i woke from touching you

Ok2Go
Ok2Go Posts: 102
edited February 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
this morning i woke from touching you
we layed together in my dream
i looked for the thing that did not fit
and found you

it seemed forbidden somehow
since you are so much younger than me
but i felt like a little girl too
it was pure bliss just feeling you

you walked the halls of my house
you passed my bedroom door
twisted the knob
and joined the brokeN hearts club

i want to talk to you in silence
while holding your hand with my words
prove to me what it is that i wrote
somewhere for someone

for just alittle while this morning you were mine
for just alittle while this evening i wont be fine
"and then, one Thursday, nearly two thousand years after one man had been nailed to a tree for saying how great it would be to be nice to people for a change, a girl sitting on her own in a small cafe in Rickmansworth suddenly realized what it was that had been going wrong in the world all this time, and she finally knew how the world could be made a good and happy place. This time it was right and no one had to get nailed to anything. Sadly, before she could get to a phone to tell anyone about it, a terrible stupid catastrophe occurred, and the idea was lost forever."

Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy
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  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Let your love no longer be forbidden
    Let it survive a dream's fleeting oeiliad
    or the laced tipped fingertouch of a shimmering
    pulse
    of imagined desire
    May it be real
    May the kiss be real as the thunder
    May bliss waves
    stretch on
    stretch outward
    beyond each last wave of ecstacy
    evermore
    evermore
    eternal and tasted as sea salt
    The histories of all universes

    evermore
  • Morbid Poet
    Morbid Poet Posts: 24
    Originally posted by Ok2Go

    it seemed forbidden somehow
    since you are so much younger than me
    but i felt like a little girl too
    it was pure bliss just feeling you

    please don't mind or take offense to my questioning buty by any chance are you a lesbian/bisexual??????
    its a bisexual thing

    I moved from the 9th to the 8th circle of hell. Before you know it I will be living in the first cirlce and I will own you.

    Just say NO to Bush.

    Vote Kerry! Save your freedom of speech and other various frredoms!

  • sevensins
    sevensins Posts: 887
    Originally posted by Morbid Poet
    please don't mind or take offense to my questioning buty by any chance are you a lesbian/bisexual??????

    yep she loves the uglyest girl in the world :D
    http://www.myspace.com/pleasetryagain

    http://www.myspace.com/alotalotbetweenus
  • Morbid Poet
    Morbid Poet Posts: 24
    Originally posted by sevensins
    yep she loves the uglyest girl in the world :D

    oh, well that's always fun.
    its a bisexual thing

    I moved from the 9th to the 8th circle of hell. Before you know it I will be living in the first cirlce and I will own you.

    Just say NO to Bush.

    Vote Kerry! Save your freedom of speech and other various frredoms!

  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Originally posted by sevensins
    yep she loves the ugliest girl in the world :D

    Morbid, the poem's about a bloke who is beautiful to his female love (the poem's speaker); and, indeed, there are some who would argue that a "beautiful" bloke would still make an "ugly" girl.....

    :D:D:D
  • Sound
    Sound Posts: 579
    you earn love

    trust your head around
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol

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