A song i wrote!

corduroy_vedder
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River with no bridge!
lacey walks by the river,
trying to get to the otherside,
but lacey found a river with no bridge.
What is the use of a river with no bridge?
( CHORUS)
Lacey's found a river with no bridge,
walking , thinking of the otherside
but Lacey's found a river with no bridge.
Lacey walks her way back,
Thinking of the way she came,
but she forgot the way, it all looks the same,
it would be so much easier if she was on the otherside!
so.......
(chorus)
Lacey stands alone,
looks upon the moonlight stars,
it's about midnight, and Lacey still hasn't a wish towards the otherside, but Lacey found a river with no bridge
(CHORUS)
Lacey walks by, lacey walks by the river, until she's grey and old.
Her eyes not seeing the sign>> a bridge down the road!
I wrote this about a bridge in the village i live in, which has been taken away from the river, it makes my journey to school so much more difficult. lol. there you go!!!! please reply with comments!
lacey walks by the river,
trying to get to the otherside,
but lacey found a river with no bridge.
What is the use of a river with no bridge?
( CHORUS)
Lacey's found a river with no bridge,
walking , thinking of the otherside
but Lacey's found a river with no bridge.
Lacey walks her way back,
Thinking of the way she came,
but she forgot the way, it all looks the same,
it would be so much easier if she was on the otherside!
so.......
(chorus)
Lacey stands alone,
looks upon the moonlight stars,
it's about midnight, and Lacey still hasn't a wish towards the otherside, but Lacey found a river with no bridge
(CHORUS)
Lacey walks by, lacey walks by the river, until she's grey and old.
Her eyes not seeing the sign>> a bridge down the road!
I wrote this about a bridge in the village i live in, which has been taken away from the river, it makes my journey to school so much more difficult. lol. there you go!!!! please reply with comments!
I don't live today.....Maybe tomorrow?-Jimi Hendrix
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Lacey,eh?
Well done, nephew.
Yer uncle Finsbury0 -
it is hard to comment it only by impression of its lyric but please write me chords and bpm and melody of it and i will tell you then:)me: www.myspace.com/mariomarcinek
my band: www.myspace.com/mofokillerain
official site: www.stonerock.sk0 -
Yeh, it was a toss between lacey and basey. Lacey came out triumphant.I don't live today.....Maybe tomorrow?-Jimi Hendrix0
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