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september tenth 2001

towertower Posts: 16
edited October 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
September 10th 2001

And on that day
No-one thought
No-one cared
They got in their cars
And drove to work
Drove away
Ordinary day

And they smiled
And they laughed
Snapshot photograph
Of normality
It seemed to be
No-one knew
Had not a clue
Ordinary Day

And they went home
Same as before
To families
To dinner, TV
Work tomorrow
Early to bed
Expecting tomorrow
To be just another
Ordinary day


it's a bit too simplistic in its rhyme and quick rhythm, anyone got any ideas on this one...?
hey, what the hell happened here?
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    BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    thinking in visuals not music really, looks like an excellent montaqe for setting up a mood in film.

    it is the TRUTH of us prior to 9.11

    Sadly, it is back to the sameold same old shit since then as well.
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    I think it's a bit too simplistic in its rhyme and quick rhythm ;)

    Very true piece, though. And haunting.
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    towertower Posts: 16
    i didn't see it as visual, but thinking of it it'd work..

    something like a typical surburbia family... office workers? maybe both parents, two kids, smiles when they come home etc etc etc

    and then flashes of the news on the day, no sound but just a flash, maybe on when the camera focuses on the parents...or for 'ordinary day'

    and at the end the kids waving the parents goodbye

    then a shot of the towers

    hmmm.

    this one's got me thinking now.

    :)

    (:p @ O'Reilly)
    hey, what the hell happened here?
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    Originally posted by tower
    September 10th 2001

    i was th

    And they went home
    Same as before
    To families
    To dinner, TV
    Work tomorrow
    Early to bed
    Expecting tomorrow
    To be just another
    Ordinary day


    it's a bit too simplistic in its rhyme and quick rhythm, anyone got any ideas on this one...?

    i was the same on sept 12
    "thiers still time to escape, youve got time to escape
    thiers still time so escape,,,,
    auuuhhheehhh yaeeahh "
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