Remembering October (for Nick Drake)
FinsburyParkCarrots
Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
Yellow plane leaves drape the black lip kerb that juts from the towpath in Jesus Green in mid-October; leaves, winded, gracefully slide down, yellow and brown into the glimmerings of river by Jesus Lock. In the mist of my breath that floats out among the heads of passing swans, I see a tall glimmer on the footbridge over the shimmering water, its dark green reflecting fensky afternoon grey on its way to blue. A riverman, watching falling leaves. On the other bank by Chesterton Road, stooping willows rock in gentle jazzy five four, a rhythm played by huge ivory fingers to a strangetuned guitar. Gullglide, high string arco, ending on a note of sustain, suspense, never telling how the river flows. A shadow, a glimmer on the bridge. A watcher, wondering if the riverflow is meant for him.
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thanks for that....it's absolutely beautiful....the voice is ghostly........they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......0
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this defies description....it's quite lovely............................................................................0
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This is stunning in it's artistry...like groovey said, it defies description..thank you for it...i can still bite my toenails.0
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Beautiful.Bright eyed kid: "Wow Typo Man, you're the best!"
Typo Man: "Thanks kidz, but remembir, stay in skool!"0 -
Thanks. If I leave my front door now and walk about 500 yards, I reach the River Cam. If I follow that river southward for about half a mile I come to the bridge at Jesus Lock from which Nick Drake is supposed to have formulated the idea for "Riverman".0
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Very nice Finsbury...you never cease to amaze me. Lovely work.
I just recently started listening to Nick Drake, and I'm hooked...PJ: Toledo-9/22/96. E. Lansing-8/18/98. Detroit-8/23/98. Detroit-10/7/00. Detroit-6/25 & 6/26/03. Toledo-10/2/04 [VFC]. Detroit-5/22/06. Chicago-8/5/07 [Lolla]. Cleveland-5/9/10. Baltimore-10/27/13.
EV: Honolulu-4/21 & 4/22/07 [Kokua]. Detroit-6/26/11.0 -
He's so good, yes. There's consummate measure and learnedness in his vision, there's eise economy and moving symbolism in his lyrics, and his guitar playing still sets a standard for folk chordal arrangement in open tunings.0
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I don't know why I typed the word "eise". I was trying to type "real" without looking at the keyboard and it came out as "eise". I suppose that's a bit like a lead guitarist playing a scale in the wrong position and finding they'd created a novel tonal effect from a mistake. "eise".0
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FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:I don't know why I typed the word "eise". I was trying to type "real" without looking at the keyboard and it came out as "eise". I suppose that's a bit like a lead guitarist playing a scale in the wrong position and finding they'd created a novel tonal effect from a mistake. "eise".
you mean you don't know the meaning of "eise"?
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grooveamatic wrote:you mean you don't know the meaning of "eise"?

I Googled the acroym finder. "Extendable Integration Support Environment." When we get tired of the UOLs we can move onto the EISE's.
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Fins I think the opening phrase could be gussied up a bit, I sort of stammer over it every time I reread it, but the piece itself if remarkably tranquil.0
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EvilToasterElf wrote:Fins I think the opening phrase could be gussied up a bit, I sort of stammer over it every time I reread it, but the piece itself if remarkably tranquil.
Jesus Green in mid-October. Fallen yellow plane leaves drape the river towpath's black lip kerb; etc etc
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