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                    dark skies, damp trees
stripped of leaves
without a blanket of snow
naked and wounded
broken knarled fingers, desperately reaching
standing wet, grey and black
against the still dark charcoal sky
distant lightning, thunder and those
close, still. glowing skies
why do the trees seem so sad at these times?
this evening, as the sun was dropping
they seemed vulnerable like a woman in a torn dress
with ripped stockings
having to stand before a crowd
                stripped of leaves
without a blanket of snow
naked and wounded
broken knarled fingers, desperately reaching
standing wet, grey and black
against the still dark charcoal sky
distant lightning, thunder and those
close, still. glowing skies
why do the trees seem so sad at these times?
this evening, as the sun was dropping
they seemed vulnerable like a woman in a torn dress
with ripped stockings
having to stand before a crowd
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            i could see it clearly and i know the view well..seen it many times as i love nature and being out in her..awesome writing..thank you for sharing it..for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7
 "Hear me, my chiefs!
 I am tired; my heart is
 sick and sad. From where
 the sun stands I will fight
 no more forever."
 Chief Joseph - Nez Perce0
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            Thanks for the encouragement. &&&&&&&&&&&&&&0 &&&&&&&&&&&&&&0
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            I love the analogy you made, and I actually felt like I was standing amidst those trees!Feels Good Inc.0
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            beautiful. winter for many reasons, is my favourite time of year.hear my name
 take a good look
 this could be the day
 hold my hand
 lie beside me
 i just need to say0
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            Thanks Bu2 and cate. &&&&&&&&&&&&&&0 &&&&&&&&&&&&&&0
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