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my first words

oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
edited October 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
What will be my first words for the lovely lady,
She has captured my mind, my attention,
And the moment must soon be upon me to make an all important impression..

I can tell you that she walks with a grace so enticing,
And she talks with a voice so pleasing,
Always, never fails to increase my pulse..

I must soon untangle my tongue to let her know how I am feeling and if she is willing to get to know my crazy self...

How to put this into words?
Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
As she slams the door in his drunken face
And now he stands outside
And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
And his tears fall and burn the garden green
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    I'm sorry but that is terrible
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    BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    Originally posted by olderman
    What will be my first words for the lovely lady,
    She has captured my mind, my attention,
    And the moment must soon be upon me to make an all important impression..

    I can tell you that she walks with a grace so enticing,
    And she talks with a voice so pleasing,
    Always, never fails to increase my pulse..

    I must soon untangle my tongue to let her know how I am feeling and if she is willing to get to know my crazy self...

    How to put this into words?

    You just did.

    It is very possible her tongue is just as tangled. Maybe once you look into her eyes you will know. I think if we think too much about something like this, it will drive us mad. Don't worry. Don't think. Just feel.
    and if you want some extra help, there is always something bigger than yourself, standing right next to you, let it take the helm sometimes. it's got your deepest desire on its agenda and as soon as you know its in charge, than you become all powerful.
    love IS all we need. i understand.
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