wishes.....

Ali
Ali Posts: 2,621
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Passion plays pivitol parts
in ineptity, inside
whispering willows waiting wildly,
for forgotton flusters & forboden


wishes.





allison vigh
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005

"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"

PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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  • Righteous Jammer
    Righteous Jammer Posts: 509
    "Wish I was the pedal brake you depended on"
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    I like how this one rolls off the tongue! :) I LOVE poems where multiple words beginning with the same letter are used in a row. It just makes them sound so good when you read them.
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Ali
    Ali Posts: 2,621
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    I like how this one rolls off the tongue! :) I LOVE poems where multiple words beginning with the same letter are used in a row. It just makes them sound so good when you read them.
    Thanks BE!!!!Youre a doll:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • twin2
    twin2 Posts: 894
    This one has a very airy feel to it. I like it too.
  • Ali
    Ali Posts: 2,621
    Muchos Gracias senors and senoritas...

    QUESO ANYONE?;)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?

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