Ophelia's Nun

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  • Posts: 604
    laconism = Terseness or succinctness of style or expression.


    as per websters.com

    terse = Brief and to the point; effectively concise
    ~all is full of love~
  • Posts: 604
    Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    Thanks, TenA. That was this afternoon's effort! By the way, I got to the library this evening, to a nice secluded spot at the back of the study area, but someone behind me was eating out of a series of enormous packets of those Dorito-like thingies, and these bloody things stank, and all I could hear was this crunch crunch munch chew crunch crackle kapow crunch etc, as if the bloke was eating coal for his lunch. After an hour of listening to and smelling every rotten flavour of these things under the sun getting mashed and crunched, I turned around to tell this personage to shut the fakk up ... but it was the librarian on their tea break. Corruption at the heart of power, eh? Well, I came home, to see you all.

    :)


    she's prolly on a low carb diet
    and eating pork rinds

    PUKE!
    ~all is full of love~
  • Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    It was a bloke. But yes, as I escaped the library I considered there were further horrors alive and ready to leap out of his tupperware box....

    Dang-dang-DAAAAAANGGG!!!!!!!!!!

    :D:D:D
  • Posts: 604
    so, wait a sec...

    you guys LET men run libraries over there?




    wtfiuwt???



    :D
    ~all is full of love~
  • Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    He had a brick head, it was bald, it was dented.
    He dared you to hit it, you even consented.
    His forehead was furrowed, not by indecision
    But by a big boot from a warden, in prison.

    His nose spread flat out, like a steak in the butchers.
    His cheek was knife-scarred; it had never had stiches.
    His neck was all scrawny, tattooed with a spider.
    His unknuckled hands gripped a can of warm cider.

    He sat on the bench by the bridge on the river.
    He liked to get students with lobs of saliva.
    He'd stay, shouting out at the thick riverflow, or
    grey- dappling rainclouds. "Whaddoo I know, uh?"

    He looked like Montaigne in that funny old painting.
    Sometimes, if you heard past the raving and ranting
    He'd roar from his bench with his can or his bottle,
    He was that philosopher, going full throttle.

    There's cider unbought in the store's frosty cooler.
    The bench has been claimed by a lesser old drooler.
    The students aren't gobbed on, the river runs faster
    Perhaps there's some spirit there, giving it lustre.
  • Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Do you wake? Do you blink? Do you stretch in arousal?
    Draw back the curtains? Give light good perusal?
    Head for the kitchen? Yawn loudly? Feel lino
    beneath your cold feet? Take the bottle of vino
    you finished last night, to line up in the passage
    outside the back door? Fry bacon and sausage?
    Make tea with the teabag left in for good measure?
    Are you feeling your belly warmed up with good pleasure?

    Or do you survive in some deep inner cosmos,
    That doesn't have turkey and pudding at Christmas,
    or bathrooms, or clippers for toenails, or Colgate?
    Are you Ideal Text and are we just the Vulgate?
    I reckon you could yet consider the priesthood,
    As Jupiter's Priestess, of course, for you sure would
    need to be different. Well, You join the Deep Thinkers.
    I'll eat my breakfast and laugh at your blinkers.
  • Posts: 604
    jupiter's priestess...

    nice :)
    ~all is full of love~
  • Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    If this thread was Elvis
    would it be that Fat 'n' Sweaty Guy,
    or more that Aloha from Hawaii Fella,
    ridin' the galactic telecast,
    all Proud Mary and flares
    before the cheeseburgers kicked
    into play?

    :D
  • Posts: 604
    hard to say
    you know, elvis was
    a constant work of progress :D


    viva la finsbury
    ~all is full of love~
  • Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Shouldn't it be "le finsbury"?
    From Las Finsos ...

    :D

    Las Finsos basement ...
  • Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Originally posted by dyaogirl

    I drink my Merlot
    with a shot of Tequila

    Telescopic visions of guardian angels
    Paint pictures of stars
    Their Distortions of light
    Shine on dimly lit paths

    Hey, another shot perhaps
    I strain and grope for the bridge to heaven
    Oh, but for those dimly lit stars
    The heavens unfold into wordless nothings


    Knowingly I knock the scope to the ground

    Yet, here it is

    It’s not them never was

    It’s me


    I’m reflected in those countless the grains of sand
    Illuminating perfection on this beautiful beach
    My tangerine toes buried in its warmth
    I radiate sun and shape the stars
    Death is not the bridge to heaven
    As I tune in and drink my Merlot
    with a shot of Tequila


    Forever in Blue Agave Dreams

    :):):)
  • Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    I love. I love.
    Love in an active voice.


    :)
  • Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    These days, my heart is wintered and my memory is bare
    and twisted as the dark and windworn boughs
    The store for spring's deserting me - there's nothing for my ear
    But echoes from the fleeing raingull's cries
    The hands that gave are stripped and torn, my eyes let in the chill
    The path to me is taken by the ice
    And i will die like this, to let the stormwind have its will
    If time has ceased to lend to me your voice

    Before the ferns were red and still, before the river froze
    you lay by me and sang, to match my bloom
    and all the skies were stretched to light the one unbriared rose
    Beneath my young and heavy blossom's gleam
    There, the sunning meadows tossed their curls and kept us free
    to whisper our wild love inside the breeze
    Until an old wind swooped to tear life's flame away from me
    The day the first bird rose out for the seas

    Tonight will have the cries of wolves come sail through me again:
    I'll amplify each near and hunting call.
    If my dead frame can sound, to warn the deer that roams alone
    to run, then I'll be pleased my heart is still.
    If there's so sun returning here, the ravens are my stars
    and on these mountain fields, no rose will grow:
    the river will not thaw my love, unless you lend your voice -
    Return the song that only my ear knew.


    That's an older lyric that I used to sing. Strange to read it now. It almost seems to belong to another lifetime. Now, I'll write some new ones for today.
  • Posts: 185
    was looking for the words of praise for quite some time...

    still none too express the agitation this poem causes in my head.

    thank you for sharing
    Write. Wind each new thought upon the stream;
    and in its contradiction of response,
    Or seeming stagnance, see that rippled gleam
    That might suggest true movement. If you sense
    a hidden wave in what seems blanket still,
    Write more, wind each desire, and you'll see
    The willows nod and rustle, and you will
    hear the rushing babble of the free
    gush of water, brimming, charged with light
    That is your reader's understanding heart.
  • Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Here's one I just wrote a few minutes ago. It's about a homeless woman who sleeps in the reference section of my local public library.

    Black woollen hat. Black bomber jacket. Gloves,
    fingerless. Socks. Shoes, off. Skin, death grey.
    Lips, blanched, vice tight. Eyes shut. She rarely moves,
    Slouched at that 'private study' desk all day
    (The one she comes to sleep at, from the street).
    It's nearly June. She wants the window shut
    that might let out the stench or ease the heat.
    She's cold. Someone shouts out, "Kick out that mutt."
    She snores. A man and woman enter now,
    Their stagey whispers hissing in their ears
    As they stand right above her. "God! I know
    It's her!", this woman splutters, wiping jetted tears
    from both her cheeks. "There's nothing we can do",
    That man says, making distance. "Come, let's go."
  • Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Rushing bejinnied river fumblerumbling bifurcating brilliances of rainbowed veining redorangeyellowbluegreen foamy angel vistas living thriving delivering lopsytopsy bleachysuntizzed burblegleaming shiftfoldecstatic electropulsing waves of forwardshooting fourwardwayward forking courses insideoutveloping leaping mergeshimmersploshing explosions upon explosions, joy upon chaos upon joy, orgasms of sun expanding water, streaking shapeless golds and rolls of flashing whitestar freckles under lightblistering pinking breathing skyeyed salmonshoals pushing pushing pushing the light the motion the jump the force the fizzing reaching shooting of uncapturable nows and nows and nows in this evershifting riverring scene under leafpalms in green, breezenodding the beat from the windweaved cloudbird skypulse convulsing unclosing unsealing forever bright crescents of essence the essence of Yes
  • Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    A pier-glass, a Circle of Friends statue,
    Merlot bought from Eddie's market,
    A bottle of glittering red,
    and candlelight thriving on living room walls:
    I travelled to you that first night.
    I touched your goldenhair in rolling flow
    And wept when you told of your love for me.
    Under the dancing tongues of blazing wonder
    I kissed your lips, lovebalmed for me.
    Over oceans, but knowing the pulse of earth,
    Sensing love's path of energy
    between dimensions of stillness
    I'll come tonight and hold you in my arms,
    as I have every night since our first touch.
    Oh, my love, my love,
    Blissweaver ,
    Jewelstar,
    Earthpulse,
    Heaven,
    Home.
  • Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    ... Some never love in colour
    But need to love in grey,
    And spoil new loves with dolour
    From old chances thrown away?

    I mean, hey!
    See dawn, today?
    Those reds,
    those yellows?

    No?

    You ARE strange fellows,
    indeed. Agreed? Oh.

    :D
  • Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Those black plugs in the bog, glutting up
    the throats of holes in earth, they're not
    stagnant mud, there. That's water.
    Go up with your wellies.
    Sink a boot down. Deeper! See now?
    Well, Archimedes, look at the spawn rising,
    brimming, spilling life. There's a flow!
    Feel it lapping on the rubber, there.
    A spring, nearby. This is water
    from the ground, not just bucketed from above,
    spat down from Slievemore's chin of
    Desperate Dan quartzjaw blue,
    And left to fester.
    This is where you get your images of dull,
    choking earth and strangled weeds,
    But you don't even go up to the mud
    and feel it!

    Look there!
    Feel! Hear! Here!
    It's alive,
    adance,
    in play ....

    See, see now, see
    the greenness of the reeds?
    Do, do now,
    touch a posy,
    Shining, hidden
    on heatherpurpled headland;
    Now, plod
    Where otters plod,
    Rustle onward
    To love,
    Where loving rustles are abundant

    And know the rhythm of the pulse of mud
    Harbouring small life.
    Know the shimmerings of forms in rushing grass
    And know the life of bogland.
    Know of love.
  • Posts: 185
    Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    ... Some never love in colour
    But need to love in grey,
    And spoil new loves with dolour
    From old chances thrown away?

    I mean, hey!
    See dawn, today?
    Those reds,
    those yellows?

    No?

    You ARE strange fellows,
    indeed. Agreed? Oh.

    :D

    Feeling happiness, most greatest feelings,
    Love, turmoil, euphoria above all,
    Words go pass me, when tempted to assay
    The contraction of my body, brought forth by
    Touch, or kiss, or deep look into your eyes…

    Time will stop - the gap between filled
    With nothing else arousing my curiosity.
    Just colours of colours, but different colours
    Stroke my eyes, escort me throughout.

    Another time…
    When shadow comes upon my heart,
    When nightmares as release would serve,
    When left alone in salvage of my body,
    I write, I muse, I write again…
    Write. Wind each new thought upon the stream;
    and in its contradiction of response,
    Or seeming stagnance, see that rippled gleam
    That might suggest true movement. If you sense
    a hidden wave in what seems blanket still,
    Write more, wind each desire, and you'll see
    The willows nod and rustle, and you will
    hear the rushing babble of the free
    gush of water, brimming, charged with light
    That is your reader's understanding heart.

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