shell away
the invisible skin, push it out further
it creates a bigger space
I know what it feels like, but I
don't really know what's being done
open the peel, push the shell out
make it go all the way around
don't know what it is exactly,
I only know what it feels like
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  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    thats cool..
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    I agree. Nice one, just
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    Thanks you two. :)
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  • olderman
    olderman Posts: 1,765
    me three. peel away, justam, peel away.
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    olderman wrote:
    me three. peel away, justam, peel away.

    :D
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