Numbers

olderman
olderman Posts: 1,765
edited July 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
report indicates numbered reasons
is it your reasoned conclusion
that this murder was ok?

that the numbered tags on the victims legs

justified our hatred,

as this is our conclusive argue .. mint .. filled with a breath cleansing scent

is it a love so madly,
so very sadly,
so very much her way,
tell me whatchu say...

her charms take away all doubt..

love her within and without :D
Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
As she slams the door in his drunken face
And now he stands outside
And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
And his tears fall and burn the garden green
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  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    to answer the question - no.
    murder is never justifiable. not by our hatred. our morality, which the instant we make such a decision becomes questionable. nor by some deluded sense of revenge.


    on a lighter note, i like it :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    from where on earth does this come, love?
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    "as this is our conclusive argue .. mint .. filled with a breath cleansing scent"

    argue...mint! I LOVE it! I love a good play on words. This was different and I really think it's fun, in a weird sort of way...which is to say, that I very much enjoyed the time my eyes were filtering and my brain was absorbing it. :D Methinks I shall have to have a gander at this one again--some reabsorbtion--see if anything changes or rearranges. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen

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