Ophelia's Nun
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Judith Neave ran her right index finger, panning left to right, along the third shelf of blue and grey cloth bound books in the case set in the alcove of the living room. White clouded afternoon light, from the back garden behind her shoulder, streamed through the closed French windows upon her forearm and hand as she played the tops of the books like piano keys. Each book reverberated a different memory. The old secondhand Oxford edition of Wordsworth, blue cloth with browning gilt, brought to mind Jeffrey standing clad only in a towel after a bath, on the landing at the first house they bought in Duke Street, reading aloud Maud in a mock parson's drone as she heard her laugh rebound around the bathroom tiles, she happy to take his water for her own wash. They'd been young students together, married, and had got that house when Jeff had accepted his first teaching post at the new Comprehensive. Ha! Yes, she used to scour the market in town for poetry books for him, she never forgot him. Stacks and stacks, he really did read them all, he devoured them. That was long before they could afford to move here. And then there was that time when she was on maternity leave from the University after Jill was born. She'd take the baby into town and buy old collections of Donne or early English translations of Zola, and surprise him with them when he returned from work in the evening. There they were on the shelves, those memories. And look: That original Faber of Eliot, with Prufrock, which he quoted to her by heart that first holiday together, their honeymoon out by the bright dunes at Southwold, snuggled on a red tartan blanket with rather warm Chardonnay, with the cloud perpetually threatening rain and wind blowing her straw hat down to the sea. Oh, that was a touch of realism in the moment of romance! How did it happen, now? Oh yes! There he was in his cream linen shirt and trousers, all sandy, his eyes closed, whispering, she in her pink dress, her breast sighing. all the time watching his lips, "Do I dare?" Then the wind caught that hat she'd left beside her and it blew it up over their heads right up in the air, spinning it round and down to the sea, with the tide coming in for teatime, showering sprays of foam on the glistening sand ...
Peter and Margaret were the last of the guests to go home. They'd said to Judith if she needed anything, just to call. Jill had been but had now gone to her boyfriend's: She'd said she couldn't take it being here, surrounded by memories, so soon afterwards. Judith was still in the black outfit. It wasn't right to change so soon, was it? The fabric itched a little. She touched an unfamiliar edition of Proust with her fingertips. Then she felt a warm light upon the side of her face. She blinked, turned, and opened the French windows, to let the afternoon sounds of a busy high street resound over her garden wall, through her garden and into the still living room. Flies poured in on the speared cocktail sausages and limp ham sandwiches from the wake, before now untouched on their plates on the table. Judith turned her eyes once again to the strange copy of Proust, "The Remembrance of Things Past", plucked the volume from the shelf and opened it in her palm, the soft dust jacket sensuous against her flesh. Then she saw her husband's name etched in someone else's extravagant hand, a Loop on the J, a flourish on the Y. And just as the sun blinded, she read the dedication.0 -
i sincerely believe that fins is working on a novel,
written in the classic tradition of the english language,
replete with a descriptive passage of his garden,
rest, his fields of vegetables grown wild,
his command and vocabulary of the written word
is indeed impressive, as is his apparent mastery of horticulture..
thank you mr fins for your great prose and metre
your contributions to the "challenge"
your references to mythology
are inspiring me to return
with a mature focus
to read more
write on fins and keep on thinking free..
btw .. you have also inspired me to read, with leisure this time, the great novel by (ms.) george eliot title middlemarch..
when i first read the novel, it was required, therefore i only got the parts i needed (i confess to getting by) to regurge to my prof..
i believe that the modern tv sitcom may owe it's existence to that novel..
thanks again mate and have a pint on me!!Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
As she slams the door in his drunken face
And now he stands outside
And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
And his tears fall and burn the garden green0 -
I shall enjoy that pint, olderman. Thank you Sir.
Have one on me in return, my friend.
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I know now those long shadows on the shore
of seaward gulls like arrows on the sand
and on the surf's green shallows came before
my first walk on this shattered ocean band.
I know those shadows fell upon the trail
of my proud fathers as they looked beyond
the racking waters, dreaming of a sail
to free them from the famine of the land.
Now I, with them, will build my ship and go
and leave my shadowed ground once and for all
to pass where sunpulse motions make the flow
of gently rippling guidings to the call
of one beyond the wave, a woman true
and beautiful, a life revealed and new.0 -
Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
I know now those long shadows on the shore
of seaward gulls like arrows on the sand
and on the surf's green shallows came before
my first walk on this shattered ocean band.
I know those shadows fell upon the trail
of my proud fathers as they looked beyond
the racking waters, dreaming of a sail
to free them from the famine of the land.
Now I, with them, will build my ship and go
and leave my shadowed ground once and for all
to pass where sunpulse motions make the flow
of gently rippling guidings to the call
of one beyond the wave, a woman true
and beautiful, a life revealed and new.
jeez fins.. i'm pasting this one to the challenge.. hope you don't mind.. i promise to write a good one for ophelia, 'neath the window..Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
As she slams the door in his drunken face
And now he stands outside
And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
And his tears fall and burn the garden green0 -
i walked upon the eastern shore with sand
hot between my toes as the salt filled air
consume my senses, strokes me with her hand
her touch was soft like dream whipped cream tis fair
she sang of love and weather in love's grasp
neither hides amongst rocks along the reef
nor washes to shore in clumps of sea grass
yet must be found for these are my belief -
while love's box is replete - songs of merry days,
the beach is a good walk for remembrance
of love in the past, so much is sweet lust
bring on the surf and the sharp sting of rays
from the jelly fish, whose transluscence
invades my senses, yet, for now, i trustDown the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
As she slams the door in his drunken face
And now he stands outside
And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
And his tears fall and burn the garden green0 -
Originally posted by olderman
i walked upon the eastern shore with sand
hot between my toes as the salt filled air
filled my senses, consumed me with her hand
her touch was soft like dream whipped cream tis fair
she sang of love and weather in love's grasp
neither hides amongst rocks along the reef
nor washes to shore in clumps of sea grass
yet must be found for these are my belief -
while love's box is replete - songs of merry days,
the beach is a good walk for remembrance
of love in the past, so much is sweet lust
bring on the surf and the sharp sting of rays
from the jelly fish, whose transluscence
invades my senses, yet, for now, i trust
Thank you!0 -
A sigh, a little drop of blood, a touch
upon a vase of orchids. Window breath.
An echoed wonder. "Love, you would do much."
A close of blinds. A still. A peace. A death.0 -
the still silent morning,
filtered sunlight in a dusty room,
an apparition of her form,
intimates to be here to bid us a final farewell
the dry wooden floors with madras rugs
are as quiet moments
paint us with sorrow
as the canvas of still life
lives onDown the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
As she slams the door in his drunken face
And now he stands outside
And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
And his tears fall and burn the garden green0 -
To kill and be a thing of nothing kinged,
You fought on muddy ground and felt black rain
pummelling your back and on your singed
lightning struck brow. Through a flooded drain
you'd plough a hollowness with sodden claws
of marshland victims scratching at the earth,
blood grey, to force your master's faithless cause:
dead land, his monument to hopeless dearth.
But there has been embayment here, in time.
I've seen what seven miles of orchards yield:
emeraldic olives, trees of lime.
I've piled high sugarcane upon a field.
You killed for nothing, soaking death in grey.
I'll taste an orange, fruited of the bay.0 -
As she stood there breathing with difficulty
lost in her black sorrow
dancing wild dances and reading her epitaphy
Far from the world where her spirit fought
trying to build a paradise in her meters..
Living in the edge... but...
dying every sunshine with the poets...
In her eyes a diffrent world
a sea for all the dolphins
In her heart a diffrent word
love the food of nymphes
Even in her last hour
she never left the poem
escape her lips
because she knew..
this world wasnt made for hers
but now she is going
to a paradise build in her meters....~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~
~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~
F.ZAPPA0 -
Originally posted by anOmis
As she stood there breathing with difficulty
lost in her black sorrow
dancing wild dances and reading her epitaphy
Far from the world where her spirit fought
trying to build a paradise in her meters..
Living in the edge... but...
dying every sunshine with the poets...
In her eyes a diffrent world
a sea for all the dolphins
In her heart a diffrent word
love the food of nymphes
Even in her last hour
she never left the poem
escape her lips
because she knew..
this world wasnt made for hers
but now she is going
to a paradise build in her meters....
I will keep this one for my daughter
(one day)
You´ve named her Rain.Write. Wind each new thought upon the stream;
and in its contradiction of response,
Or seeming stagnance, see that rippled gleam
That might suggest true movement. If you sense
a hidden wave in what seems blanket still,
Write more, wind each desire, and you'll see
The willows nod and rustle, and you will
hear the rushing babble of the free
gush of water, brimming, charged with light
That is your reader's understanding heart.0 -
It's such a lovely poem, anOmis. Thank you.0
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Above Slievemore, there, there becomes a cloud
undershone by dying sun, feint red,
now deeper, oh, so deep! Am I allowed
to cry, now that the Doona tide is bled
tonight of sorrows, healing into peace
wherein shall come the darling of my heart,
'O let these skying fires fall and cease
that once kept earth and ocean apart'?
To cry, 'Let moonrise come upon the bay
and let my lover greet me in the sound
of gentle crashing waves that lightly play
the air that makes the lonegull turn around
to catch its whispered, delicious song'?
Yes, I shall cry upon these waves in throng.0 -
Hello, prof. Fins!
What an inspiring day today, isn´t it?
It makes one dance across the room and and scream, after being
hit by the overdose of love and happiness.
lovely creation for your butterfly againWrite. Wind each new thought upon the stream;
and in its contradiction of response,
Or seeming stagnance, see that rippled gleam
That might suggest true movement. If you sense
a hidden wave in what seems blanket still,
Write more, wind each desire, and you'll see
The willows nod and rustle, and you will
hear the rushing babble of the free
gush of water, brimming, charged with light
That is your reader's understanding heart.0 -
It is, it is. My butterfly sent me
a birthday parcel! It arrived today,
First thing this morning! But, you see,
It's not my birthday until Wednesday
so my darling Julie's written "Not
To Open Until On the Very Day"
seven times upon the box! I've got
to make sure that I'm patient. I must say
I'm tempted just to have a little peek
inside to see my prezzies! But I shan't.
Even if my birthday was a week
away, I'd wait, in spite of happy want.
My butterfly, oh yes, she does inspire
This big old Finsbury, real name McGuire.0 -
hahahahah
wonderful!!!
wednesday, you say. good to know
so simply your words again have composed another melody
to soothe my ghost.
what would this world be like without your genius?
loads of smilesWrite. Wind each new thought upon the stream;
and in its contradiction of response,
Or seeming stagnance, see that rippled gleam
That might suggest true movement. If you sense
a hidden wave in what seems blanket still,
Write more, wind each desire, and you'll see
The willows nod and rustle, and you will
hear the rushing babble of the free
gush of water, brimming, charged with light
That is your reader's understanding heart.0 -
FinsburyParkCarrots McGuire.....thou shallt not peek into thy birthday prezzie.....or thou shallt have transgressed the first rule of international prezzie giving......
Rule No. 1....
and God said unto Moses.....
do not peek into thy birthday presents prematurely....
hehehehehehe....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......0 -
I shall obey.0
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i am the 700th. this is insane. stop while we can still get out!If there was a chair in which I could comprehend, I would stand always and embrace the path0
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