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the unseen
the unseen Posts: 372
edited November 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
he enters
her room
walks to the bed
crawls in with her
strokes her hair
asks her to rub
his magic lamp
says the genie
will come
making her
wishes
come true
the genie
always comes
but never grants
her wishes
for daddy
still enters
her room
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  • CranMalReign
    CranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    Originally posted by the unseen
    he enters
    her room
    walks to the bed
    crawls in with her
    strokes her hair
    asks her to rub
    his magic lamp
    says the genie
    will come
    making her
    wishes
    come true
    the genie
    always comes
    but never grants
    her wishes
    for daddy
    still enters
    her room

    Oh my god... I had a fear this was going in that direction, but somehow it still caught me by surprise.

    I have similar offerings, but opt not to share them because I, like so many others, wish I could just look away and have this sort of problem disappear.

    I'm dispicable for that. And you're commendable for rubbing my nose in it.
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  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Oh daddy dearest
    When that song plays
    On the radio
    I try to forget you
    But you're there to remind me
    To tell me not to tell
    To put me through this hell
    And these moments
    They just replay
    And replay
    And replay
    And replay
    And you'll pay
    And oh how you will pay
    Someday
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • CranMalReign
    CranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    OK... guess I'll break my long held silence (or something)...

    ~~~

    Daddy Dear
    January 14, 2003

    Where
    has the breath
    gone
    ?

    it feeds the screams
    powers the fists
    explodes in cursing
    and blouse tearing

    chases up the steps
    bottle to his lips
    hand to that ass
    the hate
    the power
    boiling out his eyeballs
    when Mommy's not around

    aerobic cowardice
    horrific manliness

    it pulls the blinds
    so strong
    so pure
    it breaks the bones
    the will the soul
    metabolizes fear
    into pleasure
    love
    into
    nightmares

    turns red the blood
    on the sheets
    thrusts the sobs
    whispers lies

    his little pet
    scoundrel dog
    yelping dirty bitch

    She takes it
    in
    again;
    daddy's big secret

    Where
    has her breath
    gone
    under his thick
    black shadow
    ?

    She holds it
    swipe to swipe
    night to night
    She holds it

    until
    it's all
    over
    until She can sleep
    again
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  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by CranMalReign
    OK... guess I'll break my long held silence (or something)...

    ~~~

    Daddy Dear
    January 14, 2003

    Where
    has the breath
    gone
    ?

    it feeds the screams
    powers the fists
    explodes in cursing
    and blouse tearing

    chases up the steps
    bottle to his lips
    hand to that ass
    the hate
    the power
    boiling out his eyeballs
    when Mommy's not around

    aerobic cowardice
    horrific manliness

    it pulls the blinds
    so strong
    so pure
    it breaks the bones
    the will the soul
    metabolizes fear
    into pleasure
    love
    into
    nightmares

    turns red the blood
    on the sheets
    thrusts the sobs
    whispers lies

    his little pet
    scoundrel dog
    yelping dirty bitch

    She takes it
    in
    again;
    daddy's big secret

    Where
    has her breath
    gone
    under his thick
    black shadow
    ?

    She holds it
    swipe to swipe
    night to night
    She holds it

    until
    it's all
    over
    until She can sleep
    again

    Glad you broke the silence---no reason we shouldn't let ALL of our feelings out on issues such as this. Silence doesn't make it go away.
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • lifeisworth
    lifeisworth Posts: 186
    We set ourselves at the gates of our daughters
    The moment they are born
    We set ourselves to vigilant watches
    O'er mangers where innocence lay
    Yet unborn
    Where innocence lay sleeping
    like a mercenary
    with no conscience.

    Speak as they might
    The current themes of the day
    Touting sex and divastarfire at five
    We hold

    We chuckle,
    "Absolutely Miss Princess,
    Miss Divastarfire,
    Back to bed.
    Here's your teddy bear
    And your Hello Kitty flashlight...
    Come on, off you go."
    And turn and let the furrow
    Command our brow

    As our eyes scan the horizon
    For the filthy rotten fuck
    Who'd dare set an eye
    On our hope
    Nosotros nunca escuchamos la voz adentro
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by lifeisworth
    We set ourselves at the gates of our daughters
    The moment they are born
    We set ourselves to vigilant watches
    O'er mangers where innocence lay
    Yet unborn
    Where innocence lay sleeping
    like a mercenary
    with no conscience.

    Speak as they might
    The current themes of the day
    Touting sex and divastarfire at five
    We hold

    We chuckle,
    "Absolutely Miss Princess,
    Miss Divastarfire,
    Back to bed.
    Here's your teddy bear
    And your Hello Kitty flashlight...
    Come on, off you go."
    And turn and let the furrow
    Command our brow

    As our eyes scan the horizon
    For the filthy rotten fuck
    Who'd dare set an eye
    On our hope

    Hi lifeisworth! I could see the mom giving her little girl a loving pat as she sent her darling off to bed and then I could see her looking out into the deep dark night, furrowed brow, arms crossed, pursed lips, searching for demons.
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • lifeisworth
    lifeisworth Posts: 186
    yah


    i'm da mominator
    Nosotros nunca escuchamos la voz adentro
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by lifeisworth
    yah


    i'm da mominator

    Well then, she's a lucky little girl!! :D

    And you have definately got your work cut out for you, mominator.
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • lifeisworth
    lifeisworth Posts: 186
    :)

    we'll be fine :)
    Nosotros nunca escuchamos la voz adentro

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