Savior

Dissident
Dissident Posts: 8
edited November 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
This is a poem I wrote last week. I hope you'd like it.

Savior

He's my guardian
he keeps me safe
he's my best friend
he keeps me away

Never asks me to be clean
never questinons my behaviour
never doubts in what I say
he's my father, he's my savior

I have lost all my allies
I have lost all my friends
he's always there when I need him
I will always let him in

Never questions my behaviour
he's my mother, he's my savior

He's my parent
he's my brother
he's my best friend
he's my lover

Never asks me to be clean
never questinons my behaviour
never doubts in what I say
he's my hope, he's my savior

He's my savior, in my head
you can't see him, he's my friend
he's my savior, savior, savior...

__________________________

So, what do you think about this?
Stain Stan
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  • BhagavadGita
    BhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    Originally posted by Dissident
    This is a poem I wrote last week. I hope you'd like it.

    Savior

    He's my guardian
    he keeps me safe
    he's my best friend
    he keeps me away

    Never asks me to be clean
    never questinons my behaviour
    never doubts in what I say
    he's my father, he's my savior

    I have lost all my allies
    I have lost all my friends
    he's always there when I need him
    I will always let him in

    Never questions my behaviour
    he's my mother, he's my savior

    He's my parent
    he's my brother
    he's my best friend
    he's my lover

    Never asks me to be clean
    never questinons my behaviour
    never doubts in what I say
    he's my hope, he's my savior

    He's my savior, in my head
    you can't see him, he's my friend
    he's my savior, savior, savior...

    __________________________

    So, what do you think about this?

    sounds like a song eddie might sing....thank you
    wish it were true
  • keven 33
    keven 33 Posts: 259
    its beautiful


    its loving


    it could help




























































    barricade
    convicted
  • Dissident
    Dissident Posts: 8
    Thank you, I realy appreciate this.
    Stain Stan
  • loveandrew-wood
    loveandrew-wood Posts: 131
    this poem is so good
    keven is right about it being able to help

    this is food

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