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Sonofsuns34Sonofsuns34 Posts: 7
edited November 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
This is a song written by me about me, my sister, and my grandmother. It is a slow acustic song similar to "off he goes"

Watch

A young man, too trusting
Sees nothing left to live for.
The rain fell on the window
It drowns the breaking of his heart
He just lost his first true love
he doesn't know where to start...
He hides all of his pain
And looks as she leaves...
He has lost all that he has gained
Like dust blowing in the breeze...

Oh he watched her go
His pain and torment she’ll never know
Now he is thinking of a better day
But before it comes he fades away

A little girl, innocent as snow
Loves her mom and dad..
But the fighting late at night
Drowns out the sobbing from her room
She knows what he does isn't right
But she can’t clear the gloom
She hides her pain
And looks as he packs his bags
He’s out the door and out of her life
Quicker then the wind

Oh she watched him go
For reasons and treasons she’ll never know
If she could she would make him stay
but in her memory slowly he fades away

A Great Grandma, decades old
Gets lonelier by day..
But The visits now and then
always make her smile
Her family and friends
Make her happy for a while
She feels so lonely by herself at night
She misses her true love
and wonders how he’s been.

Oh she watched them go
The joy they brought to her they’ll never know
Time takes its toll, her eyes turn to gray
She lays down in her bed and slowly fades away.


Hope you like it...
Saw things so much clearer....
She dont want me after i have flown away.... into the sun burn....
You ever hear the story of Mr. faded glory?
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