OK, I found it!

little_wish
little_wish England, The North Posts: 532
edited January 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Well after a long discussion with Yellow, I have decided to post my imaginary poem!
I wrote this whilst bored in a history class last year. I wanted to be anywhere but in that class-room!!

A random land

In a land where snakes can walk
In a land where ducks are yellow
In a land where there are no walls
It really is quite mellow

In a land where elephants are pink and blue
In a land where a dog can climb a tree
In a land where rabbits are orange
That's where you'll find me

With the walking snakes, the yellow ducks
And the dogs that climb the trees...
I'm all alone, all on my own
Just them and little old me!!

DONT JUDGE ME!! I like imaginary worlds!
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"The live shows? Well, that's church on Sundays"
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  • ||Release_Me||
    ||Release_Me|| Posts: 1,871
    Originally posted by Inside|The|Well
    Well after a long discussion with Yellow, I have decided to post my imaginary poem!
    I wrote this whilst bored in a history class last year. I wanted to be anywhere but in that class-room!!

    A random land

    In a land where snakes can walk
    In a land where ducks are yellow
    In a land where there are no walls
    It really is quite mellow

    In a land where elephants are pink and blue
    In a land where a dog can climb a tree
    In a land where rabbits are orange
    That's where you'll find me

    With the walking snakes, the yellow ducks
    And the dogs that climb the trees...
    I'm all alone, all on my own
    Just them and little old me!!

    DONT JUDGE ME!! I like imaginary worlds!

    **Applauds** Well done sweetie! Very good read!
    "This town deserves a better class of criminal... and I'm gonna give it to them."

  • little_wish
    little_wish England, The North Posts: 532
    Stop gettin distracted!
    But thanks! lol
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    "The live shows? Well, that's church on Sundays"
  • ||Release_Me||
    ||Release_Me|| Posts: 1,871
    Originally posted by Inside|The|Well
    Stop gettin distracted!
    But thanks! lol

    Stop checkin' up on me! lol
    I've already decided, work can be done later. I need to catch up on my board gossip!
    "This town deserves a better class of criminal... and I'm gonna give it to them."

  • little_wish
    little_wish England, The North Posts: 532
    Hehe always a good idea!

    You got any songs/ poetry u wanna post? You write songs.. I know you do! < insert evil laugh here>
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    "The live shows? Well, that's church on Sundays"
  • ||Release_Me||
    ||Release_Me|| Posts: 1,871
    Originally posted by Inside|The|Well
    Hehe always a good idea!

    You got any songs/ poetry u wanna post? You write songs.. I know you do! < insert evil laugh here>

    Yeah but i don't know where they are. They're somewhere in my room so i'll dig them out later. They suck though!
    "This town deserves a better class of criminal... and I'm gonna give it to them."

  • little_wish
    little_wish England, The North Posts: 532
    I'm sure they dont! You should def post something on here though, I wanna see ur stuff ;)
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    "The live shows? Well, that's church on Sundays"
  • ||Release_Me||
    ||Release_Me|| Posts: 1,871
    Originally posted by Inside|The|Well
    I'm sure they dont! You should def post something on here though, I wanna see ur stuff ;)

    **Ignoress dirty response in head** Ok i'll have a look later.
    "This town deserves a better class of criminal... and I'm gonna give it to them."

  • little_wish
    little_wish England, The North Posts: 532
    *Awaits with baited breath*
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    "The live shows? Well, that's church on Sundays"
  • Yellow
    Yellow Posts: 699
    that's a sweet thing :)






    how's THAT for judgement? :D
    It's all yellow.


  • little_wish
    little_wish England, The North Posts: 532
    Haha thanks for your opinion Yellow!
    20-04-2006 04-09-2006 05-09-2006 11-09-2006 16-09-2006 17-09-2006 18-06-2007 21-06-2007 26-06-2007 28-06-2007 17-08-2009 20-05-2010 21-05-2010

    "The live shows? Well, that's church on Sundays"

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